Good Wednesday morning, my readers. Today’s Friday Fictioneers, always brought to you by Rochelle Wisoff (no E)-Fields was brought to you by much head-scratching, soul-searching and utter despair. OK, OK, I exaggerate just a tad. Trying to come up with something quasi-intelligent for Jilly Funnell‘s peculiar pic was not gonna happen. So I had some fun instead. Do try to come up with something better by clicking on the blue frog below and adding your two cents’ worth. Thank you, ladies, for causing me grief this week!
Things That Kids Do
“Last one up is a rotten egg!” Johnny yelled as he took off running.
“Hey! Not fair! You cheated!” Jimmy hollered as he ran, quickly catching up.
“I have to. Your legs are longer’n mine. Gotta take any advantage I can!”
“Guess it didn’t work, loser!” Jimmy laughed as he reached the top step. “I beat you!”
“Nah ah, you didn’t. We ain’t at the top yet.”
“What do you mean? We’re at the top.”
“Nope,” Johnny pointed to the peak of the structure. “We have to climb to the top of that.”
Jimmy squinted, looking up. “Are you crazy?”
If I were Jimmy, I would let him win that one…. (I’m not as bad as Rochelle, but still 😉 )
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I’m with you on that one, Trent!!
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That is only going to end in disaster!
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Ye of little faith…
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Crazy for sure. Nice one, Dale
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I know I sure wouldn’t…
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Me either.
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Dear Dale,
Yeah, I could hear this conversation clearly. Maybe it’s because I could put at least two of my sons in the roles. I, for one, would be at the base of the structure waving at them. 😉 Love it.
Shalom and hugs,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
I could definitely see one of my sons doing this. The other? No way in hell… I think I would be more inclined to not even want to look!
I thank you, kind lady…
Losta love,
Dale
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Sometimes it’s more gracious, and safer, to concede defeat. I know I would.
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No kidding… G’head, you win! 🙂
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Nah … they’ll chicken out.
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I should hope so… or realise there is no way TO climb…
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Will they goad each other on? Or, as Frank commented, chicken out? I like that you left it a mystery. 🙂
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I like to think one of them will be smart enough to stop the other…. but boys… I dunno 😉
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Sounds like the beginning of trouble.
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For sure.
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There’s always another hill beyond the one you climb
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So very true!
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Q,
I don’t know if Johnny is bluffing, but I would get to stepping (up) if I was Jimmy. Sure I’m scared of heights, but the gauntlet has been thrown down! Sooo, hold on tight, pray you don’t have a muscle cramp and win bebe!
Of course, it’s easy for me to say when I’m not in Jimmy’s sneakers. 😉
You took this prompt to . . . wait for it . . new heights!
Here’s to the kid in all of us . . .
B
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B,
Who can take the chance? One does not want to lose face, that is for sure!
And yes. Easier to say whilst sitting on one’s arse in front of the computer 😉
Hyuck! Hyuck! Hyuck!
Yes, may we never lose that childish funny bone
Q
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Q,
You can’t take the chance, you gotta not think about it and just go. The not thinking about it part is essential!
That’s where the trouble starts though. In front of the computer . .
To always possessing the priceless thing inside of us . .
Bronx
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B,
So very true…. let instincts take over… all sorts of trouble can start in front of the computer…
To never losing the desire to do,
Quebec
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Quebec,
Go with your instincts. And let whatever trouble may come of it have its way.
To desire . . that particular bit ‘o tasty.
Fort Apache
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Cubano,
Always. Otherwise, what point, life?
To the tasty bits,
QB
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Ding? Meet Ding and Ding!
😘
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😘
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I’d never be able to handle that. I’d simply have to lose face.
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Many would, I should think… besides it being a helluva lot safer to do so.
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Oh, so true to life, Dale! Boys egging each other on with crazy dares. You’ve done the dialogue nicely.
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Thank you, Penny! Thank goodness for dialogue options when you know not what the hell else to do with a photo prompt….
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Snap! I felt the same about the descriptive option for this prompt. When uninspired fall back on technique!
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LOL!!
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Yeah, I’d say no way, but who knows about them? 🙂
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Boys can be daredevils!
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Yeah, my girls not so much. 🙂
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One of my boys is, the other, not so much!
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As the mother of three harum-scarum sons (my daughter was easy as pie) I could easily place these kids and see the race and hear the dare. I’d say you succeeded quite well 🙂
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Boys… seriously… I have two myself…
So very glad you enjoyed.
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Ah, if that is your attempt at fun, you should write ‘fun’ a lot more often! Why bother with serious when this was … well … so much fun to read? 🙂 xoxo Na’ama
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LOL! So very glad you liked my fun piece, Na’ama! 😀
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I’m a fun lovin gal 🙂
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I have zero doubt of that!
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🙂
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Oh, the poor kid. Teased by friends for a loooonnngggg time. Fun.
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Possibly…
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Time for Sis to step in, give each one a crack and tell them she is not explaining any broken bones to mom. Can you tell I had brothers? Great story.
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Buahahaha! Love it! We are three girls at home… and, if I’d had a brother, I betcha I would have challenged him!
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Yep. Wish I had a nickle for every time I said “Don’t be stupid” when I was growing up.
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Buahaha!!! Sounds like my house.
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i can tell johnny is only bluffing. i’ll take him on it. 🙂
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You do that, Plaridel!!
