Don’t think I’ve ever participated in a Pegman so late but there you go. In my efforts to help this challenge stay alive, late is good, right?
Thanks to Josh and Karen for trying to keep this great challenge alive.
Today Pegman treks down to the Andes for a stroll through Cusco in central Peru. Once the capital of the Inca Empire, Cusco is now known for its archaeological remains and Spanish colonial architecture. Remember to breathe… the elevation is 11,000 feet.
Stroll around until you find a picture that grabs you and write 150 words. When you’re done, click on the froggy below to link your story and comment on others.
Korikancha
Pachacuti looked on from the beyond in disgust. It is the end of us. The great and powerful Inca are no more. Those savage Spanish heathens – they dare call themselves conquistadors – have destroyed all that we are, that we built. That I built. My empire.
He watched as Atahualpa, the last Sapa Inca, was murdered despite the ransom agreed upon. The fool! 80,000 men at his disposal and yet he was ambushed by one man, Hernando Pizzaro.
My beautiful Temple of the Sun, built with the finest ashlar masonry. I wanted it to be more, so I had the sides plated with 700 sheets of gold for each of the gods: Inti (Sun), Killa (Moon), Chaska (Stars) and Illapa (Thunder/Lightning/Rainbow); the garden, adorned with silver and gold life-sized statues.
For what? To take all the treasures, destroy it and build an ugly church to pray to their supposed better god.
Dear Dale,
The voice is so believable and true. Well done. Better late than never.
Shalom and lotsa hugs,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Oh good. I was afraid for a bit there… Thank you. And yes, better late than not at all 😉
Shalom and lotsa love,
Dale
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This is superb, Dale.I feel like Pachacuti spoke right through you in both his glory and his bitterness. The Inca were a mighty civilization and you get across both their history and the tragedy of the loss of the culture.
For what it’s worth, I think Pegman is open all week, up until the next prompt posts, so I don’t consider this late at all. Josh and I were really touched by the kind feedback to his post earlier this week. We feel lucky to have such a following. What Pegman lacks in size, it makes up for in talent and enthusiasm!
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Thank you, Karen. That is what I was trying to get across – so much info to sift through I worried I’d miss the mark!
And yes, I know it is open for the week but, still. I hope it picks up!!
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One civilisation is often built on the ruins of another. If we scrape below the surface of our own towns and cities, what cultures will we find beneath. Wonderfully voiced and realised
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Thank you, Lynn. This is so very true.
So glad you enjoyed the voice and realisation 😉
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My pleasure, Dale. It had a lot of power
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Wow. Thank you.
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I can tell you did some research, and I like how this is written in Pachacuti’s voice.
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That I did… then was drowning in so much information I worried I’d lose myself… and my story!
Glad you liked the voice.
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I did! (Personally, I’d leave out the last sentence–because to me, that sounds like you, not him.) 🙂
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OK. I will go change it. Need that number to stay at 150….
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I changed the last line, please let me know what you think….
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Oh, you didn’t have to change it for me–but I do like this better. I wasn’t thinking word count. 😉
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No. I actually agree with you. I didn’t like the last line! I suppose I could have added more in the main text and leave it end with “Pray to their god”… I may actually consider it
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This is a rarity indeed. I played around and removed the last sentence!
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I like it!
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Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate your critique. I think it does end better like this.
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You’re quite welcome!
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😀
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So refreshing to hear the Inca’s side of the story, as so much of history is written from the point of view of the victor. I love the snide remark about the Spanish, daring to call themselves conquistadors! It must have seemed rather unfair to have your civilization ruined just because gunpowder and Germs hadnt made their way across the ocean yet.
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Thank you, Andrea!
It is quite ironic, really since they did the same to increase their own empires 😉 Though not through gunpowder 😉
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We’re all the same at the core,I guess!
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Well done, Dale. I’m sure the Incas felt exactly this way.
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Thank you, John. So glad it worked for you.
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So sad that man must pillage to progress. You captured it so well.
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And all over the globe, over millennia…
Thank you, Violet.
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I could see the gold as I read that. And the bright coloured weavings. And the flowers, dahlias for sure. Sad that such a vibrant culture could not survive.
