Good Wednesday afternoon, Readers… well, for those of you on Eastern Standard Time, anyway! Our wonderful leader Rochelle has once again left us with an intriguing photo, this time supplied by Roger Bultot. Dunno how my mind went where it went – just know that it is fiction! Should you want to try your hand at this lovely challenge, please click on Rochelle’s name for the rules and regs. It’s fun and addictive, I assure you! For more stories, click on the blue frog below. You are sure to be entertained.
Never Again
She lay on her back, eyes fixated on the ceiling. The lights wavered and blurred as her thoughts took her back to that time so long ago. A memory she was sure she had buried so deep it would never come back. But that’s not how it worked, did it? You could pretend something didn’t happen, even make yourself believe it didn’t; but it did. No amount of wishing it away would make it disappear completely.
She mentally shook herself back to the present. She was no longer that vulnerable girl. She would never allow that happen to her again.
Something deeply unsettling here! Well written story, Dale.
Susan A Eames at
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Thank you, Susan. Outside of my usual, but that’s what we should do on occasion, right?
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I know! I went the Sci-fi route. Really?
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Such dark undertones, very cleverly done. Those bad memories are hard to shut down completely.
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Thank you, Jennifer. We both were clever this week 😉
Bad memories – can they ever completely be shut down?
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I don’t think they can. 😦 And my cleverness is questionable ha.
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As is mine, then. 🙂
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Definitely not! Ok, we’re both clever 🙂
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Ta-dah! 😀
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You captured so much of the turmoil rattling around in today’s world. Nicely done.
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Thank you, Alicia.
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Wow. Sounds like a major violation.
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It does, doesn’t it?
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Gives me the shivers
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Then, I am pleased!
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As you should.
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you too?
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Nah… thankfully, fiction for me.
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I meant you too writing dark stuff
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D’oh!
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It’s those moments of quiet, lying in bed, when those memories creep back in, good or bad.
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True story, Iain
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It didn’t kill her, so it made her stronger. But it’s impossible to completely forget.
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That’s for sure, Jilly.
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Powerful and oh-so-often true. Well done, Dale.
We cannot always control what memory drags up from the deepest wells. We cannot undo what had taken place. All we can do is do our best to decide what we’d do WITH that stuff–the memories, the events, the things that shouldn’t have taken place yet had.
Your piece lets it all be there. Nicely done.
Na’ama
PS did you know this is a photo of the main hall of the NYC Custom House? 🙂
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Thank you, Na’ama. No… those darn things pop up when you least expect them. And yes, it is up to us to decide how to deal with them.
And no, I had no idea where this photo was taken. What is the NYC Custom House?
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Oh, it’s a pretty building! And the murals on the walls had given me the inspiration for my version of the prompt.
https://www.gsa.gov/historic-buildings/alexander-hamilton-us-custom-house-new-york-ny
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Here’s an even prettier link, cuz it gots pictures … 🙂 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alexander_Hamilton_U.S._Custom_House
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Just so happens I am going to Brooklyn, beginning of November. I am sure a day trip to Manhattan will be a possibility…
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OHHHH! When? November is partially nuts, but not wholly so … so who knows! Email me, if you wanna: naamayehuda@aol.com – perhaps we can get together in 3D! xo
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Email sent 😉
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Ditto … 😉
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it takes a lot of courage to face one’s demons. hopefully, she has reached that point in her life.
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I like to think so.
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I think there are a lot of women now going through this.
Well done, Dale.
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Thank you, Merril. I never intended it to be a “Me too” but there you go!
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My interpretation then, but still.
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And it’s a good one! I just didn’t think it at the time I wrote it. 😊
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😉
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You used the ceiling in a different way than I imaged, plus the story took an unexpected turn at the end for me. Thumbs up!
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Thank you, kind sir! I like to go outside of the box 😉
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For the record, I’m prepping Act 11 at this moment.
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Like… you think I ain’t gonna be ready?
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Oh no because I know you will … just reporting my actions.
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😁
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Dear Dale,
Those memories do have a way of coming back to haunt. Glad this is fiction. ❤ Something a little different for you and very well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
They do indeed. And I didn’t specify anything in particular so who knows, right?
Yes. Trying to go outside the box 😉
Glad you liked!!
Lotsa love,
Dale
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Took us to a dark place. She needs help so that these memories never trouble her again.
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She may have conquered her demons but sometimes, they may just come back to remind her…
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Q,
Damn good writing, and you always veer off from what others might be seeing in the picture. With outstanding results, I might add.
