Good Sunday night, my peeps. Between cleaning house, attending 50th birthday parties, opening my house to potential buyers, I have started and re-started this Pegman Post. I’d leave a few lines, come back… Nope, have no idea where I was going with this. Start over, leave again… This is what you get. A quickie history lesson! Thanks, always, to Karen and Josh for hosting this lovely prompt!
This week Pegman goes to the Great Wall of China. Feel free to choose from photospheres you find anywhere along it’s length. This link will get you started, or you can venture off on your own. No need to stay with your tour group on Pegman tours 😉
Your mission is to write up to 150 words inspired by your tour of the location. You’re welcome to write fiction, essay, poetry, or anything you choose. Once your 150 words is polished, you can share it with other Pegman contributors at the Linkup below. Reading and commenting on others’ work is part of the fun!
Temujin
Born to poverty, Temujin survived kidnappings, abandonment by his tribe, murder. and yet became the fiercest of warriors and a natural-born leader.
He put strong allies in positions of power instead of family, ignoring tradition. He granted religious freedom, abolished torture, encouraged trade, created an international postal system, abolished inherited aristocratic titles, forbade the selling and kidnapping of women yet caused terror wherever he went.
Temujin grew his army – up to one million soldiers – by killing the leaders of the enemy tribes and incorporating the remaining members. He used those not expert enough with horse and bow as human shields. The Mongolian empire expanded to over 11 million square miles, including parts of China, breaching the Great Wall as none other had ever succeeded in doing, not once but many times.
And yet, Genghis Khan, proclaimed Universal Leader, was no Superman. Thrown from his horse, he died of internal injuries.
Oooh. Scary! I didn’t know this about his background. I always wonder with despots whether it’s nature or nurture that most conspires with circumstance. Well done.
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Why thank you, kind sir! I wasn’t sure it was going to come across properly (head cold, can’t process properly!) 😉
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Q,
I truly never know which way you are heading with one of these Pegmans. The mystery of what to expect is fantastic, actually.
As is this piece. History has always been a favorite of mine, so this is ma jam . . indeed. And to think, that the mighty Khan was taken down THAT way! I did not know that. So fragile is the head that wins the crown. And in his case literally.
I really dig this Q!
Peace and great walls (in China)
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B,
I love that I keep you on your toes…
I have to tell you, I was so absorbed by all of his accomplishments (as well as the fears and horrors). I never thought I could pull it off in 150 words! Must be why I had to re-write the bugger three times.
So extremely glad you enjoyed my little attempt at history.
Peace, Not War, and walls coming down
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Q,
I am sad at the lack of emphasis on history, all history. It’s like with grammar, nobody needs it (they think) so nobody really pays it much mind.
But with history, as we have seen way too many times over . . we suffer from our ignorance. And we do it on a loop. Which is a shame.
This was a great big score for a little attempt!
Yes . . to all of those more peaceful sentiments. Yes indeed . . .
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B,
I have to agree. Don’t even get me started on grammar. I am a Grammar Nazi and it drives me nuts that, in this age of texting, it has become accepted to rite like u feelz.
As for history, so true. And as times moves forward, more and more history is lost or worse, dismissed.
So very glad it was!
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I can’t even deal with it. And it’s the attitude as well! Most peeps are indignant if you try correcting them when it comes to spelling. Not that it stops me, lol.
I see history repeating itself constantly, and I think to myself . . how do our world leaders NOT see it? Or maybe they do. Maybe it’s a game plan. My God . . I’m not a conspiracy theorist . . promise.
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Same here. And it doesn’t stop me at all… I’ve even got my youngest doing it. Woot! Go Mom!
Dude. They have to see it. They have to think they are going to take care of it better… which they don’t.
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Go Mama!
Which is why I put on my conspiracy theorist hat. Because they do know and they have a game plan.
Which is why we need a boat.
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Don’t have much faith in their game plan, sadly…
A big one.
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Me either Q, me either . . .
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And I had to hit refresh because I got your initial comment . . . lol
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😝
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Hey, I should have left a cut off comment! LOL
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Too slow, Joe…
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It was the slightest bit of hesitation . . dang the luck!
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😎
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But what the Painted Lady could have done in one of those towers would have brought the wall down!
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Instead of a horse doing him in, it could have been her…
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Done him in a no time.
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😎☺
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Cincy,
Behave yourself, young man. Or at least . . try.