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Thank you, Crispina. There was so much to say in 150 words… I could have gone on for thrice that amount and still left a lot unsaid!
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I know. I think that’s what I enjoy about the challenges. Having to keep the wordcount down. Haven’t had to work to that since I left work.
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Me too. I swear I think in 150 words or less 😉
Once I started reading about this, I was deep in and then had to decide what stayed and “go’ed” 😉
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Difficult, isn’t it. And we wonder why news report don’t tell the full story 🙂
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Hah! One would think they would know how to hone in on the important stuff… 😉
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It’s probably the important stuff that throws them.
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True that
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🙂
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You’re ability to hone these challenges precisely is more than impressive. Well done.
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Thank you, Monika. I guess the more I do, the more comfortable(ish) I get. Mind you, I buggered around with this one, modifying it twice AFTER pressing publish!
So glad you liked.
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Modifying it twice?? Are you freaking kidding me?? The draft counter would explode from over use if I had to contribute one of those! SmileyWerenotworthy.gif
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LOL! Yeah… modifying twice AFTER I published! Not counting the before thinking I was finished and realising it was lacking…
Stawp it!
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Yes Dale, you did this one so well 🤭
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Thank you Willow! Why the 🤭? Is it coz you fib? 🤣
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No I just think it’s a neat imoji , I see it as blowing a kiss
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Awww… me likey…😘
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Me too 💜
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Wow. Amazing research and story Dale. Visiting some of the Inca ruins is on my bucket list. There was a documentary on about a month ago that was really eye opening. They are using new radar that is finding that their Empire was MUCH larger and stretch farther than anyone ever imagined. I think it was a Discovery documentary.
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Thanks, Jan!
How cool to have landed on that documentary. They are a fascinating people.
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The way religions and cultures fight each other, never changes – and never stops, does it. Cusco is an amazing place, but imagine how it would have been if the Incas still ruled.
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I can only imagine…
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Q,
The Spaniards laid waste to so many cultures though out the world, all in the name of expansionist power for the throne. It really does say everything about what ‘progress’ is assumed to be and what it really is. Because in all that pillaging, they were deemed to be the progress in the world. When in reality, progress was happening in a much more sustainable way by those who were defeated. Sadly.
Lots of homework goes into this, well done!
B
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Q,
They did at that. Progress is all in the eye of the beholder, eh? And sadly, yes. It seems the cultures who respect Mother Earth are the ones that get decimated. How bass ackwards is that?
Yes indeed! Lots of homework!! And thanks!
Q
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Progress, or the idea, is a self motivated one. So it really comes down to what Negan said. Nobody ever thinks they are the evil one. True thing.
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That is the truth, right there. I’m sure even Alpha doesn’t think she’s the evil one… nahhh…she KNOWS she’s the evil one!
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Well . . maybe Alpha does. But she’s a whole ‘nother situation, ain’t she?
Buahahaha! I didn’t read your next line before writing that.
There’s that great minds thing working . . .
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Ha ha ha! Love it 😉
Yessiree GMTA 😉
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Fo. Shiz! 🙂
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Uh huh! 😀
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You know it!
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🙂
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As I’m reading the whole write. I felt you’ve done your research and you did and wrote everything well from the heart.
Well done my friend. 🙂
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Why thank you, kind sir!
There was so much info, it was hard to pick and choose and not pass the 150 word limit!
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You’re welcome, Dale.
You wrote and did a fantastic work.
I’m so proud of you. 🙂
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Thank you, Charlie! Sweet of you to say!
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🙂
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Interesting bit of history I hadn’t heard. Good job. Thanks.
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Thank you, Ina. These challenges make me do research – some interesting stuff!
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As others have said, you create a great voice to tell the bloodthirsty story. Well done.
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Thank you, Francine.
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Another good one! I’m sorry I’ve been remiss–working a ton! Day job getting in the way:).
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Please. I don’t expect everyone to read everything 😉
Damn job…
And thank you.
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This pesky needing to make a living thing :-).
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Dang it. Annoys the heck outta me.
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Well said! I think they should use the $$$ gathered up to rebuild Notre Dame and help the poor instead. ⚡️💥
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That too!
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