Good evening (or morning, depending on where on the globe you be) my Readers. Pegman leaders Karen and Josh were busy basking in the sun last week and left us to our own devices for a week but are now back with a new challenge. Thank you both for your efforts.
This week Pegman takes us to Yellowstone National Park in the US. You’ll find both streetview and photo spheres to inspire you. Choose any place within Yellowstone and write 150 words inspired by it. Once your piece is polished, you can share it with others at the link up below:
Idyll
Giselle felt the warmth of the sun through the roof of the tent. She smiled dreamily as she reminisced on the previous night’s passions.
“You’re so beautiful when you smile like that, Gi.”
“You know, Dany, you saved me and gave me back my smile.”
“And I’ll make sure you never lose it again. Wasn’t last night’s concert great? The drum of the falls, the pop and fizz of the geysers…”
“Oh you! Everything turns to music with you.”
“True dat! I am a musician, after all. Check this out…” He slid the zipper of the tent. Tzzzzzzzzip.
They laughed and together opened the tent flap, quickly falling silent as they saw the deer grazing right in front of them.
“Could this trip get any better?” whispered Giselle.
“It sure can.” He nuzzled her neck, pulling her back inside. “How about we take up where we left off last night?”
this is so joy and clear post….enjoyable to read!!
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Thank you. So very glad you enjoyed.
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It’s a happy environment for a happy couple
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Andy why not, right? It can’t all be calamity and disaster 😉
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Nature IS music! You captured that well. (And then there’s the snuggling part!)
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And snuggling in nature is even better…
And thank you!!
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Beautifully romantic.
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Thank you. It’s what I wanted it to be.
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Truly an idyllic piece 🙂
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Thank You, Dahlia.
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Playful and steamy. How do you feel about a career in romance?
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Sweet! Hmmm… I read enough of ’em! I could probably do it…😉
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Hmm, well not that you couldn’t get started right away. But what are you doing this summer? Care to meet me in Iowa City? https://iowasummerwritingfestival.org/what-romance-novels-can-teach-us-about-writing-captivating-fiction
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Just 17-hour drive or a few hours’ flight. That could be so much fun (And like one of those romance movies I saw during Valentine’s week…)
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I’ve been working on Rochelle too…
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Have ya now….
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Dear Dale,
Aah. Romance is afoot. Sweet dialogue and a scene that leaves me with a happy feeling. Not to mentions a few shivers down the back of my neck. Sweet.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Yes… was feeling it. So very glad you did too… oooh and shivers to boot!
Lotsa love,
Dale
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Lovely story, with excellent dialogue. I particularly enjoyed the exchange
“Everything turns to music with you.”
“True dat! I am a musician, after all.”
Absolutely right!
You’ve created a very sympathetic couple for your story. I’d love to know more about them.
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Thank you, Penny. I admit this is based on a real couple – not that I could ever picture them camping, but Dany is a musician and basically did save Giselle from a rotten situation. Their love is palpable – has been going on strong for 20 years and will continue, no doubt.
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Thank you for the back story, Dale. Dany and Giselle sound like a lovely couple. People who share a loving relationship seem to radiate happiness, don’t they?
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They are and they do and you can see Giselle’s comment 😉
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😀
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You’re so kind Dale..we are so happy and lucky to have you in our lives!😍
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Right back at you. I’m doubly blessed!
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Q-Licious,
Who knew Yellowstone could be so sexy!
You somehow tucked a night’s worth of passion under the stars into 150 words, And you made it look easy! You’re quite the passionate pen, you know that?
Thank you for the lover’s rock song!
Peace and breakfast!
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B-lightful,
Who knew indeed? Must have been nature’s music taking over my “pen”
Glad you enjoyed!
Ciao and Coffee!
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Like the characters in this post . . you really . . umm . . nailed this.
I know . . I am such a child.
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Buahaha!
That said, I am glad I did get the characters right…. Now, anxiously awaiting the real Giselle’s response…
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It was creamy goodness is what it was.
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Ahem…
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Have some cafe, Q. 🙂
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Already had two. ☕
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Boom goes the dynamite!
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Like I need it, eh?
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Yeah I was gonna say. It’s like adding rocket fuel to a Bugatti!
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Buahahaha….
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Well, everything’s been said of nature and romance. So I’ll get earthy. I thought that zip would be to his jeans . . .
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Wasn’t wearing anything… already nekked from the night before 😉
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That’s even more earthy than my thoughts. 🙂
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I’m smiling from ear to ear! We are so honored to have a role in your story😊
And you sure do know us so well..lol 😆
Love it Dale, thankyou😍
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So extremely happy you both (Coz I KNOW you showed it to Bedz) love it.
