Welcome, welcome, my friends, to Friday Fictioneers. Yes, yes, I know, it is Wednesday. What can I say? Some of us in this group like to confuse!
This week, Rochelle, our lovely host, has given us an image by her main squeeze, Jan W. Fields. Oh the directions I could have gone with this. ‘Twas hard to choose but sometimes, you just have to let the fingers do the talking!
Her story is fabulous as are the other participants’. Please do go have a read and, should you be willing to try your hand at this 100-word craft-thing, please do. Click on the blue frog for instructions and whatnot!
As you leave the house for your walk with your faithful dog, the hum of the highway drones on in the distance and you note your steps beating a rhythm, highlighted by the dog’s collar tinkling like the high notes of a piano. Before long, the wind picks up and the denuded branches bang together adding a back beat. You notice, as you near the park, the swish of the marcescent leaves like brushes on a drum. Approaching the river, the steady flow beneath the ice replaces the hum of the highway, the birds’ chirping adding high notes.
Nature’s orchestra!
Dear Dale,
An a one and a two…yep I could hear this. Atmospheric and lyrical, I enjoyed the concert. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, kind lady! I left for my walk, composing a totally different story in my head and well, this happened.
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Well done!
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Thanks Resa!
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It’s all Rock n Roll, babe!
Loved how you pulled it all together.
And marcescent is the word of the day!
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Awww. Really? Thanks so much.
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Oh, yeah! And now the old linguaphile has to go look it up. Rapture! 🙂
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Oh yes indeed!!
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MARCESCENT…curious…I can’t find definition in any of my dictionaries. French? A beautiful word none-the-less.
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AHA!!! Gorgeous description of “frond like leaves”. YES…word of the day, for sure. Impressive. You amaze me. Again. Again. Clever Girl…
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The funny thing is…it was not the word I was looking for! It was the one I found, searching for the other (still remaining a mystery, I fear…)
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Use Dictionary.com!!!
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I was struck by “marcescent,” as well. This story has such a great rhythm!
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Ah thanks, Merril!!
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wow, it sounded like poetry. you must be feeling very inspired today. 🙂
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I thank you so much, Plaridel! I was indeed!
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A new word to learn and a way to attend a free symphony – Great image and sounds in this piece.
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Thank you, Ansumani (was a new word for me too!)
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Lovely.
Nature does play some delightful tunes.
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Well thank you!
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I love this. I encourage my mindfulness mentees to carry out ‘listening meditations’ when they walk.
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Thank you! It is the only way I can meditate, quite frankly!
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“Marcescent” Got to find a way to use that today. Nice one Dale! Good take.
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Isn’t it a great word? So happy I “found” it! And thank you, I am so happy you like!
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Marcescent? Heck, I had to look up the word! You must be smart, too! I’ve got the feeling your walks had a bit of influence for this story. Meanwhile, the storm I mention is approaching … it seems to be trending south, so forecast models don’t agree with small amount ranging from 1-15 cm. Good Morning!
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Hey, I found it when looking up another word! No smarter than the rest, I can assure you. They may indeed have had something to do with it…
Hopefully the storm doesn’t hit too badly! What do forecasters know anyway!
Good morning to you!
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Forecasters will tell us what’s outside once it gets here.
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Exactly… I could do the job!
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On the other hand, I claim forecast how science works … gather data, make a prediction … gather new data, change the prediction … rinse and repeat.
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Ha ha ha!!
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Cooking assignments today?
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Nope. Had some yesterday for a new customer. Today, it’s Pier 1 – I told my boss it was my last week yet I’m booked for next week!
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Dale,
Ah ha … they want to keep you … but if it didn’t work for you, so be it.
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Well I AM fabulous… 😛
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That a way!
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I love this, Dale. It’s so melodious — a great symphony, indeed 🙂
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Awww. Thank you, Sarah!! So very happy you enjoyed!
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Wonderful! I love the sounds I hear in the words. 🙂
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Thanks, Vivi!!
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This has a delightful rhythm and reminds me of my Sunday walk down at the harbor with the wind whistling through line on boats and lines tapping on masts. The sound stopped me cold and I stood still to listen. I think the fisherman thought I was insane, the sound is so much a part of their lives.
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I love when sounds capture our attention, like that!
Thank you, Alicia!
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Lovely piece, and I also learned a word. And I learned “marcescent” too!
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Hee hee… Pretty cool word, eh? I discovered it myself looking for something else!
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Don’t forget the word “denuded”
I’m sure that got your attention.
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Ha ha!!!
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Music is all around us if we listen in and pay attention. This is great, Dale! I like where you took this.
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Thanks, Any. It’s so true. All we have to do is listen!
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Lovely, and great take on the prompt! I admit to having had to look up a couple of the words 🙂
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😉 john the club! So did I!
Lovely you enjoyed it!
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Ahh…nature’s orchestra! Dale, this is so lyrical and beautiful. You took me away from the noise of everyday life to the music of nature, and for that I thank you 🙂 xo
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Ahhh… thank you for listening! 🙂 xo
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Sometimes we do live inside a symphony don’t we? – this is a wonderful, to see the world I have to say. It would be great even in minor.
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Ah thank you, Björn! I really believe we do!
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Beautiful music Dale 🙂
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Thank you, Andrea!
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I’ve often heard the phrase, Stop and smell the roses. We need to invoke the other 4 senses as well. I love to spend time in the woods listening to God’s orchestra.
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I agree, Russell!
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This is lovely. A beautiful orchestra, and changing with the four seasons. I love the word marcescent, thought I was the only one who had to look it up.
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Danke! Hey… I looked it up!! 😉
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Very good Dale. I wanted to snap along.
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Thanks, Dawn!
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Beautifully written, Dale. Love the bit about the music of the collar!
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Awww. Thanks, Jean!
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I heard every sound with you there, Dale. Well done!
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Thanks, Tom!/so very glad you liked!
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Very evocative. You capture the richness of the world of sound, out in the open, away from the intrusion of highway noise.
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Thank you, Margaret!
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Your story has a beautiful lyrical quality to it!
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Thank you! So happy you enjoyed.
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And if we tale the time to notice it, it’s all free too! Loverly!
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Lovely combination and description of sounds from nature. Your walk certainly was inspiring. Well done, Dale. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you, Patricia!
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Really nice feel to this and I walked beside you to the river! Love marcescent – never heard the word before, got to use it today somehow.
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Yay! I love the sound of it too and am so happy to have “taught” it to so many readers!
Thanks – so happy you enjoyed
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What a beauty, you made my day!
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Ahh thank you so much!!
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Very nicely done! I love all the sound details, described so eloquently.
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Ahh rhank you!
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