Good Wednesday to you. Has “THE” storm started in your area yet? They keep annoucing a doozie in so many regions. I dunno. It sure doesn’t feel or look like it’ll be that bad. Though it has started to snow here… Let us all hope “They” have erred in their predictions. Less of course, not more!! While you wait and see how this whole scenario turns out, how about you read up on some 100-word stories created by Rochelle‘s rowdy gang of miscreants? Better yet, why don’t you join us. We’re mostly harmless… This week’s photo from Sandra Crook – where does it take you?
Click on the Frog to read more stories and add your own!
One With the Stones
Breathing in the salty air, Lily slowly wandered the grounds. It felt so good to finally be strong enough to walk outside, without a chaperone. She made her way to one of the benches, sat sideways, one leg bent in a v, arm crooked around the back of the bench and gazed quizzically at the stone garden.
“Do you like them?” She nearly jumped out of her skin, not having heard me approach. I was right behind her.
“They are quite odd.”
“They were created with people like you when they were well enough.”
“What do you mean by, ‘with’?”
Uh oh. BTW, what do you mean “THE” storm. Right now it’s 40 degrees F under sunny skies in Boise, Idaho.
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Uh oh indeed.
All over the eastern States and Canada they are calling for snow storms… we shall see!
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Yes, I’ve seen how the East Coast has been hammered recently. We’ve had a relatively mild winter out west although our snow fall did begin late in the season.
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Somehow, I’m thinking he didn’t just misspeak. Great story!
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I don’t think he did either…
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I also thought about that stone garden and how it could be something more… actually my thoughts went once again to the witch of Narnia… but your POW is so chilling.
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Great minds 😊
I can see the Narnia connection.
I’m glad he did come off as chilling.
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But I wrote about Narnia the other week, and I’m glad I skipped it, yours was so very good.
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True. I’m going to check yours out! Positive yours will be good too. They always are…
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This takes sinister to a different level. Nicely done, Dale.
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Thank you, Varad. So happy you liked.
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Oh dear, to be turned to stone… great last line:)
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Thank you, Luccia!
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I would think it would be easier to do before they are well enough 😉 Survived the weather bomb on Cape Cod – lost power for a few days and all… Now up in NH looking forward to 35 cm of snow today….
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One would think…
Glad you did! And ugh… bummer for NH.
Our snow has stopped. For now.
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Dear Dale,
This puts me in mind of an Outer Limits from years ago when people contracted a disease that turned them to stone. Creepiness…well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
A disease would be more acceptable than this, I should think!
I also think that two creepies in a row (prompt-wise) is my limit… unless…😉
Thanks and lotsa love,
Dale
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We had our snowstorm over here last week, now awaiting spring arriving! Very creepy story.
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Yes, you guys got quite the dumping, eh?
Glad you thought it was creepy!
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Well, thanks for leaving me with a creepy feeling! And I mean that in a very good way. No more snow!!!!
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Yay! Glad I did…
Now it’s pretending to lightly snow…
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Ha! Ha! Were those stones originally people who were victims of some calamity like that Sicilian Mt. Etna volcano or something?
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They seem to have been! 😁
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Oh dear, what happened to those people while they were still well enough? I think it’s time to hit the road and get out of there toot sweet.
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I dunno if they can or not!
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What do you mean, indeed. Love it! Very suspenseful. Left me intrigued… which, btw, is extremely hard to do today.
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Great! Happy to hear it!
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“with”. I had to read it three times to see the first with. I kept reading it as “by”
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Is that a good thing?
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It means you were very clever and/or it was late at night
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Sitting here in dark with no power. Hour 4. Yes. Storm is here.
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Oh dear. We got about 1/32 of an inch! Maybe. If that much…
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Wow. I’d take that.
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I’m good with it. We had more than enough this year, merci beaucoup!
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No storm here…yay!
“With”..you know, like they worked on it together.,..my goodness you are cynical! 😉
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Cool! None here either…
Uh huh… riiiiight… they worked on it together, now if she doesn’t become one with the stone, that’s a whole ‘nother scenario! 😉
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This brings a WHOLE new meaning to getting stoned, tell you what. I’m feeling very much like M. Night got together with Stonehenge and they made a baby and it was this 100 word entry.
Spooky, mysterious fun, Madame.
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Ooohhh…. well now. That is a comment! So pleased you enjoyed my second foray into spooky…
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It IS spooky because my mind goes to “What in the hell is this chick telling me? . . . with? . . . what?” . . .
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Cool!! I dunno if you read Neil’s comment that he had to read it 3 times to stop seeing “by” when it was “with”.. 😉
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Yeah, the with freaks me out . . .
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… it’s supposed to 😉
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Of course . . . Hitchcock would be proud.
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Blushes…
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And M Night says how do as well. . .:)
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Garsh….
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Hmm, I wonder if the narrator is an evil mastermind conducting experiments. Or maybe he just likes to get people stoned.
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Good question… maybe we should investigate. From a distance.
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I’d run if I were her. Being turned to stone would not be fun. Like the subtlety of your wording.
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Thank you, Irene. I dunno if she’s strong enough…
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Woah, creepy. Hope this leads to many magical adventures.
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After I’d read the story a few times, it occurred to me to wonder if Lily had died and was already a ghost. A creepy tale, and very well told!
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That’s what I love about these exchanges – readers can give you a perspective you never thought of!
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A different slant on becoming stoned! Nice one and good to see the stones featuring in a story at last!
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It definitely is! I’ll take the less permanent type, please! So very glad you enjoyed!
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Nice piece of mystery – mind you I know a few people I’d like to turn to stone. (not you – you are nice).
