Crimson’s Creative Challenge is upon us once again. Though we can respond in so many ways, I was compelled to go with both poetry AND responding photo (OK, I often include a responding photo without saying so 😉 )
To find out how to respond, just click here and Crispina lays it all out! Thanks for the challenge!
Worth the Risk
Way up high and out of reach
Visible but to discerning eye
Accessibility, an illusion
To most, the climb too high
No path to speak of, here
Must not have fear of risk
Briers and brambles will hinder
And still, arrival guarantees no bliss
No promise made, is the one thing certain
Though a measure of satisfaction may be derived
To have made the journey with heart wide open
Will always be better than to never have tried.
~ 81 words
Like your poem, like the sentiment. And like your answering photo. Good take all round, Dale. Big smiles ….
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Thank you, Crispina.
Glad you like!
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And why aren’t you in bed. It’s late where you are. 🙂
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My bloody dog… but I went right after!
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Woof!
I think WP is having problems waking. the text keeps breaking up. My excuse for any typos. Of course, it could be my computer. Slow write to screen
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Hmmm. Text breaking up how?
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Like it’s not firing on all pixels. But like an old dot-matrix printer in need of new ribbon. Okay, I show my age.
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Haha! And yet, I understand… guess I’m no spring chicken, either!
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Established, knowing, wise womenm that’s us.
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Is that what we are calling it? Good. I like it.
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Except women has only one -m-. Told you, can’t see.
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I definitely was NOT going to call you on your computer’s stutter… 😉
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Cheers 🙂
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And it’s raining cats and dogs so I get to stay home today! Woot!
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A poem! I have so much admiration for people who can poem, it’s really good like it
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Thank you so much, Shrawls! I dunno that I can poem, but I try every now and again anyway. Very glad you like!
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A beautiful poem on more than one level. I take it yours is the second photo, beautiful Tuscany 💜
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Thank you, Willow. Much appreciated coming from you.
Yes, it is and yes, in Tuscany 😊🧡
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Well done you 💜
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🧡🧡
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I admire poets – especially because my poetry skill is limited … so well done stepping outside the box. Many times you conclude with a surprise or zing, but not this time. Your tone resembled the climb up the hill. Well done, Dale.
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So do I… which is why I keep trying and doubting myself.
Thank you, Frank.
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Good one – and a moral too!
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Thank you!
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I like the combination of physical and metaphorical with your poem and photo, Dale, and I particularly like the last stanza. Good response with the photo, too!
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Thank you, Merril!
And here I was thinking… I dunno…glad you liked my combo and photo 😊
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I’m confused. . .but you’re welcome. 😉
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Confused?
I wasn’t all that satisfied with it… call it writer’s insecurity 🙂
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Oh, I understand what you meant. Yeah–it’s sometimes hard to know what to make of one’s own work. I think you could make a few lines less “wordy” perhaps–especially the second stanza–but that’s just my opinion. And it’s tricky if there’s a word count. 🙂
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Yeah. It bugged me! I just might play with it.
And I value your opinion.
🙂
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🙂
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Tweaked 😉
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A wonderful poem. Reminds of how I feel about finishing my book writing. It’s a long, uphill slog, with no guarantee of quality at the end. But I will be better for having made the effort.
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Thank you, Eilene!
I’m so glad you felt that – it could apply to so many things, finishing writing a book, love, moving 😉
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Excellent poem and advice, Dale. 😀
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Thank you, John. 🙂
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You are so welcome.
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😊
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Q,
Dare I say . . . and I begin with ‘Dare’ because I want you to know I’m dealing up the legit reserve for this compliment . . . your poetry has gotten stronger than ever.
You made short shrift of your post last night in our conversation, and mind you . . at the time I wasn’t sure what you’d written. I didn’t know it was poetry and I sure as hell didn’t know it was this. Which isn’t short shrift by any measure of the term.
I’m glad you do this as part of the challenges you take part in, but personally, I would like to see a stand alone some time. Maybe a poem that is inspired by a photograph you take or an exchange you have or just a thought in your head.
Beautiful.
B
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B,
Dare away as that is high praise indeed.
I’m kinda glad you didn’t read it last night because after a small suggestion from a real poet, I made a few changes and think it is a tad better. I keep trying at it (And I don’t know why) so am glad when it gets good marks. 🙂
I shall take your remark into consideration… or more like a challenge 😉 Mind you, one of the prompts made me take one of my own out of the drafts and put it out there rather than keep it hidden. That said, I shall get my noggin workin’.
Thank you. Means a lot.
Q
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High praise is reserved for special stuff like this.
Well whatever it was, worked. Magnificently. And I’m not the biggest poetry fan, so the praise is coming from a place where I relate to the writing. Bigly.
I think it would be interesting as all get out.
But of course! 🙂
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Blushing now…
So very glad it did! Hey, neither am I! LOL! But somehow I feel compelled to keep trying. And then to get this from a writer I admire bigly? Chuffed is not enough.
Well then. I shall see what I can do.
Hey! That’s my line! 😀
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It’s great writing, Q.
And that chuffed is a fun word, ain’t it?
Just go for it. The thing with poetry is that the moment is when you have to strike. After which you have to stick there until it’s done or you lose that ‘moment’. Which is maddening.
Seriously?
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Thank you, B. Truly.
I just love it. It fits where others don’t!
Will do. And that is so for much of our writing, don’t you think? And oh-so maddening when you think you can write it later but it is gone.
No? OK. I must have had a moment there 😉
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Strike while the creative iron is hot, or else.
Like when you were under the impression that Michael J. Fox belonged to you’s guys . . .
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Darn tootin’! Which is why I used pen and paper yesterday!!
Oh. No.
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Pen and paper . . wow. I don’t know if I remember HOW to write!
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Funny man. True, I’ve never seen your penmanship…
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It died.
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Dang
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And no . . signing my name doesn’t count since that’s indecipherable.
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Wouldn’t know.
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I love the juxtaposition of the photo–the tangible–and the words that seem to apply to the metaphorical journey of life. Well done!
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Thank you so much, Kristine.
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I think you may get shot before you manage to reach to top. Looks like a pillbox to me!
Nice poem.
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It’s not what you look at Peter, it’s what you see! Oh wait, that’s Friday Fictioneers’ motto. Still 😉
Thanks
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I join you on your journey, Dale.. Who knows where it ends but what a loss to not make the attempt. Good poem. I like the lack of clarity in the picture. Lots of underbrush.
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Thank you, Ina.
Who knows where we are going but go, we must!
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As always, 🌟for you.
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As shucks… you are too generous…
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True… your poem is a Machu Picchu!
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Is it now? 😉
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