In my usual attempt to try and think outside the box, my father suddenly came to mind… I don’t ask why, I just use what comes ๐
A word prompt to get your creativity flowing this weekend. How you use the prompt is up to you. Write a piece of flash fiction, a poem, a chapter for your novelโฆanything you like. Or take the challenge below โ there are no prizes โ itโs not a competition but rather a fun writing exercise. If you want to share what you come up with, please leave a link to it in the comments. Thank you, Sammi, for holding this challenge!
Word Prompt
Equinox
Challenge
Thirty-five and living large as per your dreams when you were thirteen
Where once you lived on food-stamps, you now lack for nothing
You had promised yourself one day your life would be very different
Your daughters: seven, ten and thirteen, are your pride and joy
Your wife, at this time, is enjoying the high life you are providing
The trips, the cars, the jewels, the parties
Had you known you were at the equinox of your life
Would you have changed anything?
Quality of photos is crap because all my pictures are in boxes and trying to find something dated around 1977 was no easy task!
Love your inclusion of family; a real family person. Right heart-warming it is. ๐
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Just found this comment in my SPAM! What up with that? You must have thought me so rude for not responding.
Thank you for this ๐
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No probs; I didn’t think you rude at all. We all get so many comments and replies, it’s easy to overlook one. However, I’ll have you down on your knees and grovelling if it happens again! ๐ ๐ ๐
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You do that!
Eesh… ๐
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Top pic of family smiles. Wonderful!
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Thank you, Di
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Q,
There’s the Prime Minister!
And with the lovely Rogerson girl.
The quality of the pics is understandable, given where they’ve been. The quality of the writing, once again . . righteous and soulful. As per usual when you write on anything personal. The portraits you pen are honest and beautiful things.
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B
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B,
Ya baby! P.E.T. the second!
All three of ’em!
I thank you. I had trouble finding a pic from 1977 and could not find one with the whole family – but they are in boxes…
And I thank you. I guess when I dig deep…means a lot that I i seem to succeed…
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Q
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Yes, it’s when something hits you right in the central nervous system. The resultant work is always so damn good.
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Golly…
Now you’ve got me blushing ๐
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So we are even. ๐
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That we are! ๐
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Booyah!
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Love this Dale it’s beautiful, you are the spit of your Mum. Life can be good. ๐น๐น๐
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Thank you, Willow! It’s funny, because ad I’ve gotten older I’m now being told I look like my dad! ๐งก๐ป๐งก๐ป
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Really perhaps I should of gone to Specsavers ๐คญ
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Ooops. I meant girls. ๐
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๐ And I fixed my typo which may have helped you err…
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I’m not blaming it on that. It was my bad.
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LOL! I know and my typo was pointed out after you commented but I figured I’d give you an “out” ๐
Coz I’m sweet like that.
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You’re the schweetest. ๐
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I try…๐
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And you succeed . . .
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You are great for my confidence, yanno that?
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Whenever you need a push, Imma be there.
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I know it. And I love you for it.
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I love you too.
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๐ Three princesses and a fulfillment of a dream.
FWIW, I like the photos … They add to the ‘look back’ aspect of this post, and to the somewhat dreamy tone.
XOXO
Na’ama
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Tee hee. Yeah. Plus it was a photo of a photo. Now that you mention it…
Thank you, dahlink!
xoxo
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Maybe itโs a good thing we canโt see into the future.
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I think it is best not to know…
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Never thought of a life equinox before. It is very true though. Nice job, Dale.
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Thank you, dear John. My dad always said he wanted to live to 70. At 69 he thought shit… ironically, he was 70 when he died…
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Then he did make it.
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Yep… by the skin of his teef
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Peas in a pod there!
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Haha!!
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Dear Dale,
Lovely remembrance. So much said about your dad in only 83 words. Brava!
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Thank you so much. He had a huge persona.
Shalom and lotsa love,
Dale
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It is interesting that the prompt word brought you to this. I certainly would not want to know, but it sounds like he had a good life, and you with him. You look so much like your mom!
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I was trying to avoid the obvious and Googled ‘equinox’ hoping to find something. Just being reminded it is when there are equal parts day and night made me think of the half-way point – in this case, my dad’s was at age 35 – so young when you think about it! I wouldn’t want to know either.
