Good Wednesday-Friday, my peeps! You know it, it’s Friday Fictioneers time! This week I’m doing something new. Frank over at A Frank Angle, wanted to play indirectly by suggesting a collaboration of sorts with me. I send him this week’s photo prompt, he then gives me the title or idea. So voilà! This here is the result 😉 I really did try to stay away from dialogue. Couldn’t do it for this one. Hope y’all don’t mind!
Thank you always to Rochelle for keeping us in line – or doing her best to 😉 . This week, she chose this photo from Ted Strutz. Thank you, Ted, for allowing us to use and abuse it for this challenge!
Should this picture jump up at you and makes you think of something to say, then please, by all means, join our merry band of misfits and share it with us! Click on Rochelle’s name for the rules and regs or click on the blue frog below to read more interpretations…
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Vacation in Roswell, New Mexico
“You have GOT to be kidding me.” Shanna watched Charlie set up his camera and tripod in the middle of the field, using the car lights to see.
“What? So far, we have done all the stuff you wanted to do: Farmer and Artisan’s Market, Peco Flavors Winery, and we toured the International Air Center – ok, that was for me. Still, can’t I just do this?
Shanna sighed. “Yes, of course. But c’mon, you know it was proven that it wasn’t a UFO that landed way back in ’47.”
“So they say, Shanna, so they say. Can’t hurt to look, right?”
And so . . . IS the truth out there? What will they find?
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That does remain to be SEEN, doesn’t it? 😉
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You nailed it. Just the right mix of dialogue and narration. The 100 words IS SUCH A CHALLENGE..but you nailed it.
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And… ahem… you shall attempt this challenge, when? 😉
And thank you!! I am so very glad you think so!
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You nudge…😉
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I do 🙂
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I do too…
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Hey …. don’t forget who gave her the idea!
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How could we ever forget you Frank? 😀
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How could we, indeed… He did, after all, introduce us…
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True thing.
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I definitely made sure everyone knew, Frank!
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I know you did … just had too make sure Marc remembered!
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Don’t you fear. You are too special to both of us.
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@”it wasn’t a UFO that landed way back in ’47.” – si, si, c’est vrai de vrai… confirmed by the X-files!!! 😀
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Buahahahah! Mél@nie! Tu es trop comique!
Of course… if it was on the X-files, it must be true, eh?
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I like it! Loved the way you worked in seeing the other sights in the area! A toast to your creation … clink!
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Grazie mille, collaboratore! Salute!
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… and thanks for the reminder email. Glad to do it again … especially when you are stuck.
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Maybe I’ll make it a monthly thing with you 😉
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Game on!
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Woot!
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YAY!!! Clink!! 🍷🍷Admittedly, I am confused. However, it’s fun!! ❤
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A toast to confusion … clink!
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Cheers!
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Why are you confused, Resa?
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Well, my mom used to take me out into the prairie fields, in the dark to wait for a UFO. She & dad claimed they’d seen one out there. No camera, though, she just wanted them to take her away. She’d say, it can’t hurt to try!
That plus my second glass of wine! YAY!
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Buahahaha!
Too funny.
Cheers!
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Love the optimistic hope inherent in this one… the ‘maybe, just maybe’ kind of hope that encircles all dreamers.
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Thank you, Jelli. Don’t think his wife feels the same way… 😉
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So after 70 years they expect to see what?
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In that town the dream never died that there will be a real UFO sighting one day. Their tourism industry thrives because of it.
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Yes, I’ve heard about that. My Dad used to work at the real Area 51 but it’s the worst kept secret in the world. There’s even a bar on the road to that location. I can’t remember the name, but I think it references aliens. You never know.
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😀
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And if they want it enough, they’ll see it for sure
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Ain’t that the truth!!
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No matter what is proven there will always be those who want to believe. Maybe not on a romantic vacation away though! 🙂
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Absolutely… at least they got to see some of the sights… 🙂
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Fair is fair, we all get to do what we want to do on our vacation, no matter how moronic, I mean hopeless, I mean… Good one.
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LOL! Thanks, Trent! Yes… both sides should get a little something 😉
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Yes, they should. All day shopping one day, all night looking fro UFOs the next.
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IF that’s what they like…. You won’t catch ME shopping all day… blech!
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Yeah, I know, sorry for the stereotype. So she spent all day in Carlsbad Caverns even though he is claustrophobic. Better 😉
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Hey… I know guys who love to shop! No worries. Was speaking only for me. Though the Caverns do sound way better…
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And it can’t hurt too look – famous last words …
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Indeed…
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Sorry, Dale, to not too!
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You’re as bad as me… see something going as you press “send” and go nooooooo! 😉
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Just because there was no U.F.O. in ’47 doesn’t mean it can’t happen maybe now
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Exactly. Let’s give Charlie a chance to be the one!
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Look, look and look again, you never know what you might find. And the dialogue was just fine. It brought the story across very well.
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Thank you, Lish! I’m very glad it did!
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True. He probably didn’t complain when she bought the overpriced organic stuff at the markets. And neither will she when the aliens kidnap them for experiments. Though that wine might help.
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Haha! It just might, at that!!!
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Dialogue worked well. An interesting concept writing to a title. Look forward to your monthly collaborations.
