Good Wednesday evening, my Peeps! Was not at all sure where I would go with this one. Then Rochelle said one word and that was it. I knew exactly where I was going! Thanks, Rochelle! Not only does she host this weekly shindig, she unknowingly gives us a little noodge when we need it!
Come and play with us by adding your own version of a 100-word story to go with this lovely photo supplied by Sarah Ann Hall. Click on the blue frog to add your link. If you want to know the how-tos, just click on Rochelle‘s name.
The Right Choice
They are spectacular, don’t you think?
Yes, I do… but don’t you think they are a tad umm too fancy?
Well, why not? Doesn’t he deserve something fancy? Something to show how much we love him?
Yes, he does deserve the best but truly, it does not represent him at all. Think about it.
He’d laugh. I can just hear him say: ‘Look at them, getting all fancy-pants over me!’
Lord knows he had a sense of humour. However, none of these will do. THIS, however is perfect!
An old COKE BOTTLE? You can’t be serious!
I most certainly am.
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For those of you not in the know… a few years before my husband, Mick, passed away, he presented me with an old glass Coke bottle (he collected Coca Cola stuff) and told me he wanted it to be used for his urn one day. We never expected it to happen that quickly but I did respect his wishes…
Dear Dale
I wish I’d gotten to know Mick. The coke bottle does seem fitting and says a lot. Love the wit and pathos intermingled. Well done.
Hugs and Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
You woulda loved him. Everyone loved him. He was a character and a half. Seriously, who else would choose a wife crazy enough to grant his wishes?
Thanks, my friend,
Dale
xo
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Wow! Both stories are touching: the fiction one in an amusing way and the personal anecdote brings a pang along with a smile.
How are you doing with Nanowrimo? I had to drag myself tot he computer this morning — an out-of-the-blue urge to sew something wanted to nudge me in the wrong direction. 🙂
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I’m glad they both touched you (did I send you the link of the post I wrote after he died?)
Wrote 1700+ words… but in truth, I edited a first chapter from last year’s attempt.
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I don’t think you sent it. As to word count, I did over 1500 plus another 1100 back-story for reference — and realized I don’t have much of a story. Nothing exciting happens yet.
According to Jerry Jenkins you must “plunge your character into terrible trouble ASAP.” Mine are just taking the train. Maybe I should derail it. (Either the train of the story. 😉 )
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Ahhh. Then here you go… https://adelectablelife.com/2014/12/29/a-little-heart-to-heart/
Then you did better than me! As for plunging your character… you are the writer….😉
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oh wow – sorry about your untimely loss – and this is beautiful – my spouse would want something like that – not a coke bottle but something fun like that 🙂 and how weird that he would do that – also great way to integrate the prompt (and you are early this week – whoa)
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Thank you, Yvette. Life is good at sending us curveballs. I’m so very glad you enjoyed this. I say why not? Sure got people laughing and talking – just what he would have wanted.
Not too bad, eh? (Timing, that is)
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Well I think there is a show where someone’s remains are in a coffee can and my hubs said he wants something like that – to keep things light – hm
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Yes. I agree with him!
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🙂
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You sent us a curved ball with this.
Touching.
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Thank you. ☺
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Ohhh Dale. How touching. How zany. How lovely. I am laughing and crying. Crying and laughing. You two must have had a whale of a time. Barrels and barrels full of laughs. thanks for writing your story and sharing another snippet of your life.
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I am so glad you are. We did. I.can honestly say we spent most of our time laughing, even during tough times.
Thanks for enjoying it.
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What a lovely legacy he left you with, left us with. 😂🤣
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😁
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The right decision – something fitting to the person. Lovely.
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Thank you. So glad you think so.
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heartfelt and lovely….. simply perfect.
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Thank you so much!
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Touching and glorious. I shall raise a glass of Coke to Mick 🙂
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Thank you, kind sir! He would appreciate that!
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Beautiful Dale, made me smile 🙂
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So very glad it did, my friend!
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What a wonderful story, Dale. I read and commented on the linked post too. I’ll toast Mick with my next rum & coke.
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Thank you, Russell. I just responded. So kind of you to go check (I almost put the link in my post…)
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awww such a well written short story! my gramma’s ashes are in a coffee can so i can totally relate to the coke bottle thing.
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Awww. Thanks and that’s so cool re your gramma
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Oh, you sweet lady. I love the story and then I love the next one even more. The Viking is just like that! I think he’d want an Akvavit bottle though. :o)
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Thank you, you sweet lady! So very glad you enjoyed it and I say Yes! Go Viking!
