Good Wednesday morning, my peeps! The sun has been shining for four days now! Shhhh….don’t say anything, we don’t want to hex ourselves!
This week, Rochelle has given us her own photo to work with. Tell you what. I would not mind at all to find myself sitting in an airport waiting for my own flight. Till then, I guess I can only write about it! Do join in with your 100-word story about today’s pic. G’head. It’s fun!
Alone, Together
Airports are great. They are the perfect places to be all alone whilst completely surrounded. You can stuff your nose into a book or eReader, use your computer, your cellphone, your electronic devices, and no one bothers you.
When tired of focussing on your device of choice, you can sit back and watch the people around you – make up stories about why they are there, who they are waiting for, where they are going. I love to people watch and create scenarios.
What’s my story, you ask? I’m just watching people, patiently waiting for my plane. Running away from home.
I like how you structured this story. Yea, I too enjoy to people watch in such situations. But I’m not running away. That really made the story.
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Thank you, Crispina. Had to add a li’l something not too hum-ho 😉
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It works. It that colour flash that sets the room. Know what I mean.
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I do 🙂
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Knew you would.
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I love to people watch 💕
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It is so fun!
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Yes indeed it is 💜
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I like the way the point of the story comes only at the end
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Thank you, Neil.
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Zing … I had no clue that ending was coming.
FYI: In case you don’t know, Elton concert this weekend. Normal 1 AM Saturday start time.
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Zing-a-ling! Good 🙂
No way!!! Wooooot!! I’ll be there!
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Dear Dale,
One minute it seems you’re writing a documentary and the next you’re slapping me in the face with the very personal aspect. I love the way the last line brought it in for a crash landing. Well done, my friend.
Shalom and lotsa hugs,
Rochelle
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Q,
As a writer, that’s what it is. The world is what we make it and that’s the beauty of the thing. There are times when I wish I was a painter, since that lends itself more to my personality. And I guess I could do the same thing with that, as far as the inspiration of mysteries that walk by. But as a writer, it’s the immediacy of constructing a story from the void that really gets me.
Well spun! You’ve performed a double launch angle this morning as far as creative perspective is concerned. From shutter bug to writer. Brava!
B
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B,
Writing, painting, music – all lend themselves to this.
Have you ever tried painting? Mind you, your writer’s talents are fabulous. You have such a way with the phrase…
Thank you! So glad you liked my dual attempts this morn.!
Q
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I tried painting but I can’t. Ain’t working.
I guess it’s just one of those things, you don’t appreciate the talent you have and you automatically want some other talent instead.
You weren’t daunted by the dual dimensions so you went and did it!
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I feel ya. I’ve tried it myself and what my mind sees, my hand refuses to reproduce!!
True thing. It’s like hair 😉 You have curly, you wish it was straight; straight, you wish you had curls 😉
I was not. For me, the two are separate creative outlets that I occasionally put together 😉
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Outside of crafts, nada colada. I can’t do anything with a canvas.
I just want to keep my hair.
I assume that was about pictures and writing . . .
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Weirdly, I can draw on cakes… on paper? Zilch.
I hear ya, friend!
You would assume correctly.
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I can’t hardly even write any longer, much less paint.
I always do. 😉
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🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐
Assume, eh? Uh huh…
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Skillful interpretation of the what’s what from a certified expert is the way I like to describe it.
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Well, when you put it that way…
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Buahahaha!
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😀
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MUAH!
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MWAH!!
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Clever last line! Not just a twist to make the story zing – which it does, of course – but another example of your observation of the almost complete anonymity one gains in an airport.
Well done!
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Thank you so much, Penny!
Your observations are always so wonderful to read.
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Now that was a smooth take off until it crash landed. In a good way, that is. Delectable Dale, another delightful story from you.
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Somehow you ended up in Spam, Neel!
Thank you for the great comment! Much appreciated.
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Ah! Well then, makes perfect sense … for what else is there to do, whilst running away from home? 😉
Fun, and cleverly done! 🙂
XOXO
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Thank you, kind one! xoxo
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🙂
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I’m sure airports are so chock full of interesting stories they could fill books with every flight that goes out. It sounds like the narrator’s story is just as interesting as any of those she’s watching.
-David
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No doubt. There was (is?) a show on CBC in Canada about departures and arrivals, called Hello Goodbye. A guy interviews people to find out their stories. Sooo goood. Real tear jerkers.
And thank you 🙂
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Running away from home. Good one, Dale.
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Not that I ever (EVER) thought of doing the same… 😇😎
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Well I have. 😀
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K, I’m totally lying…
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😂 Let’s see. Kids with the flu. Electricity out, Car won’t start. Out of coffee. Time to hit the silk.
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Buahahaha!!!
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I know right?
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Brilliantly told story! I’m very intrigued 🙂
-Rachel
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Thank you, Rachel.
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My guess is that you say you like it to calm your nerves that are jangling because you are running away… Love the twist.
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Quite possibly, Trent.
Glad you did.
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Well done! As others have said, the zap at the end makes us sit up and pay attention.
It’s been raining here — or at least scattered showering— off and on for a week. Thanks so much for sharing! 🙂
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Thank you, Christine! Love that.
We’ve had more than our share, thank you, very much. Calling for more tomorrow, ‘parently… we shall see…
Thanks so much for reading.
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We’re heading into a rainy weekend; it started two hours ago and we’re supposed to get 3″ between now and Saturday. Perfect timing!
