Good Wednesday-Friday Fictioneers Day, my peeps! Today I have attempted a “Rochelle-esque” story. Plus, it’s my photo and I swear, when Rochelle asked me for it, I knew exactly what I was going to do. Well sorta-kinda exactly. I also swear, I did NOT read her story first.
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A “Rochelle-Style” Historical Fiction
100 words
All the Rage
Charlotte looked at the metal contraption warily. “It looks heavy.”
“Oh contraire, Mademoiselle. It is actually going to reduce the weight of the dress as you no longer need to wear so many petticoats. Now turn around and lift your arms, s’il vous plaît.”
Charlotte did as Monsieur Milliet requested as he lifted his invention and placed it over her head. He then tied a ribbon around her waist to hold it in place. “Voilà! Is is not magnifique?”
“Oui, Monsieur. Let’s try it with my dress. It would be scandalous to waltz about in just my petticoat and hoop!”

Originally created by Mr. R.C. Milliet
Spookily similar. Are you perhaps alter egos of each other? pen names?
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I know… I was flabbergasted when I read Rochelle’s… sheesh… Though her’s is a cut above.
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I guess you just never sat down! I can’t imagine the weight, though.
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It must have been horrible, quite frankly.
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But have you ever worn one while attending a symphony in Montreal Dale? 🙂
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I cannot say I ever have, Iain. And not likely to ever occur in the future, either!
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Is it a coincidence that it looks like a cage or prison? Sometimes people shouldn’t be too nostalgic for simpler times…
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I think not. It definitely was a prison for the poor women subjected to such torture. Fashion-schmashion…
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Dear Dale,
Alter egos? Us? GMTA. 😉 Mayhaps we’re spending too much time talking. Nah. I love it that we even went to the same link. At the same time they aren’t exactly the same story. You went with the creator and I went with the discomfort of all those layers. So there you go. Similar but different. Yours works very well and I love Charlotte’s sense of humor. Well done, my friend. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Indeed, GMTA! Nah. Don’t even go there. Our stories were based on the same item taken in two totally different directions. But seriously, the same link? LOL big time!
Of course Charlotte has a sense of humour (I had to put a bit of myself in my “Rochelle-esque”!
Gracias mi amiga, and lotsa love and patience,
Dale
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😉
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You two on the same wave length? Now, that is scary!
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Right? Sooo never happens 😉
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Bwauahahahahahahahahah….Watch out Friday Fictioneers!
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Dunh dunh dunh….
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Great minds think alike, I guess. That’s too funny you two had such a similar take! Marvelous storytelling from both of you.
Thank you for the inspiration this week!
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Wasn’t that cray-cray? No way we coulda planned that one any better… which we didn’t.
My pleasure and thank you!
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Haha – you collaborating with Rochelle this week?? It’s even historical too!! Great story. I loved the French touch. C’est magnifique.
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Right? It would seem, wouldn’t it? Mais oui… I had to add moi to the mix 😉 That and a touch of humour… tu sais…
Merci mon ami!
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What a fun way to go with this prompt, I like it! Frankly I’m surprised it never became the fashion just to wear those cool hoops as outer wear… and I was only halfway through typing that sentence before it occurred to me that I can make that a real fashion in Eneana. Oo, thanks for the idea!
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I dunno Joy… didn’t Madonna do something with ’em? And if she didn’t, I can’t help feeling like I’ve seen it on the runway or something! LOL…
Go for it!
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Her or Lady Gaga, I’m sure — but I was thinking more, styles that spread to regular people!
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There ya go!
Umm… good luck with that one. Maybe in Enneana, not so sure about Montreal 😉
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There’s a period at the height of the Pyanni Empire where they are wearing some pretty WEIRD things, just for shock value; this wouldn’t even really stand out…
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Well there ya go… I say add this to their wardrobe!
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Sorry… On “n” I pressed “send” too quickly!
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They sort of were prisons, weren’t they? Ways for them and their menfolk owners to show off – ‘look how rich I am that my wife can wear such impractical clothing. No laundry, bread making, floor scrubbing for her – we have servants for that’. Cumbersome though the crinoline was, the corset must have been the worst, don’t you think?