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Wonderful story, humor and love and grief all rolled into 100 words. Great job.
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Thank you, Linda. That’s exactly what I wanted to project!
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Hmmm. The urns in our custom are mostly small, round and earthen. No one has any sense of humor when it comes to that.
Liked your fiction, but I’m sad for your untimely loss. 😦
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That was beautiful, Dale. So sorry for your loss.
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Wow. What a fabulous story. Sad but humorous. A fine choice indeed
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Thank you, Laurie
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Bittersweet and touching.
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Thank you
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You’re welcome.
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Thanks for sharing your and Mick’s story with us through Sarah’s gorgeous prompt. I think I would have liked Mick very much.
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You would have. My mother says there was never a stranger to Mick…
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Wow. A Coke Bottle.
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Yep… I kid you not…
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My first thought was a story set in an Istanbul bizarre. …. but I also suspected you would go the urn route … Woo hoo to me! …. but the link to Mick surprised me. Good one … and it seems I still recall that time for you.
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Frank, you were the first one to check up on me during that time. I will forever feel blessed… 💕
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Ahhhh … thanks … I’m blushing.
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Truly touched me…
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😀
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What comes to mind, a couple Coke slogans from the past;’Life Tastes Good’ for one. And, ‘You Can’t Beat the Real Thing’. I think Andy Warhol would say to your husband, ‘man I should have thought of that’. The real thing was your husband is what I take from this.
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Absolutely, Calvin. He truly was.
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Sweet memories brought to life about a man who was dearly loved. Tradition isn’t always the right way to fulfill the wishes of one who passes. The true meaning of loving someone is remembering the small things that brought a smile to his heart. You were truly blessed. Your memories of those wonderful things he did and loved will keep him close to your heart forevermore. Touching story, Dale. You know how to pull at the heartstrings and bring a gentle tear to ones eyes.
Isadora 😎
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I was very blessed and this is one way I can honour him… by using him as my muse!😂
Seriously, I’m glad it touched you…
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Seriously, it did you touched me with your story. As my hubby and I age, we talk about such things but wish it could be wished away. You are a very strong woman.
Have a splendid weekend.
Izzy 😎
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Muchas gracias!
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De nada … merci 😎
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Simply beautiful, there’s nothing more I can add to those who’ve commented before me.
Click to read my FriFic!
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Thank you, Keith
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So much love in your story, Dale.
I can still see him with you.
Love and hugs to you..
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Thank you very much, Moon
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Two lovely stories. I wish I’d known Mick, and I’m glad your memories of him are so happy.
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They are indeed….
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I love your story and the picture of Mick with his Coke bottle. Your 100 word story and back story about your lovely Mick are the sort that make my heart swell with sadness and joy at the same kind. Many blessings on you.
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Thank you so much, Ina.
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A lovely story. Mick looks a lovely man and obviously had a great sense of humour. I’m glad he helped you with your story this week.
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He did! Loved your picture…especially once I figured out where to go 😉
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Oh dear! I’m so sorry for your loss. Both the stories are brilliant and touching. Lots of love coming your way, Dale.
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Thank you Yuhu. So very glad you enjoyed.
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I do think that doing something fancy for my funeral would be just for show, and certainly the less showy the better… I hope that my friends and relatives would have a good party for me… dancing on my coffin would be a good thing. Love your story and I think it actually tells the kind of passing most of us wants.
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That’s exactly it.
Mick asked for wings and beer and sexy servers. I decided against the servers, however… 😉
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Another story with a personal touch. Very nicely done.
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Thank you, Trent…
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Wow! What else can I say?
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thanks! 😀
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I love that! It’s so lovely that you respected his wishes, because you knew he would have loved it, that it would make him smile and it must make you smile a little every time you see it, see the real him represented in that bottle.
An unconventional but touching story Dale
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Thank you so much, Lynn. It was the least I could do 😉
He was a character and a half…
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You clearly had a very good, fun relationship, Dale. We have to count ourselves lucky we’ve met certain people through our lives, don’t we? He sounds like an entertaining man to be with
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Absolutely, Lynn. I was blessed as was everyone who met him.
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What a lovely thing to have had. A speacial man x
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Brilliantly told, Dale. A very warming, personal story, obviously tinged with sadness
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Thank you, kind sir.
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Wonderful story – and my sympathies for your loss.
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Thank you, Liz
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Wonderful!
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Thanks!
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He most certainly had a sense of humor.
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That was quite a twist to this story. I agree with michaelwynnauthor, this is a warm and personal story. You husband must have been quite a character.
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Thank you, Otto. He was quite…and then some!
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