Wow… would you lookit that. Me, combining two prompts. Who’d a thunk? It’s like this, see. I have been trying to find an original way to use Crispina‘s fabulous photo (since Thursday) – including finding some of my own to accompany it (which I did) but the words would not come. Merril told me hey, dVerse today is a quadrille – a poem in exactly 44 words, not including the titel – in which you must use the one word provided. So I did, Today the word is close. After a day out there, and despite many kind comments, I have revamped this. I didn’t like it.
A Shed of One’s Own
A room of one’s own, said she
It’s but an excuse
To close out distraction
And let her thoughts roam free
House is too crowded, she cried
Must escape the noise
A shed in the woods she found
‘Tis the perfect place to hide
MAN, I wish I had one of those right about now. Thankful for my back yard.
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So do I and so am I! 😉
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And welcome to dVerse! Hope you get as hooked on the Quadrille as we all have!
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And Thank you!
‘Tis my second time participating. Merril’s Prosery was my first and she is the one who pushes me to “work” my poetry gene which is sadly lacking. But hey, I keep plugging at it. I do like the freedom of the Quadrille, I admit.
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Sometimes I dream of a place like that too… a place where you can be by yourself… a bit like her own Walden maybe
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I do, too.
Yes – by choice, not obligation 😉
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Dear Dale,
44 wonderful words. We writers do need that quiet place to dream…to imagine…to create. Lovely.
Shalom and lotsa unobtrusive hugs,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Thank you for your kind and generous words. We definitely do need that quiet place. I’m sure those who usually have moments of alone time in their own homes are longing for it’s return!
Shalom and lotsa quiet hugs,
Dale
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I can only imagine. I remember how i used to climb the walls when all three of my kids were home. Some things I miss…and some things… 😉
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… not so much 😉
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L’chaim!
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🥂
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That would be a lovely place to have, Dale. Sigh. And it works perfectly with Crispina’s photo! I’m glad I gave you the nudge, but you wrote the 44 words.
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It would be, wouldn’t it? Deep sigh.
I was rather pleased you did push because it unblocked me!
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And clever word play with the title. 😏
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Thanks 😉
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It’s being forced to be shut in that burns me up. If I wanted to I would run a mile, but if ordered to run, every stride is agony. I used to dream of having a writers tower (now with an elevator), to have the privacy to write. In my old age, I can block out distractions anywhere. Welcome to d’Verse; a fresh voice, a new pair of eyes.
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That exactly it. If it were our choice, no problem. Because we have to? No, no, no!
Thank you for the welcome, Glenn!
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Awesome, Dale! Perfect form and nice allusion to Woolf. We all need that shed 🙂
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Aww thanks, SD!
Glad you liked my allusion to Woolf 😉
We do. Especially now that we are all cooped up with familly – well, some of us!
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You;’re welcome, Dale. I love clever writing and allusion is one of my favourite literary devices to employ. Yes, cooped up with family sums it up for many of us 🙂
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Clever! Well now I’m really chuffed 😉
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Chuffed, now there’s a word I don’t here in everyday language here in Newfoundland. Glad you are really chuffed because your poetry left me chuffed 🙂
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You’re a Newfie! I knew you were good people…
I love the word Chuffed. I use it often 😉
It’s just the perfect between pleased and happy, don’t you think?
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Yes, my dear, as Newfie as dey gets 🙂 And thank you for that. Yes, a great word, indeed. 🙂
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How’s it cutting?
😉
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Dale, Dale, Dale… the correct vernacular is: how’s she cuttin’? And she’s cuttin’ pretty good 🙂
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Shit! I know that!
Thought you were supposed to answer “Like a knife!”
OK.. how’s about this one then.
“Whaddaya at?”
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Haha… good ole B. Adams… Now to answer your question: not much my dear but I’ll complete the GBS lyric: “How’s she goin buddy? Waddaya at, t’day?”
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Love it. Love GBS.
And, Newfoundland is the province I’ve yet to visit. It’s high up on me list.
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Me, too!! 🙂 Ah, well, once this pandemic has been lifted and things are back to some sort of normal, you really must visit. Please book more than a long weekend as many mainlanders do, expecting to ‘see’ the the Island 🙂
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They are great. I saw them live once and could not believe the energy in the place.
Umm. No. Definitely for more than a weekend. I’d be leaving from Montreal!
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They were energetic. I had opportunity to jam with them a few times in their earlier days. That’s awesome. Never been to Montreal but it is on my list of must-visit places in the coming years.
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That they were! Lucky you!!
Alrighty then…. we shall play tour guides for each other 🙂
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Haha, that would be awesome. We’ll keep one another apprised 🙂
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Indeed! I have it on good authority I’m a good guide 😉
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Sweet 😊
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😊
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To echo other commenters, I would also love a place like that.
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Indeed! Especially if we’ve been cooped up with our families – much as we love them…
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Yes. That’s exactly what I need.
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A perfect place, Dale.
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Thank you, John. I’m sure we could always use one now and again.
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I agree,
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🙂
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No problem with social distancing there!
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None!
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Neat little poem Dale, and 2 prompts, nicely done.
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Thank you, Sir Shrawls. Really… just using the photo for one with the poem from the other. Glad you enjoyed.