I think I just may know you a bit 😉.
Thank YOU! 😘😘
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You’re so kind Dale..we are so happy and lucky to have you in our lives!😍
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The beauty of nature enhancing their moment. I’m a bit tired, so it took me a while that this is their view from the tent – so I was thinking about the moose munching on their version of Grape Nuts.
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Hahaha…
Frank, Frank, Frank…
And kinda looks like a deer, no?
And I am not touching the Grape Nuts!
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Well … I did say that I’m tired.
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That you did…
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But I still think it’s Bullwinkle.
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Maybe you’re right. They have them in Yellowstone?
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Oh yes … plus Bullwinkle reruns could be found. 😉
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LOL!
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Whenever my wife is gone, three things happen … I don’t sleep as well, I go to bed later, and I get up earlier. After a week, it’s catching up to me!
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Ahhh… so you miss her 😉
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Yep … so I’ve danced the majority of the nights while she’s gone.
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That is so sweet… That’s love 😉
See? I’ve been “alone” for the past two weeks and barely thought of him…
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Last night I did go to bed earlier … but woke up early … but slept well in between.
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That is good. I would so like to go to bed and wake up in the morning. No 2 or 3 or 4 o’clock appearance!
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Great story 💜
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Thanks, Willow! 💗
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A delightful story. Actually reminds me of camping long ago.
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Thank you… camping can be romantic…
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This is so sweet, so intimate and romantic. A lovely relationship conveyed clearly. Oh, to be young and passionately in love! Gorgeous Dale
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Why thank you, Lynn! They still are 20 years later 😉
When Giselle read it to Dany, she said he giggled and said that’s probably exactly what he’d do! 😃
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Haha! I didn’t twig they were a real couple. That makes the story even lovelier. They sound like nice people
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They truly are. ☺
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Hansel and Giselle without the sticky buns.
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Ha ha! You kill me…
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…. the jester gushes, whilst licking blood from dagger blade. Once. Twice. Thrice. His tongue returned to sheath.
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Oooohhh… and… you don’t write, because, why? OR , if you do… where? ‘Coz I’m in!
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Nope. Not a writer. Enigmatic Tinker writing on a page of mist that clings to the front page of a mountain slope.
Again have a happy easter, Me am Nord bound, I hear the Bunny of there is a little looser with the chocolate eggs.
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Hmmm… see? Even your denial reads like poetry…
And to you as well… Nord towards où?
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I wasn’t denying, I was clarifying.
Où? A half hour north of Temagami. Only an eight hour drive depending on moose traffic and snow plows.Good time of the year to go, no black flies and the bears are still door mats in their bunkers.
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Ah… potayto, potahto.
Nice! That’s pretty far north indeed! North of North Bay. You’re right, gotta avoid black fly and bear season, to be sure! Do you bypass the Algonquin Park? I’ll never forget getting stuck there during “wolf howling” in the middle of the night on our way to meet friends at their cottage. Could not believe just how many people lined up to howl at the wolves in the hopes of a response!
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I avoid Algonquin like the plague. Have been there once, got a lightning bolt up the ass and never returned. Four people died, I got lucky. You haven’t lived till you have a million volts of electricity dance around on a tent floor. Never go anywhere, where half of, to quote Farely Mowat, the none human beings from Toronto are.
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No way!!! Jee-zus. I wouldn’t go back either. We didn’t choose to go through but our timing was such that we had to. Bloody wolves kept us there until past 1 am.
LOL… Alrighty… If Farley Mowat said it…
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That said, if hearing a wolf howl jars some to realize how important wild places are, then it’s not such a bad thing. I have been back a couple times but from the northern boundaries via roads less traveled and not many people.
Oh hell, you have wolves in Montreal, don’t you?
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True dat. Awareness is definitely a good thing.
Um… not the four-legged kind, as far as I know…
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Lovely, it sounds like the perfect holiday!
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Thank you. They made it so.
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What a romp. Sounds like the title. Those days, those days. Happy memories. Well done, Dale. Enjoy your summer tour with Karen and Rochelle.
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😀 It was supposed to.
Yes indeed, those days. Thank you, Kelvin.
Oh… I dunno about that one! It’s a tad pricey…
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What a lovely little scene. The warmth of the sun on the tent is a great place to start. The story just glows.
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Thank you so much, Josh. I am so very glad it does.
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