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Thank you, Irene. Was our first attempt and, as a result, I went into a direction I never would have considered. Glad it worked!
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Famous last words…
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Indeed…
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It can never hurt to look…….I hope. 😉
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Right? If only to appease the kid at heart. 😉
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Who knows what he might capture on film. Of course, he’s also being watched and he’ll never leave with the evidence… 🙂
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That is the chance he is willing to take…😎
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Job done, Dale. Well done. Lovely interplay between the holidaymaking, couple.
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Thank you Kelvin. I’m glad it worked.
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I like that Shanna gives Charlie a lot of latitude. Good talk.
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Can’t be too easy on them all the time… Thanks
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Never hurts to look. Great take on the prompt!
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Thank you, Curt. When you are a fan of this stuff…
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gr8 stuff my friend! Made me smile 🙂
If you want something (to be) badly enough, it just MIGHT happen, eh?
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Thank you, Kiki!
I guess… and it can’t hurt to let him try. Right?
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Dear Dale,
Who knows? We’ll be visiting Roswell next month. I’ll let you know if we meet any aliens? 😉 Love the dialogue. A hearty welcome to Frank.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Well, from what I’ve seen on the photos of the town, you are bound to meet a cardboard or blown-up version!!
So glad you did. As for Frank… I may just “use” his services again periodically!
Lotsa love,
Dale
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We do need them to target our angst or our adoration. Great read.
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There you go!
Glad you liked.
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Great account of the negotiation that goes on inside every marriage! And, as a bonus, a realistic description of a closet UFO believer! Nice one, Dale.
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Why thank you very much, Penny!
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many years down the road, when all’s said and done, she’d remember these days with fondness.
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Of course she will. Probably even sooner…
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Life would be safer for him if he just lived in Shanna’s world. Why go poking around, eh?
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Ahhh…. let him have his fun… Let’s face it, his chances are pretty friggen small on finding anything!
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😂😂
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One of the artists we saw at an exhibition on Sunday was from Roswell. I kept wondering if we would see aliens hidden in his landscapes. 🙂
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Ha ah! Until Frank gave me the title, I’d never heard of it…. Had to look it up 🙂
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Not an X-Files fan, I guess. 😉
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Nope. Didn’t watch it very often – not enough to get it😉
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🙂
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Right!!! 😀
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🙂
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Cute story I like the repartee of your characters. But I am curious, why were you trying to stay away from dialogue?
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Not so much trying to stay away, I was just worried I used that format too often! 🙂
Glad you enjoyed, Dawn.
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Oh…okay…lol. I used it last week so I was wondering if that was bad form. Glad to read we are okay 🙂
Write on, my friend!
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No, no! Not at all! We are more than okay, my friend! 🙂
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As long as his interest goes no further than just looking. As with many diversions… 😦
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Right! 😉
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Connie has tolerated my fishing while on vacation, and I’ve gone to flea markets and antique stores (though it pains me). Hope he captures some memories here.
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As it should be…a little for you, a little for her…
As for Charlie, well the tourist stores have plenty to sell, of he’s not so successful…😉
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Ooh good to be curious!
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Oh yes, I always look up. You just never know.
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Too true! Hawking said so! 😁
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Soooo sad!
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He lived way longer than anyone else with ALS. Pretty awesome
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An inspiration
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Maybe. . . .Zing and Zang have been here on earth longer than we think 🙂
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Maybe!!
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Looking to the stars, who knows what you’re gonna find. Very nice story!! =)
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Thank you, Brenda. 😊
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Ooh, I’m dangling now! Great stuff 🙂
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Thank you! So glad you liked.
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Shanna can sleep in the car while Charlie watches the sky all night. He’ll probably be struggling to stay awake the next day!
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There is that. If Shanna is nice enough to accompany him 😉
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Great dialogue giving an insight into their relationship, their negotiation and compromise 🙂
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Thank you, Sarah Ann. Glad you enjoyed.
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Oh I do love it… the place in the title really worked as well as the dialogue giving so much insights into their relationship.
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Thank you, Björn! Without Frank’s input, I never would have gone there so I am pretty pleased it worked. 🙂
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liked the chemistry and the list of things they had done…
also – enjoyed skimming a few comments- the Xfiles.. truth – lol
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Thank You, Yvette. I like to go through the comments too! 😎
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well i wish I had more time to go through them more often – esp when the topic interests me – but even just skimming a few can lead to some great stuff (as you know)
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No kidding! And seeing things you didn’t… widens one’s horizons!
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🙂
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Lovely. Great lead up to it. Hope the feds don’t jump out of the bushes.
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LOL! That would suck!!
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I like the way you allowed us to “travel along” and “listen in” on Charlie’s and Shanna’s “discussion.” All the while, I wondered what was really out there. 🙂
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Thank you, Jan. So very glad you liked it.
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He might not see a UFO, he might see some other sight or indiscretion. The dialogue made me laugh, true to life!
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So very glad you enjoyed, Fatima!
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So very well done, Dale.
The story felt so real, with the arguments and transparency between the couple. I am glad Charlie still believes and hope that characteristic is favourable to their relationship in some way.
As others have said, great dialogue.
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Thank you, Moon. How very glad I am that you felt it could be real and that the dialogue worked.
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