After a looooooong break, here I am, back at Friday Fictioneers. I so missed you all and I missed coming up with 100-word stories for these past six months! I could not seem to find balance. The hours were long and weird so any time off was spent, well, off! It would not be fair to write a story and not be able to read yours and respond to any comments appropriately. I felt it best to come back when I could fully participate. Now is the time. The golf club I work at closes in 25 days, the hours we work are much reduced (thank GAWD!) and some semblance of normal is returning. For those of you who have not given up on me, I give thanks; for those who have, I totally understand!
So, without further ado, here is my rusty return! Thank you c.e.ayr for this photo. It sure got me thinking! For those of you who wish to join in with your 100-word story, please click on the blue frog to add your link. To find out the hows and whats, just click here for Rochelle’s instructions. She’s been hosting this here shindig for quite some time and is a fair leader!
What I Know For Sure
Word count: 100
Genre: Fiction (sorta)
She sat, quietly, on the empty terrace, looking out at the water before her. “It’s good to just sit still now and again,” she thought.
Her mind turned to the future. “I wish I had plans as clear as the reflections before me. Not a ripple, not a blur,”, she thought. “No wondering what was next, knowing exactly what needed to be done.”
Then again, how dull! What excitement was there in that? If everything was planned out to the last detail, there would be no room for spontaneity, for surprises.
“That, I know for sure, is just not me.
Loved the line, “Not a ripple. Not a blur.” Beautiful.
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Thank you, kind lady!
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Dear Dale,
Nope, not at all rusty. Viva spontaneity! I could hear your laughter in this one. Not to mention I’m so happy to see you back amongst the squares.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
So happy to be back amongst the squares. And thank you so much. Yes. I never could plan a dang thing…
Dale
xo
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Oh, I long to have time to sit still and just think about things too! But as you say, life’s more interesting when there’s lots going on. Nice little scene, well written. 🙂
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Thank you, Iain! I’m not ino dull and organised. ..
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Lovely to have you back Dale. Missed you. Good one.
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Why thank you, Ms Sandra! So very glad to be back!
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So happy to see you back! Your stories always make me feel good.
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Aw shucks… thank you, sweet lady!
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Great to have that spontaneity in your life – makes life very interesting indeed! Great tale
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Thank you, Lynn! Glad you liked!
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My pleasure 🙂
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Dale! Welcome back! I was so happy to see your comment on my story I had to come to the froggie and see if your face showed up in the squares. This story is not all rusty. Well done.
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Thanks so much, Alicia!
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Great to have you back Dale, I do love this reflective piece… I think we need a good mix of plans and surprises…
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Thanks, Björn! So nice to find out one is missed!
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Yeah. It’s always nice to see your smiling avatar.
Trying to predict my future is like staring at the Mississippi River after a big rain. But that’s all right. I just get out there on my Huck Finn raft and try to hang on.
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Awww thanks, Russell!
Yep. Much better to go with the flow!
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Nice little snippet of someone’s thoughts/daydreaming. I’d prefer a ripple-free future myself!
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It could be nice…
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No return is ever rusty. I just did it too. And, think of the surprises awaiting you in 25 days.
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25 days? The end of my golf contract? I cannot wait!!
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Applause for knowing yourself! Welcome back.
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Thanks Ms Vivi!!
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Got to love a surprise… well, i dont! Ha ha i love plans
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Plans are not bad – I just suck at making them!
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Nor me either!
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No plans for you? 😉
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No not right now, just go with the flow . 🙂
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good for her. 🙂
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Yes indeed! Thanks, Plaridel!
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What a beautiful, beautiful story. I was there. Good to have you back!
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Oh thank you! Glad to be back!
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A life without spontaneity would be a very dull life indeed. It’s good to read one of your 100-word stories after all this time. You’re setting me a good example, and prompting me to return to FF soon, as well. Like you, I haven’t posted a story for a few months, as I wouldn’t have had the time to read other people’s stuff.
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It would be unbearably dull foe me!
Happy to be back!!
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Nice return! Happy to see you and your dimples back.
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Awww shucks! Thanks, Perry!
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I ditto Perry.
And what a nice writing tone to set us up for that wry smile that spreads across our faces in reading your last words… that is just not me. 😉
Randy
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Well jeez! I’m so touched! Thank you, Randy!
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Wow! Poetic in its way. Italy was DEFINITELY an inspirational trip.
Five out of five memberships to R. Gayer’s Procrastinators Club (that is, if they ever get around to scheduling the meetings …)
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Ha ha!! Thank you, kind sir!
That it was. BIG time!
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Great! I’m MIA this week. I have had many projects to do and I can’t think of anything. Bummer. 😦
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I’m the last one who will.criticise that! I was gone for months!
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Wish I could go for months … (sigh).
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Nooo…. I was working stupid, crazy, exhausting hours… I couldn’t even think, much less create a story!
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Wow! What kind of work do you do that takes you to Italy anyway?
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Work? Work had nothing to do with me going to Italy. A love for Italian food and wine sent me… 😉 And a loooooong-held dream!
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So, then … what was his name? 😉
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I wish…
And I look too much like a local! 😎
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😀
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There something to be said for spontaneity, Dale. I’m sure life is much fuller with this attitude and perspective. Welcome back! I missed you.
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Thank you,.Amy! A little or a lot of spontaneity…😉
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This is lovely. My favourite line is “I wish I had plans as clear as the reflections before me”, but a bit of spontaneity is always great.
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Couldn’t agree with you more! Adds spice to a life!
Thank you
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I love the sense of hopefulness, contentment and mischief in this one Dale 🙂
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Thanks, Andrea! It’s nice to get the creative juices going again!
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Wonderful read, glad you are back with Friday Fictioneers. I am trying to get back to the photographs and poems on my site too and decided to give our new pup his own blog (https://lifeofbenjii.wordpress.com/).
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I saw that! Will be catching up on my reading. Will check it out for sure!
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I wonder what events this narrator has in her past and future. She reaches a relatable conclusion.
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I think she has had her share of experiences – enough to know herself!
Thanks for commenting!
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Kind of makes you want to skip stones, doesn’t it?
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It does, indeed!!
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Your character is as endearing as her story.
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Thanks, Dawn! Sweet of you to say…
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This is lovely. I’m with you on the predictable=boring. I do like a quiet life, but too much planning takes the fun away.
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Indeed!! Balance, I say!
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Welcome back, Dale. It never hurts to take a break now and again. Things can get dull though if there’s nothing interesting happening. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you, Suzanne!
It was mostly involuntary!
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I missed this one, Gale. But, then again, I’m so behind on commenting that it’s not surprising. Welcome back ….
I love spontaneity but surprises are no-no’s. : )
Isadora 😎
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Thanks Isadora… it’s Dale by the way! I know it’s only a typo!
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Yes, – my spell check which I did not hire – has his way with me. Notice, I said his as in he – that’s because men never listen. I told him I do not need help. : O
LOLOL …sorry about that. Mia Culpa !!!
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😊
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