Good Wednesday morning, Friends! Hope your day is a fabulous one! This week, our fearless leader, Rochelle, has chosen an image by Roger Bultot. Lemme tell you a story…
And if you wanna tell me a story, well then, click on the blue frog below and add your link!
The Talk
Being summoned by one’s son is enough to make a mother anxious. He had asked her to meet him as he needed to speak to her alone. She figured he wanted to talk about the tension in the house which had been palpable lately.
So, not.
Nothing could have prepared her for what he had to say. It took everything in her power not to cover her too-expressive eyes with her hands in an attempt to hide her stupefaction. She hoped her expression remained neutral yet open and understanding as she listened in earnest.
Inside, her emotions were in turmoil.
Wow! The mind boggles, the speculations tumble, the desire to nag for information nigh outstrips my sense of proper composure. Nice one, Dale.
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Whoa! Thank you, Crispina. I was hoping for that kind of reaction.
So glad you liked.
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Sort of, yes!
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Hah!
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I think they’re going to be OK. Nicely written, Dale
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Thank you, Neil.
I sure hope so 🙂
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We have all been there. Expressed so well Dale 💜
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Thank you, Willow. So very glad you thought so. 🧡🧡
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I did Sis I did 💜
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Sweet! 🧡🧡
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Dear Dale,
Okay, Missy, this one begs for a sequel. You left my curiosity at high pique. At any rate, well written as always.
Shalom and lotsa hugs,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Ha ha! I thank you and shall have to see if a sequel can be had 😉
Shalom and lotsa love,
Dale
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Subtle and sensitive.
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Thank you, ce!
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Q,
This one hundred can best be described by the old adage, leave ’em wanting more.
It’s ominous yet charming, daunting yet completely relatable. What IS it about family that brings every single emotion to the fore and makes your knees feel as if they’re made with butter? Because whatever it is, you’ve perfectly encapsulated it with this dish. In the foreboding anxiety, the hard silence and most of all . . those questions that tumble around inside your head as you wait for the answers.
Alas, you ran out of words. Purposely.
Clever.
B
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B,
What a fantabulous comment. I struggled with this one. Started it last night. Typed the 100 words. Wasn’t satisfied. Scrapped most of it and started over. Still wondered if I did it justice. Almost changed it again but pressed “Publish” instead. So, your comment really pleases!
Alas…
Glad you thought so.
Q
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Isn’t that how it goes though? You write something that knocks it out of the park but you ain’t seeing it because you’re too close. It is sort of like when you are re-arranging furniture in your living room and you finally give up. And then someone comes over and is like “Wow, love what you’ve done with the place!”. Our eyes deceive us into thinking we need more, even when it’s perfect.
This was perfect.
Glad you pressed “Publish”. 🙂
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It seems to be the case. That crappy self-doubt creeps in, grabs hold, till you shake it off with a “so be it” and press Go.
What a great analogy (you do rock at that…)
Muchas gracias!
Me too… you mocking me? 😛
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Ugh to self doubt! But hey, it comes with the writer’s tool belt and it ain’t for show. It’s why you need to use your hammer smartly.
De Nightingale.
I don’t mock. Although, for those who hail from Bahstahn, that IS how my name sounds. Hey Mock! Ovah heeah!
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Ugh. Then again, that does make us try harder, no? And to know when to nod your head in quasi-satisfaction and put it out there.
LOL!
Of course you don’t and that is exactly how it would sound!
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It makes us go deeper, and that’s where the oil is. I don’t know about you, but when I start really digging, it’s like time spins like wildfire. It’s nothing to lose a couple hours as if it’s five minutes time.
😉
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Oh yeah. Most definitely.
And yes, times flies – not always a good thing when it’s past 1 am and you have to get up early-ish the next day!
😀
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LOL! No, it’s not a good thing in that instance. But I do remember writing a short story once, this was YEARS ago. It was a weekend, early morning. I turned on some tunes, was all by my lonesome, and the next thing I knew it was the middle of the day. Then early evening And then night. Just like that.
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😊😉
And it must have been something fabulous…
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I wonder if I still have it. I remember it was about a guy who had gone mad. He was paralyzed in a hospital bed, crafting scenarios in which he would wreak havoc once again, if he ever had the chance.
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Oh wow… Now I wanna read it!
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Hmmm. I wonder where in the name of Hades I might have stuck it.
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Sigh. You are just a tease, yanno that?
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Hey, I’m curious about reading it too. Then again, it might be total shite.
