Friday fictioneers is here. I’m a tad late today but all for good reason. Friendship, sushi and wine!
Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, our Hostess with the Mostest, has challenged us to write a 100-word story with beginning, middle and end and it must stand alone. So here I am, faced with a fabulous photo by Sandra Crook. Do you feel like trying it out? It’s a lot of fun – and challenging too!
Click on the Blue frog to add your submission or to simply read what all the other wonderful writers have seen in this photo!
© Sandra Crook
Word Count: 100
Genre: Sort of fiction
Take the Leap
She was a strong woman.
It sometimes seemed like nothing was too insurmountable for her.
Resilient became the adjective du jour to describe her.
She just took things in stride, moving one foot in front of the other, regardless of what obstacles were presented.
Through it all, she never totally believed in herself, believing she was incapable. She allowed others to take the reins and lead her where they would.
It would be so easy to choose this same modus vivendi. She wouldn’t have to stress about a thing.
Not this time.
She was finally ready to take her leap.
Nicely ambiguous. Being a strong woman, I hope she’s not going to take that particular leap. Good job, Dale.
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Thank you, Sandra. Definitely not that leap!
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A dark tale that might have light at the end!
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Yes! Thanks for visiting!
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My pleasure xx
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Nicely built and then left us in mid-air!
Cool tale.
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Thank you, kind sir.
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Dear Dale,
Friendship, sushi and wine are all excellent reasons for being late. 😉 Three of my favorite things.
Not sure who she is but I have an idea. From the upbeat tone of this, I’m guessing she isn’t leaping off the cliff. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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You’d be guessing right…
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Very sad. Hope she doesn’t do it. Good stuff.
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It’s not sad and not that kind of leap. But love that it can be interpreted as such.
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Time to start believing in herself. Nice story!
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Yes it is time. Thank you, Ali!
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Yeah, new beginnings!
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yeah!
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Well, you led us to the cliff, didn’t you – and then, you asked us to believe that it was a leap into a part of herself that she had not trusted before – ok. But golly gee, leapin’ lizards, Annie. There’s a whole lot of leaping goin’ on.
😉 Randy
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Ha ha! Randy! I didn’t mean to stress you out, 🙂
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I see much hope – good luck to her.
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Thank you. I do too!
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I like the indeterminate nature of this.
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Well thank you, Mick!
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I hope she leaps and soars.
Tracey
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Oh so do I, Tracey! Thanks!
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hope she lands on something soft
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Or something exciting!
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It wasn´t a leap of faith I guess…did the woman jumped from the cliff? Liked very much the storie
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Thank you, Charly! I like to think it was towards new adventures!
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sometimes it takes years to earn your wings. i guess that time has come for her. good story.
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Thank you, Plaridel. Each thing in its time!
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There are those leaps that let you soar for new targets.. and I hope this is such a leap
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Absolutely!
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The most life changing leaps are leaps of faith. Sometimes you don’t have all the answers. Nor a safety net or a back up plan. That’s when the leaps are the scariest and the most rewarding. Jump baby!
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Ya baby! Thanks xoxo
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Wow. Wow. Wow.
One more time…wow wow wow!
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Awww…you are a sweetheart! xoxo
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I love that she is embracing change at this stage of her life.
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Thank you. I think she is.
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I have confidence she is a good jumper. Sometimes we just need to believe in ourselves as much as others believe in us. Well done.
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Thank you very much, Russell!
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A piece of fiction for those important but scary life choices. Could be just the nudge I need right now. Inspiring piece!
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Glad to inspire! I’m there too!
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Life is full of leaps of faith, which has to beat mundane any time!
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Oh for sure, Liz!
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Dale, sometimes I think it would be nice to be taken care. I used to envy those kids going to day camp at the YWCA and wished they had one for us adults. 🙂 But I don’t think it would work for me. I would probably rebel or turn into mush. I’m thinking you are going to have some grand adventures. Enjoy the leap.
Lily
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I know! I bet you there are some out there!
I do thank you, Lily. I am hoping so.
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If you never jump, you’ll never learn to fly. This not so mysterious strong woman will turn out to excel at flying. Beutiful story.
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Thanks so much G!
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I enjoyed the ambiguous ending. Judging from your replies to comments, it’s not quite as dark a story as I might have thought. I’m glad it’s not that kind of jump.
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Definitely not that kind!
Thanks for visiting !
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Does it work this time?? 😯
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Well, I’ve just had to approve this one and the one after. I’m going to my spam now… bloody hell. This happened to another friend of mine!
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Apparently, yes! 😆
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I “done” approved ya’all! 😉
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😀 Are y’all from the south….of Montreal 😉
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Hee hee…you got it. South shore of Montreal! Been ding with Texas on the phone however! 😉
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😛
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Nice one! I would want to see someone fly off that rock. I think she’s going to do just fine. Good for her!
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It is not off that rock she will fly…
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No, not really. 🙂
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🙂
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I hope it a new beginning not the start of the end! Great piece.
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Oh for sure a new beginning!
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Good for her. Odd that she appeared so strong and was not. But it’s important she make the try before it’s too late, even if it’s a leap off the rock. Very human story.
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Often times the strongest ones put themselves aside and then doubt (for no good reason)
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Very nice story or parable about a woman coming of independent strength, Quite a metaphoric story. 🙂
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Thank you, Susan
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Good story. It seems she’s finally ready to make her own decisions. That’s a great beginning. Good creative use of the prompt, Dale. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Oh thank you, Suzanne. I’m truly glad you enjoyed it! I think she is ready to stand on her own two feet (or leap from said two feet!)
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This is a very inspirational piece, we all have our obstacles to conquer.
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Thank you. I truly believe we do.
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Some leaps are worth taking ! Good one.
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Why thank you, kind lady!
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A woman coming into her own. A very nice build up to the funal line.
Isadora 😎
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A heartfelt thank you.
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