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That would be quite a climb. I enjoyed your fun take.
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Thank you, Priya
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Johnny playing to his strength. Poor Jimmy!
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Indeed!
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Well, this isn’t going to end well…
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…that is entirely possible.
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Crazy indeed – if they don’t get arrested first they could end up dead.
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There is that. I’m thinking they’ll realise there is no where to climb…
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Indeed, the things kids do. But didn’t we? Myself, I never refused a dare. Incredibly I never broke a bone.
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Absolutely! I never did either 😉 Both refuse nor break…
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Smiles.
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I find climbing up is not a problem. Getting down is (true story). Ah this does bring back memories.
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I remember going to the drive-in movie as a kid and some of the other boys clumb up the ladder behind the screen. It was probably 40 feet off the ground, but it looked like 400 to me. I didn’t try it.
I guess you’re a celebrite canuck now. You are appearing in stories all over the blogosphere. 🙂
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Arrgh!!!
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Hahaha!!
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💜💜💜
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I’m sure that I have done similar things… there were cases were I could have ended up dead…
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In my day boys would be boys, I certainly enjoyed the challenge of climbing whatever was to hand. I could not do that today as most building sites are fenced off. 🙂
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I was “one of the boys” in my youth. Now? Not so much!!
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Why climb it? Because it’s there, essences of Sir Edmund Hillary I think.
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Indeed! And because boys are, well, boys!
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Really fun and I felt their kid energy –
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Good! That’s all I really wanted 😉
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I’m with Jimmy! Great dialogue and a fun story. 🙂
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Thank you, Brenda! Glad you enjoyed.
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I give up, you can take the gold medal, the silver medal, in fact, all the medals dude!
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Ha ha ha!!!
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One thing always troubles me whenever I write a comment on your blog Dale. The ‘Blogging is all about the exchange…’ message has a typo. It says ‘I answer ever one’, instead of ‘…every one’. If that is not deliberate, can you please please please correct it? 🙂
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Ah jeez! Thank you so much for telling me Anurag!
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You’re most welcome Dale
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Love the energy of the boys, feel I’m there with them- nicely done Dale.
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My feet are tingling at the thought.
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Either you’re itching to join them or you think they’re nuts! 🙂
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I have to admit, it’s the latter 😉 Like Rochelle, I am not good with heights. 🙂
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Ah well… maybe that is a wise choice!
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For the record, I think Johnny IS crazy:).
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Well… today I think so… back when? I mighta taken him up on the challenge!!
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I was a ninny back then! I think you’ve always been an adventurer.
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I think I was. I have the scars to prove it…
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Ha! He got more than he bargained for in that chase! A sweet tale and you can feel their urgency as they run and run. Lovely Dale
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Thank you, Lynn. Nothing quite like being challenged!
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My pleasure. Dale
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Does Johnny egg Jimmy to climb the top? Do they? Wow, I am intrigued to know.
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I like to think they came to their senses… but, who knows?
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All I can say is despair leads you to write a very good story. I could see those boys.
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Thank you Jilly! Your picture was a very good one to get my gears working!
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Well told Dale, very authentic, I’ve been in this situation a couple of times myself as a lad.
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Thank you, Michael. I could have seen my own self there, once upon a time 😉
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Love the dialogue! These guys are so cute. I hope they will be careful.
~ Always a Mother 🙂
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Thanks, Dawn. They are, aren’t they?
-Also Always a Mother…
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❤
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Love the dialogue… so true to life! I have a feeling the boys will attempt to climb up the tower. Il faut que jeunesse se passe! 😀
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Thank you, Magarisa! Oui, an effet
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Avec plaisir!
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Very believable dialogue. Not going to end well I fear!
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Awww come on, Lisa! Think positive… like that once they get to the base, they realise they CAN’T… 😉
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Defo need to be more positive! Hehe. 🙂
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LOL! But we are talking about boys here… and they will find a way if they really, REALLY want to… much to all mothers’ chagrin!
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That’s very true! As a non-mother, I have all those worries to look forward to in the future!
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Indeed!!
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Crazy indeed. Such a true conversation though. Challenge accepted
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Woot! Race you!
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You’re on!
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Is there an elevator? LOL 😆
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LOL!!
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And that’s how mum ends up visiting the boys in hospital with never-ending lectures. Not that it will deter them from further crazy attempts.
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Have you been to my house? I have told my boys – all of them – that if I was to tally the amount of hours spent with them in hospital…. why I… I dunno but… something!!
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HA HA HA … the first line had me laughing bi haven’t heard that line in ages. These boys are typical to the ones I had on my street when I was a child. They were always teasing each other. I have girls. They play quietly. Well, maybe not all, but mine did. I enjoyed this story so much, Dale. It reminds us that playing can bylots of fun. Now, I’m going to play hopscotch. LOLOL 😂😂😂
Izzy 😎
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Fun stuff, Isadora! Yes, well… I was brought up in a family of girls but I liked to play with the boys… none of that Barbie crap for me, thank you very much!
So glad you enjoyed it. Then we can play elastics! 🙂
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Uh Oh 🙄 not sure what elastics is? Is that the game where you place a jump rope around two players ankles; then, another has to jump different formations around the rope. GOSH … I loved playing outside. It’s weird seeing kids indoors so much. 😊
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Not a jump rope, a long elastic… And yes.
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