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Oh thank goodness!
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Oh crumbs. Lily should have stayed in bed…
We had “a” storm (Storm Emma). It’s gone now though 🙂
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You echoed my first thoughts about a story for this prompt. I couldn’t make it stick. But you did! Well done.
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How cool is that? Thank you, Sandra.
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OMG…what does that mean? We need 100 more words!
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Hahaha! What does it mean indeed?
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LOL!
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Way to get us thinking at the end. Well done.
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Thank you, Curt. I was surprised at my ending, too 😉
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This is so sinister. It sent a chill right down my back. Well done!
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Oohh.. I’m happy to hear that 😉
Thanks!
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Superb writing, Dale.
I hope the narrator means no harm to poor Lily was my first thought since the narrator seems to be a ghost. Great suspense and mystery.
One of my favourites, this week.
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Why thank you, Moon. I’m so touched! I’m not too confident… but who knows?
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Hmmmm! Good food for thought especially since it’s bedtime now.🙂
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I, too, would want that phrase clarified. “Together with” or “out of” — English is so flexible. 🙂
We had the storm last weekend. OOdles of snow, but we’ll take it. Sad to say, though, prairie cities haven’t caught on to Mtl’s efficient snow-removal system and Saskatoon side streets were clogged yesterday. we toss around that musty old joke, “Saskatoon has a great snow removal plan; it’s called spring.”
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That it Is!
We’ve had more than enough and yesterday got nothing. Today. It’s really a pretty snowfall. And I’m so done with It! 😁
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Curious, Dale, and imaginative. The first person narrator made me jump too!! hope the storm limps past you – if not – batten down those hatches again!
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Thank you, Kelvin! Yesterday we got nothing and now it’s falling steadily. Really pretty. And I want it GONE! 😁
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Wave your magic wand, my lady, and it shall be so!
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Ummm…. I don’t think I have that much power!
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Then get all your friends along too! And if it still doesn’t work – what a party you might have to forget the snow. 😎
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Sounds like a plan! 🌨❄❄
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Certainly an Edgar Allan Poe ending! I like it.
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Woot! Thank you, Ina. ☺
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Ooooooo living statue, wow. Great story. I’m hooked
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Thank You, Laurie!
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‘I turn to stone’……..’In my blue world’
This had a wee poke to it. A slide down a razors edge. Finished off with a morsel of tongue to cheek. Perfeeek!
Hmmm. Storm (s). More like a slushie hitting the proverbial fan. To be truthful I might be falling out of love with my snowblower. I find myself peek under the cover which drapes my lawnmower. Lusting even.
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A week poke… Perfeeek! How can I complain with a comment like that 😉
Yeah. We have that “heart-attack” snow that has been falling on and off pretty much all day. Mind you, total accumulation of maybe 4-5 cm…
It was a good winter in this here neck of the woods for the snowblower owners! You could have satisfied your lust more than once!
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scary… it looks like something going happen and she won’t like it.
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Face down in snurt, not a good way to go.
In my yester years I had my share of romantic flings with snow shovels.
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No, most definitely is not!
Oh you… then you moved up a notch!
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Hmm, I’m not sure what’s going on here, which is good. The opening with Lily sitting on the bench is lulling when contrasted with that ‘with’ at the end.
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So very pleased am I, then 😊
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All cultures have myths where somebody was turned to stone usually for some misdeed. Wondering what did poor Lily do?
Perfect take for a flash.
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Thank you YS! I’m not sure she’s done anything… then again, she may have.
So glad you liked.
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Very sinister – this was right up my street! I really enjoyed it – thanks, Dale.
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Yay! So glad you did! Thank you
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We had a big storm last Friday, a smaller one Wednesday, with two more predicted for the coming week. Southeastern PA. It’s ok, though, because the snow starts melting as soon as it hits the ground at this time of year 🙂
And I’m wondering if that last sentence were her last words. Shiver.
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I have a friend in PA who was expecting the “big” snowstorm. They got didly-squat!
I’m thinking they just might be…
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Scary. Hope she gets away soon.
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I dunno if she even can…
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Ooh sinister and chilling, Dale! Gave me goosepumps
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goosebumps* 🙂
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🙂
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So very glad it did, Fatima!
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That was so tricky. My eyes kept seeing “by” and the word is “with”. Very tricky indeed. Nicely done Dale.
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So very glad I made you think 😉 and that you liked it!
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Created with people……… this is sinister. a sudden twist at the end .
here in Mumbai the weather is HOT.
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It is indeed, Kalpana! Thanks for sharing. And 😛 Here it is snowing. Again.
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A very chilling and unexpected twist! Well-done!
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Thank you, Jan. So very glad you liked!
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I loved the build-up and the descritpion of her seated position. It has a quiet feel. Then, pow, you gave it to us. YUP … the ending is superb. Sssoooo …. malicious and sinister. I almost want to do that insane laugh they have in creepy movies but can’t firue out how to write it. May been escrito, mi amiga. Bien cuit ….
Isadora 😎
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Gracias mi Amiga!
Muahahahaha…😉
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😍
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Love the mysterious ending! =)
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🙂
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As Bob Dylan would say, “I would not feel so alone. Everybody must get stoned.”
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Haha!
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Lovely sense of dread here. Your dialogue added so much to that feeling – I can only imagine what happened to the others, no actually I don’t want to!
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Thank you, Lynn. I was hoping it would creep up on readers…
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Job done! Always a pleasure Dale
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Huh? Now there is a twist I would never have expected. I hope she is well enough to run! Great story.
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We can only hope!!
Thanks, glad you liked.
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