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Somehow I doubt it…
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Ya never know, 😉
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Well…nkay…but I’ve got a feeling…woooo hooo….
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If nothing else, it would be interesting to read. Seeing as how I was not writing when I wrote this, if that makes sense.
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It does. And yes. Do find it… And share with moi! Por favor…
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Will do ma bestest and jes of course!
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😘
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Hmmm. I think I’ve been there before. Yep. Many times. Good job.
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Thank you, Jan. I’m sure most parents have had moments…
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The tension in the house must have been high, thus they had to have a conversation in another place.
Sometimes, it’s better to have a change of place. Let the negative emotions/feelings out and get them clarified or communicated. Can’t allow misunderstandings to continue.
I thought we’d learn what they discussed! Hope all is well!
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And was not meant for all the ears in the house.
Best to change venue, for sure.
Some things must remain under wraps!
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you created a wonderful sense of anticipation, and left me wanting to read more!
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Thank you, Jim. Music to a writer’s ears!
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Great tension, Dale. I thought up my own resolution.Good one.
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Thank you, John. I like that you did.
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Well, whatever that is, I hope she manages the balance of not shutting down the reaction he needs while also not flooding him with a reaction he dreads …
Well done, Dale! This transmitted so well the anticipation, the tension, the wish to be there but also the shock of whatever-it-is. NICE!!!
🙂
Na’ama
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Jeez… How did I miss this great comment? I so hope she does, too.
Thank you! I’m ridiculously pleased you think so.
🙂
Dale
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Ridiculously pleased is a great place to be! Hugs to ya!
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It is!
Hugs right back. Hope you have A/C where you are!
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Yep. Have A/C! 🙂
Been out in the heat of the day to “air the kids” a bit so they don’t go stir crazy, but it was nice and cool indoors, and the evening cool was nice. 🙂
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Sweet… Here, I am very thankful to have a pool…
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🙂 Yeah! Pool is be good. Me no have pool.
Me have ice-pops.
Is good, too. … 😉
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Pool is necessity as me no have A/C at this time…
Come Monday, my story be different…
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Ah… me hope you be getting an A/C! 🙂
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Monday.
MONDAY!
M-O-N-D-A-Y!!!
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wooohooo!!! Me be doing the “Monday is be a COOL day” dance!
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Ya baby!!!
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This would make a great opening grabber for a novel!
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Thank you, Christine! Dunno that I’d have the guts to…
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Good one, Dale. Inquiring minds are wondering what he said…
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Thank you, Maria. Gotta leave ’em wanting more, eh?
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The mind races but it will always be something you would never have expected. Great, thought-provoking tale, Dale.
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Thank you, Jilly. Sometimes you can have an inkling. But not this time!
Glad you enjoyed.
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At least they’re talking – that’s a start.
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And he trusted her with what he had to say.
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Good take Dale……. leave ’em wondering!
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Thank you, Di!
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You made me curious but yes, everyone has their secrets. Nicely done.
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Thank you, Indira. Yes, some things cannot be shared at large.
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Definitely makes me wonder…
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Good … 😉
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Oh come on, what did he say?! 😉
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Something that turned her world upside down!
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Such a tease!
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Tee hee!!
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N-o-o-o-o! You can’t leave us here, wondering what the heck is going on. Oh, wait, yes you can. Love this. So glad you didn’t scrap it.
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Y-e-e-e-e-s-s-s! Tee hee…Darn right, I can 😉
Me too…
And thank you.
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It’s safe to say, we’ve all been in that situation with a one on one conversation that one knows its not going to be a good one.
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I think you’re right. I can’t say if this was a conversation that was bad or good, though. I think it was a share that the mother was not expecting.
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The unexpected is usually we’re anyone would feel surprised. Good or bad – its up to the person and see how well they take the news.
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Right.
You are a very serious one, aren’t you, Charlie?
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I’m pretty neutral. However, I do have moments we’re I’m goofy with a sense of humor and other times…I do get a bit serious but I’m mostly thinking about life.
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Hmmm… your comments are always so serious 😉
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🙂
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Left us hanging off the edge of our seats… Great catcher you wrote here.
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Thank you Jelli Bear!
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Good stuff Dale, I’m reading this and waiting for the pay off, what is the deal?? I want more!!
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Thank you. Sometimes you just gotta leave ’em hanging, Shrawls!
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Begging for more!
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Well that’s about as open-ended and suspenseful a story as they come. Is there going to be a sequel??
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Thank you. Hope you liked. I doubt it. Not big on sequals in this forum…
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Yes, I did like it, wonderful telling and setting the suspense, Dale.
