This week Pegman takes us to San Ignacio de Velasco, Bolivia. Karen chose a great photo but I went snooping and chose this one. As a result, the text that introduces this week’s Pegman makes no sense so I’m not sharing it here!
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Thank you to Karen and Josh for hosting this fun weekly prompt.
The Watchmen
They stood there, tall, stoic, unmoving, watching. Most simply drove by, unimpressed, ignoring and dismissing them as nothing. The curiosity of some encouraged them to slow down in wonder, questioning their existence but not enough to stop so they shrugged and drove off. A few actually parked their cars and walked right up to them, trying to determine their use or purpose. Taking pictures for their scrapbooks they promised themselves they would Google what they were so they could share with their friends and families.
The locals. They knew. They understood. They placed their offerings in cages so that the Watchmen would continue to protect them from all those passersby. From the truly curious who would never be able to find the answers to their questions as well as those who didn’t bother stopping. For this they were grateful. They could continue living as they were meant to, without fear.
Q,
This is a wonderful merging of Rt 66 and Stonehenge. At least, that’s what I culled from it. Roads and mysterious formations to which we apply our curious rituals. I love how you bring out the traditional aspects of our abidance. If asked, we probably couldn’t even tell you WHY we find these things to be sacred, we just do.
Peace and the watchmen
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B,
Thank you for seeing even more than I did in writing it! Your comment has me feeling some level of relief…
Peace and thoughtful commentators…
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Q,
You are WAY too hard on yourself. You should be more like me! 😉
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B,
I thought I was! 😉
And thank you.
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Haha!
We always are the harshest critics of our own work. It’s a writer’s burden, I’m guessing.
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😀
I’m thinking you are right…
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It’s where we find our worth. If it came easily, who cares? But when it really confounds and astonishes us with just how dang hard it is, and yet you KNOW you will never tire of it . .
Well then . . that’s when you know you’re a writer.
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OK, OK, you win!
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Ain’t no winning or losing. There’s just knowing. 🙂
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People do the oddest things, and that’s so weird it’s got to be true. 🙂
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Must be in some parts of the world 😉
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A wonderful piece about human nature.
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Thanks, Lisa
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Elegant piece, Dale. I like this one a lot.
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Why thank you, Josh.
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Beautiful photo Dale and you had me at “They stood there, tall, stoic, unmoving, watching…”
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Thank you so much, David. I.love that we can choose the picture we want foe this challenge.
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Love how the collective POV is both the insiders and outsiders. How ironic that the curiosity itself is meant to keep away the outsiders!
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Right? Like some kind of power… I dunno what the hell I was thinking, to tell the truth… 😉
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Very intriguing Dale, I love the sense of mystery and the questions I’m left with…
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You tell the story very convincingly, Dale. I can really believe that you’ve identified the purpose of those strange constructions. I like the way you give the viewpoint of both the tourists and the locals in the same story.
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Thank you, Penny. It seems whenever I am unsure of what I write, you readers let me know that I somehow succeeded!
So very appreciative of your comment.
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🙂
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Eerie ending. Either the objects exude mystery or they are just too commonplace to be noticed. I like this, Dale!
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Thank you, Ina… I was going for something out of my norm…
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What an imagination you have! The tension ramps up with the start of the second paragraph. “The locals. They knew. They understood.” – so well done.
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Thank you so much, Sarah Ann! To think I was so unsure of this one…
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Dear Dale,
I guess there’s no Rochelle in Pegman this week, so I’ve stopped putting off reading yours. I love the mystery in this piece. You leave this reader wondering who the Watchmen are, and know there’s a deeper story here. Well done. You’ve stepped outside your norm and have done it with grace and style.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Well now… that’s a bummer! However, am awfully glad you read mine and liked my attempt at doing something outside my norm. I am chuffed!
Lotsa love,
Dale
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