Love your view here, from a mystified young lady wondering at this new invention. Lovely stuff Dale
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I think so… and even the “working womenfolk” had a version of this to wear – not quite so wide, I should think. I think I’d take the hoop over 4-5 layers of petticoats. Ugh. Fuggedabout the corsets! No wonder they were passing out left and right…
Thank you; very glad you enjoyed!
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Well I guess you needed a working woman to help you into the corsets too – another element of the ‘clothing as display of wealth’ nonsense. Like wearing designer labels today. And yes, the petticoats must have been sweltering and really heavy. No chance of swimming if you were unlucky enough to fall overboard on a seas voyage – you’d sink without trace!
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Most definitely. I am so not into anything designer. Pay $200 for a camisole? I think not. I don’t know what the hell they were thinking when they put all those layers on… insane.
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But if you wear that many layers, you can’t see the basic shape of the female form, which has to be a good thing, right? We don’t want to go around distracting all those fellas with our – gulp – curves …
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Riiiight… 😀
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I sense alter egos or is the alter ego messing with our minds?
Awesome! write my friend. 🙂
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Did you read Rochelle’s to be saying this, Charlie? Hmm?
Glad you enjoyed!!
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Just agreeing with the first commentor:
(neilmacdon)
And also, I’m swimming in your world of writing. I’m always observing every detail as I can. 🙂
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Wow… I am flabbergasted. Coming from such a writer as you…
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🙂 You welcome my friend. 🙂
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A “Rochelle-esque” story??? My, aren’t you the brave one… you succeeded! Fun story, your photo did prompted me too, albeit not “Rochelle-esque”.
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I know, right? What was I thinking? And phew… glad it passed muster.
Will be checking yours out shortly, sir!
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Why not Cheryl and Ethel in crinolines? Fires the imagination, doesn’t it?
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Yeah, I’m sure they’ve worn them at one time….
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So you both saw upside-down underskirt contraptions? I love writerly coincidences, I really do. I reckon they happen because we’re thinking so hard all the time! Lovely take.
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Well, Jilly. It’s like this. As this is one of my pictures (of a few I took at the Symphony House) and I did take one more of the one on the right which looks even more like an underskirt contraption…
It truly was a coincidence and they are bound to happen now and again!
Thank you. Glad you liked,
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Lightweight my ass! Even with a hoop, those dresses are h-e-a-v-y. I used to deck out for Holidays at the hysterical – uh – historical society. Ach, but there’s no doubt why they had so many fainting couches! But, I really did like the corset… at least the one I wore.
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Ha ha ha ha! Jelli… can you imagine how much heavier 5-6 petticoats must’ve been? Love that “hysterical – uh – historical”… you funny one you.
Corset does flatter the figure, doesn’t it?
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Well, now, let’s see. On average, when I’m dressed for ‘settler’ I wear between 3-6 petticoats depending on temperature. Amazingly warm… but in summer…oh, How I LOVE the hoops!
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Wow! So. You know it. You can totally relate! I watch movies or shows and am always wondering how they don’t just die on the spot. I loathe being too hot. No wonder people didn’t live long…
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I love this take on the photo! I thought crinoline too but then saw plates spinning hence my attempt at the challenge 🙂
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I think it’s great you saw plates spinning. I love when I go way outside the box, myself.
So glad you enjoyed it, tintins!
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Thanks, I’ll be back, I love flash fiction challenges 🙂
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Cool. This is a fun group and 100-word stories – an addition, I tell ya!
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They really were the stupidest of fashion faux pas, weren’t they? How on earth did they get into their carriages? And imagine trying to go to the loo!
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A question I always ask myself when I watch a period piece!! And variations of those bloody things still exist today (mostly for wedding dresses, but still…)
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I love that delightful story, Dale. You tell it with such a light touch. Well done!
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Thank you, Penny. You are always so generous with your comments!
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Great take on the prompt. I’m glad those inventions aren’t popular now.
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Only for wedding dresses 😉 And definitely not heavy metal!
Glad you liked!
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i think women have suffered long enough in the name of fashion. 🙂
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No kidding!
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First of all, wow to that lobby! Of course I was sensing a sniper waiting for the victim to arrive. Your ending brought a smile. So hey … ever worn a dress like that?