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oh my, is he finally getting out of the closet?
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I don’t think so! I would like to think Mom would know something like that…
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There’s every chance she wouldn’t, I fear, Dale
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Ooh, what, what?! Good word, “stupefaction” 🙂
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Yes! Thanks. I just didn’t want to use the old “shock”…
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Brilliant take, Dale. Teasing us, eh? Mean! I can only hope it’s nothing bad, like a disease or leaving and never wanting to come back.
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Thank you, Gabi. It’s rare I’m mean, eh? 😉
I don’t think it’s those things…
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You have me wondering and speculating … and all that from a statue dedicated to Cousin It.
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😊
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Well done, and great spin-off from the photo. . .but now I want to know what happened!
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Thank you, Merril … Sometimes you just have to leave ’em hanging 😉
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Like everyone else, you have me on the edge of my seat wondering what he told her! But I like that you focused on her reaction, which in many ways is more moving than whatever it’s in response to. Her son told her *something* that was utterly unexpected and set her emotions into turmoil — and yet she pushed down that negative reaction and tried to be there for him, to be open and supportive. That’s what gives me hope that they’re going to be okay.
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Thank you so much, Joy.
I like to think they will be ok, too
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Yes, indeed. The cliffhanger has us all waiting with bated breath.
BUT … I’m sure all who are mothers can relatete and sorta know that if there’s dialog there’s hope of answers. I hope their conversation is a productive one. Communication is always key. Nicely written, Dale. I like what you’ve written with the photo prompt this week.
Isadora 😎
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I’ve no doubt there are mothers who can relate.
And yes. The fact he wanted to share with her is a positive thing.
So glad you liked
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I want to know what her son said! Nicely done, Dale!
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Thanks, Brenda. That’s a good sign!
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Oh, BOY! Been there. Done that. You got me uncomfortable, knowing how that mom feels. And you left us all dangling, worrying about what sonny boy said. GOOD JOB!
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Yay! Glad am I to get such a comment from you 😊
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Dang it! If my son ever tells me he wants to be a space pirate I’ll ask him when he was born, who his mom is, and why didn’t I know about him until now.
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Right? This is exactly it!!
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I love the fact you don’t say what the talk was about and let the reader make their own decisions, which is important because every reader will have their own definition of what will make them want to cover their eyes as their child speaks, not only, if there is slight disappointment, but more importantly for what that child may experience as a result of The Talk. Excellent.
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Thank you so much, Sascha. I cannot tell you how much this comment hits the mark.
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What exactly did he say?
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That was for her ears only.
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How very discreet of you, Dale, to keep the son’s confidence like that! and now we’re all bursting with curiosity! Really nicely written, and an excellent take on the prompt.
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Thank you so much, Penny. Trust is not to be toyed with, I think
So very glad you think so. Your comments are always so well thought out and expressed.
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Great capture of a mother’s worry.
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Thank you, Tannille.
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I can picture that.
Of course it’s usually the mum or dad summoning the offspring for “The Talk”. Tables turned.
I shall no doubt be spending hours wondering what the lad was saying.
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When a child (even if an adult) summons the parent, how can one not feel anxious?
Ahhh… you can join the rest 😉
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Ack, Don’t leave me this way. I hate not knowing. Nicely done, regardless.
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Thank you, Jo. Sorry. She didn’t share with me!
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I know the feeling, Dale.
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Stingy buggers, they are.
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A good story with powerful language Dale. You left us hanging from a mighty big cliff. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you, Suzanne
Sorry about that 😉
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You’re such a terrible tease! I was ready to jump from the cliff – The End!
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Ah, a cliff hanger. Now, I can jump off and parasail away with my imagination. Thanks, Thunder!
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The possibilities rumble through my mind – must be bad. Leaving the country, going to jail, found out who his real father was?? The mad thoughts go on…
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Let those possibilities rumble away…
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Oh you tease Dale, now that’s how to do a cliffhanger!!!
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Woot! 😁
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Hey, it’s not fair to leave us hanging like that! 😉 What in the world could he have told her? Hoping there will be a sequel. 🙂
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Sorry!! 😇
Doubtful there will be one…
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Pas de souci!! 😉
C’est dommage… (but thanks for not getting my hopes up. :-))
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Haha!
Nah…it feels like the mother must keep the son’s confidence…
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Ahhh… d’accord. 🙂
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Certaines choses ne sont pas partageables…
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Absolument.
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Omg what? What did he say? Oh you’ve kept me hanging, Dale
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I dunno! But it sure is serious!
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