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Fuggedaboutit… he’s become obsessed with the Painted Lady… maybe we should assign him a new prompt.
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Or a new blog. On the dark web . . .
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He does have a talent… I’d be a follower…
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Oh, I would never go on the dark web . . okay . . well, in case I did happen to venture there. Send me a link . . k?
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Riiiight…
Will do.
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And vice versa . . Just in case I venture over there . . yanno, looking for tips as per the one armed push ups.
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Of course, of course…
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Dear Dale,
It’s hard to say if one classify Khan as a good man or a bad man. What a history…and well told in 150 words. Note that has nothing to do with your story: the worst movie casting in history…John Wayne as Genghis Kahn. Avoid this movie at all costs. I wish someone had warned us. 😉
How humbling that Genghis Kahn died from falling off his horse…Superman indeed. But then…
Good one…not to mention I applaud you for stepping outside the box. Good practice.
Shalom, hugs and chicken soup,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Exactly how I felt. And thank you. Took me three tries to sorta kinda get it. He accomplished so much but at such a high cost.
I cannot even imagine John Wayne as Genghis Khan. Seriously. Now that you’ve said this, I almost have to watch it 😉
How humbling indeed. He didn’t die immediately but his legacy did go on for years and years. The last of his line actually died, get this… in 1920!!!
I thank you. Coming from you it is high praise indeed.
Lotsa love and sweet thank yous… guess I’ll make myself some…
Dale
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Warning! We didn’t watch the entire movie. It was too stinking painful.
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Oh Lordy!!!
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Life is dangerous when you’re a conqueror.
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That it is! It’s not easy being at the top…
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This is marvelously written. I love the contrast of the powerful man eventually humbled and the ambiguity of his morality. All that in 150 words!
I heard somewhere that one in 200 men are a direct descendant of Genghis Khan, so in some ways, he’s still around.
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Thank you, Karen. So glad I managed to convey that. And, get this… his last descendant died in 1920!!
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Wow! I hadn’t realised the extent to which Genghis Khan had introduced more liberal laws, especially those protecting women. Thanks for enlightening me! And very well written, to squeeze such a big biography into 150 words!
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Dear Penny,
Thank you, I swear I was going nuts trying to fit most of it in and hoping it didn’t come off too “school history paper” or boring. He did a LOT of good, besides slaughtering who knows how many people in his quest for taking over the world…
Thanks so much for your comment,
Have a fabulous day!
Dale
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Gosh, a factual story. And very well told. Do you think his childhood calamities had any bearing on his later successes? The need to overcome adversity. I’d say it did.
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Thank you, Crispina. I think only someone who had to truly fight to survive could become so powerful. I couldn’t even tell the half of it!
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Yea, I am familiar with his story. That’s why I was impressed with how you reduced it yet still encapsulated the flavour and more or less the most pertinent facts.
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Then I am ever more pleased with myself!!
Thank you so much!
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I’m glad you were interrupted enough that you fell back on history! I love this piece. Khan was some sort of fellow, yes? I believe I’ve read that most of us can trace our genes back to him. Not only was he brave, and smart, he was “busy.” 😉 I really REALLY enjoyed this. Feel better soon. When you finish Rochelle’s chicken soup, let me know. I’ll bring you some more.
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I’m just glad you didn’t read the original I posted… I reworked it this morning 😉
He was brilliant, to tell the truth. He had supposedly four sons and unknown number of daughters (them being not so important). Apparently his scion died in 1920!
Thanks. Imma need lots of soup… making my own as we speak…
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Get well soon. I wish I were close enough to deliver and share a bowl.
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So do I! I’m thinking it’s the simple accumulation of all my “stuff”! House, MIL, Step-father… Something had to give!
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Interesting history lesson. Never knew how Kahn died…
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Goes to show… I had no idea either!
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What a great summation of his life. So succinct and perfectly written. What a strangely contradictory man he was! Great story Dale
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Thank you, Lynn! So very glad you liked.
When you first read it and just liked it I thought… nope, this will not do. I reworked it this morning 😉
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I love the irony of all of his admirable accomplishments ending with “yet caused terror wherever he went”. Bravo!
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Thank you, Karen! He truly was a brilliant man despite his methods…
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All those false starts were worth if for this gripping historical yarn!
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Thank you so much for such a great comment, Sarah Ann!
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