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Nice, eh? Nah… that is not my style.
And no… never have!
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Outfit would be a big hit at the club.
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Um. No.
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Back in the very old days, when I was young and spry, I went to a dance camp in the Rocky Mountains years on end. One year we did a dance wearing hoop skirts. Yoiks! Walking, sitting, dancing in one of those contraptions was like torture.
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You mean younger…
Yoiks indeed!
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Talk about scandalous! When they were first introduced it took a while for ladies to get the hang of dragging their skirts around for things like sitting down. If you sit down without lifting the hoop, the whole thing flies up, revealing eveeeerything. Most embarrassing.
Thank you so much for logging in again on my site. That helps a lot.
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So very glad it worked, Audrey! I’m doing it for everyone.
I can so picture it too. Haha!
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Q,
A well dressed 100 words . . as per!
I find it remarkable the lengths to which women would go as far as fashion is concerned. It’s rather involved, if not totally painful! Us guys are wimps in comparison.
Love the pics, the words, the very idea of a scandal. I mean . . who doesn’t dig a tasty ‘lil scandal every now and then?
Sophisticated and sexy read, Mademoiselle.
BH
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Hey B,
Lights are back on so I don’t have to worry about battery life on the cell. Ain’t turning on the computer at this time.
And thanks… well-dressed… I see what you did there 😉
I find it insane the things MEN invented to torture women with.
Absolutely..a little scandal adds that spice, eh?
Merci,
BW
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Q,
In my best Al Pacino . . “Heeaahh comes tha powah!” Woot woot! And good!
Yes, that’s what us men do . . we make things more difficult. Well . . present company excluded of course. I am sooooo agreeable and chill, lol.
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Marco,
I’m sure you are… when you’re not busy picking on me 😘
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Not me!
Frank . . it’s all Frank.
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Look who’s throwing whom under the bus now… wait till he wakes up in 5 hours (he gets up crazy early)
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In Bollywood movies of the past, a very popular trope was twins getting separated at birth or when they are very young. You and Rochelle might wish to investigate a bit more Dale 🙂
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Hahahahaha Anurag!
Too funny! I’ll have to make sure Rochelle sees this. 😉
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Thanks for the photo prompt Dale. I enjoyed your story and the humour in it. I also enjoyed Rochelles. The photo sent me in the same direction but different again.
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Most welcome. There are weeks where similar stories get created. Fun stuff. I’l definitely be checking yours when I umglue my eyes!
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Just the petticoat and hoop – sounds like something you’d see on the catwalk in one of the modern fashion shows 🙂
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With nothing else!! 😉
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Oh my! Imagine the scandal! I wonder what they’d have made of today’s fashion?😂. Beautifully written.
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Thank you, Vivian. Indeed! They’d swoon for sure!
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😂😂
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I ordered some mousetraps that look similar to that item. One caught two mice (Mickey & Minnie, according to Connie). However, there are more mousketeers where those came from.
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I’ve no doubt… They are sneaky little buggers.
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I wonder of those sculptures were hoopskirt-inspired, or if it’s just a coincidence.
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I should look it up! I’ve no idea 😉
Thanks for commenting
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The things we accept in the service of fashion. And it’s not only women, and it’s not only clothes; it can affect an entire society
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Absolutely. I know men didn’t have it too easy either with the stiff collars and jackets and so on. It’s utterly ridiculous at times. At least in today’s society, there is more leeway. I’m not a trend-follower, tend to stick to classics so I’m not forever wasting money to “be one of the crowd”. I think back then you were seriously frowned upon if you didn’t.
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Judged by our clothes, both sexes. And not only back then. Right through until recently. And only then did the pressure lessen because certain groups of females refused to conform. Yet there had always been the non-conformists. Eccentrics. They get my vote every time.
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So true. There will always be judgment. I like to think today we are more flexible. And yeah. Eccentrics rule.
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Dale Rochellson? Rochelle Dalesoff? In any case, it’s a great take. I wonder how they could do anything in these torture devices. No wonder ‘close dancing’ was invented mauch later.
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LMAO!!! You are so funny Gabi!
I dunno how they did anything, quite frankly… and let’s face it, the “scent” in those crowded circles must have been pungent to say the least….
