My “prosery” post for Merril’s prompt yesterday on dVerse. Our pieces cannot be longer than 144 words. Mine is exactly 144 words. The bold line comes from a poem by Jane Hirshfield.
Thanks for constantly challenging me, Merril!
Love, Deserved
“Look at her. She never has any trouble finding boyfriends. What’s so special about her?”
I didn’t even know they were talking about me back then. I don’t think I even pondered this at all. Maybe that’s what was supposedly so special about me. I didn’t try to be anything or anyone else but myself. I took life in stride because that’s how I roll. My friends, some still around, seemed to appreciate me for me.
I don’t know why I was surprised every time love started or ended. Maybe it was because I half-believed I didn’t even deserve love in the first place.
However, since those teenage years, life has taught me much. I have learned and gained wisdom. I’ve had my share of hits and misses, highs and lows, joys and sorrows. Know what I have discovered?
Everyone is deserving of love.
Hits and misses, we all gets them how we continue using the lessons learned, there in lies the answer to your question
Have a safe healthy week
Much❤love
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Thank you, Gillena. Yes, indeed!
Right back at you!
xoxo
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Yes! Everyone is deserving of love! 🙂
Great piece, Dale! 🙂
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Thanks, Na’ama! 🙂
Glad you thought so 😀
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Me did! 🙂
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🙂
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Great last line, Dale. Perception from others doesn’t tell the whole story of love, insecurities and hurt. There is always a story within the story.
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Thank you very much, George!
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Awww–you are so right! Love it. I also like the image.
Thanks for joining in the fun here. 😀
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Thanks for challenging me, Merril! Very glad I did!
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I’m glad you did, too! I know you probably don’t want to tackle some of the more complicated poetry prompts, but I thought you’d enjoy this one.
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You are right… I might try now and again anyway 😉
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Please do.
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Sweet!
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Amen, Dale. Loved this.
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Amen, John.
So glad you did.
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😁
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lovely piece with a wise conclusion 🙂
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Thank you, Kate.
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a pleasure Dale!
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🙂
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The last line sums it all up with words of wisdom.
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Thank you!
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Bang on. Endorse the sentiment fully. Just stop trying and know that what will happen will happen.
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Thanks, my friend. And So true.
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We have agreement 🙂
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We do!!
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🙂
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And it’s an Amen from me too, Dale. I loved this and the accompanying artwork is delightful. Thank you for your wise words.
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Thank you, Jilly. So glad that you do. My friend’s art is so lovely. She is always changing her styles.
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Oh, YES… so very very true, Dale!!!!!! hugs and kisses [virtual and completely harmless! 😉 ] xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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Thanks, Marina! So glad you think so.
Indeed! Virtual is the only way to go now… xoxoxo!
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😉 xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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😊😘😘
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xoxoxo
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Dear Dale,
The last line sums it up beautifully. Wonderfully written piece for (oy) yet another challenge. You do these well.
Shalom and lotsa loving hugs,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
So glad it does. And oy is right. Not saying I’ll participate every week – there are many from the FF gang who do and dverse is usually mostly poetry so… Not quite my forte
Shalom and Lotsa deserved love,
Dale
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❤
Everyone is deserving of Love.
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I agree!
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. This is lovely, Dale. So true no matter what age a person is.
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Thank you, Ina. I agree… no matter what age!
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‘Everyone is deserving of love.’ No truer words, my friend. Wouldn’t it be wonderful if we took the time to find that loveable quality in others and nurture it, help it grow.
Love these thought-provoking pieces.
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I am so glad you think so. Yes it would be wonderful!
Touched you do!
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Q,
Now more than ever, it’s important to understand what love really is. It’s not one thing, and it’s certainly not fated for simply the few. Nope, it’s something that is fed by a selfless belief in humankind. Where even the most solitary individuals among us may find themselves praying for complete strangers.
Love is the flame that provides the light inside the darkest times.
Brava young lady. 🙂
B
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B,
Yes, now more than ever.
And you have said it beautifully, Marc. Love is the fame…
Thank you, young man. 🙂
Q
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If nothing else, maybe people will see that the market isn’t the only thing that needs correcting. That would be a worthwhile lesson.
MUAH!
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I sure like to think so. Meanwhile, those of us who prefer to spread the love, will continue to do so and hope we rub off on others…
MWAH!!
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What the world needs now . . is how the song goes, eh?
MUAH!!
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Absolutely! That’s EXACTLY what it needs…
MWAH!!
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I thought you might agree. 😉
MUAH!
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You new I would 😉
MWAH!
😘
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And not just that, I knew it too! 😉
MUAH!
😘
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I know you knew! 😛
MWAH!!
😘
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Hahaha!
MUAH!
😘
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😉
MWAH!!
😘
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😘
MUAH!!
😘
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😘
MUAH!!
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Well played lovely.
😘😘
MUAH!!
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We are quite the duo is all I can say 😉
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MUAH!!
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MUAH!!
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Dynamic even
I can’t compete with that, other than to say MUAH! and MWAH! and 😘😘😘😘
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Yes, dynamic!
Ayt… Imma calm down.
MWAH! 😘😘😘😘
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Do you know how to calm down? 😉
MUAH!!
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Um… I have my moments 😉
MWAH!!
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You sure do. 😉
MUAH!!
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😉
MWAH!!
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MUAH!!!!
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Everyone IS deserving and it begins internally. Keep spreading the love, sistah!
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I believe so too, Monika! I will!
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First of all, I was so happy to see you on dVerse… we have fun three times per week so hope to see you again. Secondly, I did love the story as it tells us how you might gain that final wisdom through mistakes. Many don’t do that.
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Thank you, Björn! You can blame Merril for that. I won’t participate three times per week but now and again, I just may.
And I am very glad you enjoyed my story. You are right… some don’t learn!
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I manage the dVerse site and we have many skilled bartenders sharing the workload of doing prompts… Prosery is only every fourth week.
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Cool! I have seen that various people share the workload. Fun stuff… I’m not much of a poet but I do try now and again…
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I especially recommend the quadrille we run every second Monday.. exactly 44 words including one given word.
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Yes. I have seen Merril’s often! I just might try that one!
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I’ve officially subscribed 😉
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🙂
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aaaaawh – this is truly beautiful! Of course we all do! Sending you LOVE
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Thank you, Kiki!
Sending some right back!! xoxo
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Yes everyone deserves love and you ARE LOVED 🙂 I’ve never met anyone else who gives out more love to all those she meets, you will always have a special place in our hearts Dale 🙂
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Ohhhh…. geez, Giselle! Thank you, you are the sweetest, most generous person I know! xoxo
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True!
A very sweet write, Thunder. Thank you!
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Thank you, Sorceress!
I’m very glad you enjoyed.
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