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Ugh…
Unless it is needed…
Then great 😉
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Running away? Please tell me you’ve taken a laptop with you – I’ll really miss your stories if you haven’t!
My FriFic tale!
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Awwww…. Of course I will!
What a sweet thing to say!
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Phew, what a relief!
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😄
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I’ve always said airports are such a really nice source of all kinds of madcap adventures
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That they are.
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Four days of sunshine makes waiting in an airport not so horrible. Happy trails. 😊
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That’s what I am thinking.
Don’t I wish…
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What a zinger of a closing sentence. I wonder what story has lead to that moment.
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Thank you, Jilly. Can’t be all easy-peasy, eh?
I wonder as well…
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Perfectly crafted! Totally believable. Well done Dale.
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Thank you, Peter!
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Dale, I’m an inveterate people-watcher, too. I’m never bored at the airport! Excellent story, as usual, with a surprise twist at the end.
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I think we writers all are to a certain extent!
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Yup. They’re our “material” 🙂
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Exackery!
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Dale, this is greatly crafted and giving people a story or situation is interesting. 🙂
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Thank you, Charlie.
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You welcome. 🙂
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Hey you better come back! LOL
I actually love sitting in airports with a cool magazine…and same here, once i’m done I love people watching 🙂 Safe travels! XOXO
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I wish I was going somewhere!!
XOXO
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You’ve got to love an airport, a place of unfulfilled and completed dreams. Nice one Dale
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Yes!
Thank you, Shrawls!
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it doesn’t look like a story with a happy ending. but hope springs eternal.
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Who knows? Maybe its her time!
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Everyone has a story to tell, sounds like she has an interesting one to share.
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She just might!
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Agree!
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🙂
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Ooo the real story only just began. What a great opener!
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Thank you, Tannille!
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You turned that nicely at the end. And left me wanting more.
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Excellent! Then I am glad
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You tell a great twisty-ending story. I’m with you about airports. I spent time in them coming and going to Minneapolis this past weekend. My stories would be about what I saw and heard while waiting with other wheelchair people lined up to board the plane.
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Thank you, Ina. I’m sure your story would be most interesting!
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Clever last line to tie it all together in a surprise ending. I love the title “Alone, Together”. Kind of like, When I drink alone, I prefer to be by myself. Lol.
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Thank you, Jan. Glad you liked.
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Nicely done, Dale! I liked the little twist. 🙂
I wish the sun would come out and blow away this icky stuff. Heavy rain overnight, and now we have a wet basement. There are lots of roads closed and even our Patco train system. More rain coming today. UGH.
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Thank you, Merril.
UGH squared… Our four days of sun has come to an end. The sky is that pale shade of grey that just foretells of rain. I was hoping my boss’ call meant to not come in but instead, she asked me to come in later. At 4. Oh well. It is my Friday so the next two are off and apparently the sun will be on.
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Hope work and play go well for you! 🙂
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Thank you!
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LOL…I wondered where that was going. Very clever, Dale. As always.
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Thank you, George 😊
Much appreciated!
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I was wondering at the title until, wham, you slammed us with that last line. Brilliant.
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Thank you, Gabi! Glad I slammed – so to speak…
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I like the rather matter-of-fact way the last sentence is delivered. More impact!
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So glad it works!
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As a sad end but I love the idea of people watching and making up stories
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It could be sad… or a new beginning 🙂
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Agree with you. Airport is a nice place to watch people as well as to do things you want, within certain limits. Kind of expensive, don’t you think. A shopping mall may serve the same purpose for free, almost!
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Thank you Abhijit. Not quite a place she likes to go to.
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Great ending – and I love the way you start the last paragraph with a question to the reader. Very clever story.
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Thank you very much, Margaret
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A good and well-written story with a great surprise ending, Dale. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you, Suzanne. 🙂
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Great ending to a thoughtful tale.
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Thank you, Liz!
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I love the gentle and reflective tone of your story, fits so well with your experience of gazing around you in the airport. Nicely done.
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Thank you, Francine. So glad you liked.
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Running away from home, sounds like a wish rather than a reality here.
A made up story she wants to believe, perhaps.
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It just might at that!
Methinks so. Mayhaps.
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Everyone has a story and hers seems complicated. Well penned! 🙂
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Thank you, Brenda. Glad you thought so.
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Wonderfully intriguing end!
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Thank you, Dawn. 🙂
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She is watching others but not telling her own story, is she?
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Right…
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The twist at the end is brilliantly understated. Très bien fait, ma chère!
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Merci! Suis contente que tu as aimé!
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Pas de soucis! 🙂
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That is so French from France!
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Ah bon? 😉
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Oui, oui. When I was on dating apps, that was a dead giveaway to back out…
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Hahaha! Good thing I’m not asking you out on a date. 😉
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Let’s just say I had some memorable yet forgettable experiences.
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“Memorable yet forgettable” – love the contradiction! 🙂
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Right!! LOL!
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Wow… even better to be alone in a crowd if you are escaping from something (even more if it’s someone)
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True that!!
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Well-structured and the ending was perfect.
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Thank you, Lisa.
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Great musing Dale. I love waiting for planes for all the reasons you quoted and I love the idea I’m escaping something, even if it is only the weather these days
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Thank you, Michael.
I could use a good escape eight now!
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eight now, what’s that, eight escapes? 🙂
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