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Eeew… right. I hadn’t thought about that.
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Hm. they both have a certain ring to them, don’t they? 😀
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Flashy!
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Right?
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How terribly painful dressing- up must have been in those days!
Wonderfully told story, Dale .
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No kidding. All those stays, ribbons, breath-sucking corsets, layers… Ugh. I can’t even!
Glad you liked, Moon!
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Nicely done! I would never have related that pic to clothing, but there you go!
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Thanks, Russell. Glad you liked!
Course not! You’re a man who, I dare say, never had the occasion to see just what was under the dresses of women at certain epochs! 😉
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When I started to wear such things in the 1950’s they were starched petticoats called crinolines. By the time I was married they had come out with a stiff, plastic mesh petticoat. I think the one in the picture is sort of Frank Lloyd Wright-ish. A heavy duty petticoat.
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In the 1950’s, they were definitely much lighter (and cuter) than the 1850’s version I added – actually 1859, to be exact 😉 Maybe Lloyd-Write based his designs on it!
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Oh yes the things we do for fashion. Looks like a prison to me! A great story Dale! Well told
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Thank you, Laurie. Very glad you enjoyed. Definitely prison-garb to me!
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That’s too funny, thank you for sharing with others!
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Glad you thought so, Wilson!
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Thanks for being open and sharing!
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Wonderfully written, Dale.
Trapped! Thankfully the fashion has changed now.
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Thank you and yes! Thankfully!
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Decades ago, I made a sculpture which reminds of this. Somehow.
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Did you now? So a writer who doesn’t write.. and a sculptor to boot? You are so full of talents, sir!
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Au contraire, chère dame. ‘It’ has no talent, thus not talented. Unless they had a meeting, and the meaning has been changed to ‘he who dances with rabbits’.
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Là là mon cher ami… why you so hard on yourself, eh? IT… does have talent… but IT choses to keep IT for ITself. And, just so ya know… WE know you’re a good egg..é
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Lol to ‘there there’. Then growls at your acute insight.
And they will carve into stone, ‘Alas He Was A Good Egg’, not such a bad epitaph when you think about it, though am sure a crack will develop in the granite between E and gg..
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😀 I have my moment… shhhhh
Meh… crack or not… the words matter. xoxo
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That’s one fashion trend not coming back. For men now? Sheesh there goes the summer.
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Nope. At least not for the every day wear. But wedding dreases? Lighter versions 😉
They have some stupid-ass ideas that I am sure will NOT be popular
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Ah, the contraptions women wore for fashion. Has much changed, perhaps just the different styles and I wonder sometimes perhaps just as uncomfortable. Fun read.
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I admit there are still some strange ones out there. I’m not into being uncomfortable.
Glad you enjoyed.
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Oh, the contraptions we women have worn down through the centuries! Great story, Dale.
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Seriously! Some have been crazy.
Glad you enjoyed, Linda.
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An interesting take Dale – nice one.
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Thank you, Francine. I’m glad you enjoyed!
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I can’t even imagine what it would be like to wear one of those things. I used to complain when we “had” to wear hose with our dresses (so many years ago). Lovely tale! We’ve come a long way… =)
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I’m with you on that… I would not even work for a company that “demands” hose… ugh.
We definitely have (thank goodness!)
Glad you enjoyed, Brenda.
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Oh là là, I’m still trying to get over the shock of you and Rochelle thinking of the same fashion contraption! 😁
It probably serves the same purpose as a chastity belt. 😜
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Ha ha!! Trip drôle…
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Fashion that falls under same category as stilettos, push up bras, platform shoes, waist-trainers… the things we come up with as a society. Although we still wear these from time to time 😉
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Indeed! If we choose…😉
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How in the world would one sit down to eat? Crinoline’s are kind of dumb. Loved the photo and your post. Thanks Dale.
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Thanks, Dan. I can’t even imagine! Must have been quite the feat!
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I’m glad I never had to wear anything like that!
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Seriously. A small-looking waist is all fine and dandy but at what price?
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How times change. There’d be plenty dancing in just the hoop these days 🙂 Great visual story.
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Ha ha! Indeed! Thank you, Sarah Ann!
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