This one is dark, and you didn’t know you were going that way until those creative juices caught the wave and just went with it. The feeling you get is the seed of the idea you grow into being.
And umm, I called it earlier with that Stephen King text! Because I just checked and that’s the result I got!
To great story telling . . .
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B,
I thank you. I was gonna veer a certain way but then would have had to put an R rating on it…
It is dark and not my “as per” which is great when it works, which, according to y’all, does. And that is the coolest, ever.
Stephanie King, I seem to recall… And that’s way too funny!!
To great readers…
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Ooooh, and R rating huh? Sounds intriguing. As do all of your story ideas. And then you cook ’em up and boom!
Yes, it most certainly do. Does. Both!
Yes! It was before I even looked it up too, so how about that?!
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Yep… I’ll have to tell you about it 😉 I dunno where this one came from, to tell the truth.
🙂
How ’bout that, eh?
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I can’t wait to hear it!
Not knowing where it came from is equal parts cosmic and creativity.
I didn’t say aboot, so please let the record state. . .
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🙂
I like to think so.
Please don’t. It’s a myth. Well, in MOST of the country, anyway…
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The mythical aboot . . . there’s a post!
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Hmmm… will have to put that one into the “maybe” file
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Hahaha!
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😉
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Something that bad will never be truly forgotten but it sounds like she’s not going to let it destroy her.
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That is for sure. And no, she definitely is not.
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Awkward recollections make us sit up and wonder why things happened ion the past, why did we let it happen and then . . . a very appropriate story in our times.
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Thank you, James. This could be anything at all. And memories do that. They pop up when we are vulnerable.
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Very powerful and disturbing.
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Thank you, Anurag.
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It is difficult to silence those voices in our head, right? Ghosts of the past always haunt us
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It is nary impossible!
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Too bad she had a bad experience. Memories have a strange way of coming back when someone is down. I am sure she will find a way to block it.
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Or just face it and move forward.
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Excellent in all its respects, but particularly for the way you leave it to the reader to fill in the details.
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Thank you, Crispina. I’m so very glad you think so.
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She might not have forgotten but she’s managing her life well.
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I like to think so.
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Well done. The beauty of the ceiling is a striking contrast to her memory. Maybe offering hope?
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I like that. So yes!
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Memories are like bad pennies–they keep coming back. Beautifully written.
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Thank you, Linda…
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Easily could have been subtitled Me Too. You captured the feelings.
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Indeed. And her memory could be something totally different… but I like that it can be interpreted many ways.
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We do have a way of repressing those dark memories, but invariably the oftentimes resurface. I enjoyed the subtlety of your story and the ending where she determines to never let “that” happen to her again. Well-done!
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Excellent story, Dale. Simple, direct, insightful and with a most satisfying conclusion. Kudos!
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Thank you, Penny! So very glad you thought so!
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Dale, I got confused on the sentence, “But that’s now how it worked, did it?” Should the word “now” be “not?”
As for the premise, it was good and something we can all relate too. Buried memories always come back to haunt us.
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Thanks, Russell! No amount of rereading, sometimes… fixed.
And thanks, no matter how deeply buried…
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The past certainly has a way of coming back. Well written Dale!
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Thank you, Russell… that is does!
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Powerful & unsettling.
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Thank you.
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You cleverly avoided telling what happened all those years ago that fostered those memories – perhaps you don’t know yourself!
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Exactly! And thank you for thinking me clever 😉
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There is so much more going on here
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Very tense and very well written
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Thank you, Laurie.
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No matter how deeply traumatic memories are buried, they find a way to resurface even years later. A sad, sensitively written piece.
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Thank you, Magarisa. So very true…
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Avec plaisir, mon amie.
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A grim tale, for sure Dale, really well written as ever.
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You are most kind, Sir!
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If only we could erase traumatic memories. Well done, Dale. You outdid yourself!
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Thank you, Fatima! If only…
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Fingers crossed….
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😊
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Likewise!
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🙂
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giving me chills!
Yesterday I heard of a guy who looked after his ill wife for 16 years before she died who said: The secret is to be master of your worries and not let them master you….. I wish I’d always known that! 😉
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Thank you, Kiki!
That’s what you have to do…
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Topical story.
So many abuses covered up. Victims scared forever.
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Thanks. And yes. Way too many.
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Whatever happened to her sounds horrendous but I like that she’s no longer vulnerable, powerless. She’s in control again. Great take on the prompt, Dale 🙂
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Thank you so much. Whatever it was does not take away her essence.
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