Don’t ask me why I went where I did but, I, ahem, went down a different path this week…
Should you wish to join in on our crazy adventure, please click on Rochelle’s link for the hows and whats. If you wish to read other participants’, just click on the blue frog below!
Got some creative crit and decided it was well-founded. I re-wrote the story as a result…
Word Count: 100
It was supposed to be for a light lunch. Neither was hungry, so they had a drink: water for her, soda for him.
They sat at a table and exchanged pleasantries. He asked questions, his gaze intense and she felt like he was reading more than her words. She felt the tension build and squirmed in discomfort, feeling totally exposed, yet strangely excited.
Before she knew how, he made her feel things she never imagined.
As he left her, dazed, yet lit up, he said: “You’ll see, this will play out in your head all day.”
He was not kidding.