Hah! As I’ve gotten older, I get more and more “you’re Larry’s daughter!”
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Well done. In the photo of your parents, you look so much like your mom. In the FB photo, you look like him–and you and sisters look so much alike!
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So glad. And yeah, I must be a real mix! ๐
And we all sound alike – including Mom…when people called, they were never sure who was on the other end ๐
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At one point, there were only women in our house, so I’m sure that happened at our house, too. ๐
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There ya go! Pour hubby ๐ I can relate to him ๐
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I actually meant when I was growing up after my parents divorced, but yeah, my husband had to deal with three women. ๐
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Ooops!
My dad was at a disadvantage too ๐
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An unexpected trip – but touching – causing me to stare at thinking about the words through the images. Well done, Dale!
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Thank you, Frank. So glad you enjoyed!
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Quality of photos is crap. Still laughing.
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Haha! That, and I have since realised I chose one when we were too young.
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What a beautiful adventure words can take us to. When I saw your pictures, i saw a beautiful family and joy. Good job.
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Thank you, Jan. I appreciate your kind words. And thanks for the follow!
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I have similar thoughts, and have for almost 20 years now…
Lovely.
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Uhhh… feeling you are at the half-way point in your life?
Thank you.
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No, wondering what my dad would have thought, if he had known.
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Yeah… my dad did used to say he thought he should live till 70. When he reached 69 he thought he may have jumped the gun a bit but ironically got lung cancer and died at 70… Guess we have to be careful what we wish for.
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Welcome to thinking outside the box as you are now thinking inside the matrix. Where all that glitters is gold for some or perhaps it is not others. That’s the beauty of it.
I like the story of your ‘old photographs’. Photographs are always a great place to curl up in. They stoke the amber’s of memories. Shedding light on whom we are and perhaps what we will become. Bravo!
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I so love when make your appearance, Calvin. Your comments are always so wonderful.
So very glad you enjoyed my little shedding of the light on my father.
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The pleasure, all mine.
And thank you for not shooting arrows at my balloons.
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Why ever would I do such a thing?
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You wouldn’t shoot arrows!
Just that my paranoia and insecurities must have surfaced. Am down on balloons, the primary coloured ones have all been burst. Now am left with only pastel balloons. With Easter coming I don’t want to be left with my compassion down around my knees.
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I’m not saying I couldn’t.. . Just would have a damn good reason to…
You? Paranoia and insecurities? Stop! Fear not! Your Easter balloons are safe!
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“For lack of a dam good reason”, saith the lunaticus carnivorous Unicorn.
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You’re dad sounds like an amazing person – with an amazing daughter.
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He was indeed.
And I thank you!
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You are wrong, Dale. There is a prize to be had and it is in a post like this one. Glad dreams came true and I loved seeing the photos. There is another prize, I see you in both of their smiling faces.
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Old photos add a layer of authenticity to your story. Bravo on conquering yet another challenge.
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Thank you, Monika.
I’m enjoying challenging myself.
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Better you than me. I hate the pressure of those challenges having a hard enough time coming up with content, don’t need a per word or time restriction as cherries on top. Gah! ๐
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I am not creative enough on my own. I need a nudge of some kind.
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Nudges are good. Challenges seem more like a swift push over a tall ledge; I experience acrophobia. ๐
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Hahaha!!
Perceptions…๐
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Yup. The glass is half full only if it’s on ground level for me.
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Hahaha! You funny lady!
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It’s great! It may seem to apply to you, but it applies to many of us, in different realities! Perhaps now it’s time for our ZENITH! โก๏ธ๐ฅ
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Thank you! Well… yeah 110 is fine if I have my health ๐
I’m all for the ZENITH! ๐งโโ๏ธ๐
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YEAH!!! โก๏ธ๐ฅ
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That’s a very interesting question…:)
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Isn’t it though?
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Love this in every possible way, Dale! The photos bring so much life.
The equinox of one’s life, I love how you put it. My father is 77 and I remember him very well at his spring Equinox.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful slice of you life โค
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Thank you, my friend.
We don’t think about the halfway mark till we are at the end, eh?
Thank you for letting me into yours. โค
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Beautiful pictures Dale!
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Thank you, my friend.
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