Couldn’t come up with anything overly amazing for this prompt so I decided to kill two birds with one stone: share part of my evening with my friend, Cathy, and do this word challenge. A silly little poem. (I’m not what one would say, fabulous, with the rhyming poetry – especially when I only have 73 words to play with.) This kinda sorta got the job done. I wanted to share these murals with Resa over at Graffiti Lux and Murals and I think I’ll find an excuse to go back there during the day because these two works of art deserve daylight, no snow falling and better angles!
Thanks you, Sammi, for hosting this weekly challenge.
A word prompt to get your creativity flowing this weekend. How you use the prompt is up to you. Write a piece of flash fiction, a poem, a chapter for your novel…anything you like. Or take the challenge below – there are no prizes – it’s not a competition but rather a fun writing exercise. If you want to share what you come up with, please leave a link to it in the comments.
Word Prompt
Illumination
Challenge
An evening with Cathy, friend since forever
Bohemian Rhapsody (again, but a pleasure)
We aim to catch the four-thirty-five
Then on for supper, after a short drive
To “Amellia’s”, on Milton
And be joined by her Malcom
A mural, so beautiful, it catches my eye
Illumination sucks, but I truly must try
A pic with my cell phone will do only so much
The snow and the light add a strange little touch
Q,
You rhymed! And chimed. And sublimed the Mercury out of a mural . . pun intended, but apologies as for my rhyming.
You undertook the endeavor to which you once said “Nevah!”. Or maybe it wasn’t never, but it was something akin to “Rhyming? Hells no . .” But you did it anyway. And brava to you for doing it.
To the poet with pizzazz. 😉
B
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B,
I did. You did! Woot! It’s as good as mine 😉
I dunno what came over me. I think the first two lines occurred all by themselves and then I was obliged to continue! So “hells no” became “what the hell”…
You are the bestest! 🙂
Q
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Hell hath no fury, you know what they say. It applies to poetry that just goes with it as well, I do believe. I read it in a book somewhere.
To hells bells! (More rhyming)
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I seem to have heard that expression… using it in regarding poetry? Who am I to dispute?
Tel hells bells in the dells (sorry, that’s how bad I am…)
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Me too, and using it in regards to poetry seems coo. Seriously, poetry isn’t something I dare trespass. Rhyming it too? Welp, you saw my rhyme.
Dells is a good word. Points for that.
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I agree.
And I disagree. You did a lovely poetic post recently…
Thanks. Dell: not to be confused with Dale, Both mean valley but a dell is a smaller one usually among trees and dale is usually a broader valley…. Hmmm… maybe I wanna change my name? dell sounds so much more cosy…
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Moi? Poetry? It mighta been dressed in it, but I dunno that it WAS it, lol.
Dell, like the farmer who hangs out in the dell. Never understood that song, but I appreciated the word.
To Q!
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Oui, toi, poetry! It was bloody lyrical anyway so Imma call it what it is. And it was wonderful.
Yep, like the farmer. And now you know. You get to go to bed tonight *that much smarter 😉
To B!
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Hmmm. Seriously? Imma take the sugar though.
The More Ya Know! I know. We know. All of it!
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You best do so.
Yep… then we can baffle people with our bullshit OR dazzle ’em with our brilliance…
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I go with the latter . . .
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Depends on the situation. 😉 Sometimes we don’t know enough so we have to use what we do to make it look like we do!
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Shhhhh! You’re divulging trade secrets . . .
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Oops! Sorry. My bad.
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Hahaha!
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Great. And to close with Lemon Loaf? You are killing me!
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And yanno what, David? It was DEEEEEELICIOUS. Ain’t even a crumb left.
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I think you did a wonderful job on all levels! And you are right, that is quite a mural, all of the pictures are fascinating I can only imagine what it is like all together.
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Thank you, Violet. They are two different ones and I shall return in daylight and do them justice (or I’ll try to…)
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Adorable 😊 and yes cool rhymes!
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You are sweet…
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Dear Dale,
I felt the flight
Toward the light.
But then got a fright ‘
And couldn’t get it right.
What a sight
All the snow tonight.
Glad I read your poem
That was nothing close to a tome.
Okay I’ll stop this silliness
Because nothing rhymes with orange.
(Seriously, good job and always love your photos.)
Shalom,
Rochelle from the frozen waist-land.
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Dear Rochelle,
You funny lady! That was fun!
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed my attempt…
Lotsa love,
Dale from the no-longer raining land.
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Was a fun post to read, Dale. Y’all look great in the photo.
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Glad you thought so!
And thank you, most kind 😊
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🙂
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😘
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In your own way, you made it work!
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Kind of you to say so!!
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It didn’t work the way you hoped, but your twist made me smile.
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Not saying it wasn’t the way I hoped, I was just being modest as to my poetry skillz.
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Made me smile, lovely 😘
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So glad it did 😊
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It sounds like such a fun night. The murals are so cool–and that lemon loaf looks yummy!
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It was and they are and it was!! 😁😉
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Hahaha. 🙂
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😁
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For someone who doesn’t do rhymes, you did pretty well. BTW: Love the look of that Lemon Cake. 🙂
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Thanks. Don’t want to come across as too juvenile 😉
The taste was even better…
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Personally, I’d rather see simple rhymes than those that convolute around. Besides, often the perfect rhyme is lost due to the various pronounciations of English. We Brits don’t sound all our syllables the same as you the other side of the water.
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Personally, me too! There are some who go out of their way to make their poetry as convoluted and complicated as possible. What’s the point if we don’t understand what you’re writing?
So. true, pronunciation does play a big part 😉
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Yea. I pull my hair out at the American pronunciation of e.g, aluminium. Not that it’s a word I often slip into a poem. And I notice the TransAtlantic pronounciation of. e,g. gnostic sounds (to me) more list nastic. How’d that happen?
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Remember, I am Canadian and am more prone to pronounce like the Brits… and I say gnostic, not nastic 😉
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I thought maybe you did. But it’s such a potentially delicate subject. though I don’t know why. It’s not like we expect languages to remain forever unchanged. But there are times, when I’m watching something on YouTube, that it’s like strainng to understand a foreign langueage. Thank god for the written word.
And now I chuckle to myself, in memory of visit, in my childhood, of a great aunt who lived in London. What? Excuse me? I swear that wasn’t English. UK has so many different accents and dialects. Geordie (Newcastel) is one of the worst for us southerners to understand. Though I understand the Norse and Swedes understand them perfectly!
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Accents and dialects are fascinating, aren’t they? Within one country you can have so many. Within Quebec, the accents are quite diverse. Some I have trouble understanding too.
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That’s a lovely, joyful little ditty Dale 🙂
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Thank you, Andrea. Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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The mural looks fab, Dale! All in all, a fab post! 😀
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Nice of you to say. I’ll have to go back during the day and take more angles 😉
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Well, if you do, perhaps there is another near by. I find when there’s one, there’s more. 😀
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These were two face to face so no doubt…
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Cute lil’ story! And I love the pics. You both look very happy and the murals are cool.
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Thanks, Ms Tara! They are indeed and we are too 😉
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I liked it very much, Dale. The pound cake (I assume that’s what it is) looks and must have tasted yummy. I’m sure it’s all gone. Well done, my dear … have a grateful weekend…
Isadora 😎
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Thank you, Isadora
Yes, long gone delicious lemon loaf (pound – whatevs) and so very glad you enjoyed!
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