It’s Wednesday, for a couple of hours, anyway. What does that mean? It means Friday Fictioneers! Our lovely hostess, Rochelle, blogger at Addicted to Purple, artist and published author, (you really MUST read her books!) has provided her own picture as the photo prompt. Isn’t it lovely? What does it make you think of? Have you a story you’d like to share with us? Click on the link to Rochelle’s blog for the hows and whats. Not sure about adding your own but would like to read other interpretations? Click on the Blue Frog below.
Genre: Not Fiction
Word Count: 100
Austin
Today is your birthday.
I can barely wrap my head around the fact I could be the mother of a twenty-year-old. Yes, I am way old enough, but still.
What is the proper term anyway? I was your mother, you are no longer here. Am I still?
I was pregnant for the first Mother’s Day but you were gone before the second one. I never got to celebrate.
Time keeps moving forward, just like the tide keeps coming in. Life is good. You have two brothers and I am (still) a mother.
I miss you. Daddy doesn’t have to anymore.
- Austin, 7 months
- Mick & Austin, Together Again
Poignant!
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Thank you!
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Who knew a 100 words could express so much? Beautifully written and very touching. Hugs to you, my friend.
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Awww…thank you, my friend. xo
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You’re still a mother, a loving and strong one.
Hugs to you.
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Thank you, kind lady!
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A touching tribute. I’m so sorry for your loss.
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Thank you, Josslyn.
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You’re welcome.
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Beautifully done, Dale.
The last line brought tears to these cynical old eyes.
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Merci my friend.
That’s because deep down…
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Dear Dale,
As soon as saw the title I knew I was in for a tearful read. You are generous in sharing your sorrows and triumphs with straightforward honesty. Well done is an understatement.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I was happy to be able to say a little something to honour his birthday. Thanks for the inspiring photo!
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Isn’t it odd, but true, that pain is more powerfully evoked by simple disapassionate language than by the big words? Well done!
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I didn’t realise while writing it, but yes. Thank you, Neil.
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How very sad, but how beautifully written.
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Thank you, Clare.
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Beautiful yet sad.
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Thanks, Alistair
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This is so beautiful Dale,so sad but beautiful. Happy together father and son. I admire you so much love to you and your boys . xxxx
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Thank you most kind Willow! xoxo
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Such a beautiful little baby, Dale. Even after many years, there’s no getting over it. 😥
May Austin’s memory and your husband’s be for a blessing and the God of all comfort be with you.
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Thank you, Kent. He was indeed…
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what a tribute. he’ll remain alive for as long as you remember.
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Yes he will, Plaridel! Thanks!
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Not everything makes me cry, but this certainly did. I so relate to you Dale. I know your pain, and stories like yours make me appreciate the time I had with my own son. I wish you all good things. You deserve the happiness you seem to have now. Patsye
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Ahh Patsye…. you are sweet and I’m sorry you also lived through this…
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Respect and more for you.
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Thank you, Michael!
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So sad, but a beautiful tribute. Thanks for sharing.
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Danke Gabriele.
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This was deeply moving, and beautifully written, Dale.
Your double-heartbreak makes my heart ache.
Despite all the travails and pain you’ve had to undergo. you seem so filled with life. May that carry you through all of your life.
And please know that I’m sending warm thoughts and hugs your way.
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Thank you so much, Vijaya. I truly am filled with life and feel blessed. xoxo
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❤ You're welcome, dear Dale!
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This really touched me. Many people who’ve experience this kind of pain tend to bury it deep inside. But by speaking of it, who knows how many lives may be touched and the healing salve it offers to those who feel so alone in their grief. Thank you for sharing. God Bless.
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Thank you very much, Russell. I hope it does. It helped me to write and talk about it!
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So sad. And so honest. Well done Dale.
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Thank you, Thom
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Deeply touching. The last line is a perfect ending. ❤
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Why thank you so much, Vivi! xo
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What a beautiful child, Dale. I’m so sorry for your loss. You’ll always be his mother. How wonderful you were gifted with two more sons. Thank you for having the courage to share your losses with us in the hope of helping others. I’m sure you have. ❤ — Suzanne
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Awww… thank YOU, Suzanne. I love to share. It helps me too
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What a sweet little button he was. You have come through so much and there is that smile of yours! A lovely tribute to all your boys and their Dad too.
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Thank you, kind lady!
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What a beautiful child! The last line doubled the heart-break. I admire your strength and resilience Dale.
I didn’t read your story first before writing mine – but somehow this picture took us to the same shores of grief.
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Thank you. He was a character! He was Austin the terrible in the first 2 months at the hospital. A sweet, happy child for the 5 months at home…
We do.what we must.
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Dale that was beautiful. You’ve had so much loss and sadness my heart goes out to you. It is nice to think of Austin and his Dad together despite the huge holes they have left in your life.
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Thank you, Irene. I’ve had much joy as well.
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Well, that moved me to tears, Dale. I’m so sorry for your loss. I wish I could you give a big hug. Of course, you will always be his mother and this he knows. And the bright side is that they are together again. Thanks for sharing your story with us here. My heart goes out to you. xoxo
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Thank you, Ms Amy. xoxo
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Very touching and moving. I’m sorry for what you’ve had to go through.
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Thanks, Perry. Part of life!
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That was such a moving tribute. A beautiful memorial and gorgeous photos. You must have some precious memories.
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I do indeed, Margaret! Thank you.
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Thank you for sharing this with us, it is a very moving tribute.
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Thank you, Freya!
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So beautiful and poignant Dale.
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Thank you, Andrea
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Dale, it was hard to hit Like and I didn’t read the comments… this is gorgeous, and heart breaking, and utterly breath taking. I have thought of you so much, since the death of your husband; I had no idea that you have survived such deep loss. Big, virtual hug to you… Motherhood is not counted in the days we love and hold them; you are a mama always.
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Thank You, Dawn. Such wonderful words sent my way!
There have been challenges, no doubt, which definitely help one to appreciate the little and big.things. Thanks so much.
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Beautifully written tribute that must touch the heart of anyone who has suffered a loss.
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Thank you, Liz
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This is so sad,, I had heard about you loss of you husband, but a son as well… I admire how you can go on, and to share this sorrow with us.. you move me to tears.
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Thank you Björn.
It is part of life. Others have had it worse than me… we just must move forward.
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Dale, what can I say? That is one heart-wrenching tribute. Your ability to smile after suffering two such tragic losses, puts the petty grumblers to shame.
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Well thank you, Sarah. It’s all about choices, I say!
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So sad.
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But much joy, too.
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Oh Dale, deeply touching because of the honesty with which it is expressed.
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Thank you so much, Siobhan
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