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I did, i’ve got a lot of time for one who can poem, I’m useless at it.
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I, frankly, feel I suck at poetry but damned if I don’t feel compelled to keep trying. Why? I dunno.
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Why not? Keep on keeping on Dale
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Why not indeed! I shall!
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That would be a perfect hiding place.
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I think so too!
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Perfect timing for this one, just when the too-full house is shaking my calm! Here’s to peace in the woods!
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No kidding! It’s been great reconnecting with my adult kids but man… 😉
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I’d like a cabin in the woods to escape to at times.
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I think many of us would!
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Love what you did with the two prompts. I love that picture but had nothing for it, and now I love your poem and the idea of that she-shed.
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Thank you, D! I so much appreciate it.
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Nice use of literature and the photo and the times … Love this! And … yes, sometimes we all need a ‘she-shed’ … 😉
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Glad you think so!
You know, it’s funny, for a WW a year or so (probably longer, that whole time-thing) I wrote about a she-shed! 😀
We all need our own little space.
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🙂 Well, she-sheds are important! 🙂
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They are. Absolutely.
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Well that’s too darn clever, brilliantly written poem and a combination prompt 💜🌈😀😀😀💜🌈🌈
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Aww shucks, Willow! Thank you. That is most sweet and kind of you. 🧡🌻🌻🌻🧡
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That “shed in the woods” sounds like a good place to go.
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Could not agree more, Frank!
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Sounds like many people’s dream! Well done 🙂
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Thank you! Methinks so (at least for writers, eh?)
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lol exactly what I plan … but can I get there 🙂
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🙂
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I would love a shed of my own and being in the woods would make it perfect! Your quadrille made me happy…thanks!
Gayle ~
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Thank you, Gayle!
So very happy it made you happy. What an idyllic place this could be.
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The perfect escapade! Sometimes we need a quiet place
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I so agree!
Thank you.
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That is fantastic, great rhythm, leads you along. And who wouldn’t like a shed in the woods.
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You are most generous, Crispina! And here I was worried about said rhythm..What do I know, eh?
I know I’d love one!
Trying to sleep for the past two hours. Just came in from attempting to photograph that spectacular moon. Hopefully my present yawning is a sign. .
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Sleep well, Dale. I find reading a dry boring book helps 🙂
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Got one of those… 😊
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I hope you don’t refer to mine!
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Haha! No way!!
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🙂
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Very nice writing, I enjoyed this. However I will need to move on, now that my secret shed has been discovered it’s getting a bit crowded.
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Thank you, James.
So sorry. It was meant to be kept a secret..
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Beautiful, Dale! I know the feeling exactly, but then I tell myself that we can build the perfect shed in our minds… sometimes it works! 😉 xoxoxo
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Thank you, Marina.
True enough. If we concentrate enough.😉 xoxo
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🙂 xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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xoxoxo
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❤️
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Wonderful, Dale! 🙂
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Thank you, Robin! 😊
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I want a shed in the woods! The closest I get is a corner of the kitchen table ☺️. Made me smile there, Dale
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I’m thinking we are many wanting our own space!
Glad I made you smile
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Well, I have been lucky enough to sir or in our garden to write the last few days, right by our apple tree which had been covered in blossom and honey bees – a sort of outside office ☺️
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How wonderful! No wonder you write so beautifully!
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It’s only a tiny tree, not much taller than me, and our house is not glamorous – a 1930s end terrace, ex council house (might you call it ex social housing?) We’re over looked on all sides. But really, we love it very much and we’re trying to encourage nature in as much as possible in front and back gardens. It’s not much compared to what some have, but it’s ours.
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That’s the important thing, though,isn’t it? You are happy there. “Not much” is all relative…
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Very true, Dale. We could do with fewer numpties driving their mopeds runs the back streets and less loud music in sunny days, though! 😄
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Indeed!
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What a perfect spot! The perfect get away!
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I know I wish it was in my neighbourhood!
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That would be great!
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Indeed!
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Lovely, Dale.
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Thank you, Vivi 🙂
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Great words for these times. Not a bad place to e right now..:)
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I didn’t even want it to be remotely taken as something for these times but hey…
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All in the eye of the beholder, or maybe my mind has just been reprogrammed lately..:)
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Truly. Since most people go there, I try not to but of course, this little poem definitely could be an escape from it all 🙂
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Q,
I had to read this a couple times before the pattern hit me. IS there a pattern or has my mind officially decided that this whole social distance thing applies to it as well? I think there’s a pattern, the rhyming first and fourth line, tell me I’m not crazy?
A She/Shed where she can write, meditate and find her Zen? That sounds like a commune with her inner self. I love it.
B
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B,
Proof of my prowess (lack thereof) as a poet. However, you are not crazy. First and fourth lines do rhyme. The middle is more of a mess. I’d say the first stanza reads better than the second and I am contemplating changing said second to give a better rhythm or maybe I’ll just leave it as is and call it a lesson. And try as I might, even when intending to avoid the current situation, it can still be read as such. Which is fine, knowing that it can also be just a general thing, too.
A She Shed would be a lovely thing to have – she can even lend it out to he who may occasionally have need for it.
Q
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You? Change it? I can’t imagine you ever doing such a thing because . . . okay I’ll stop now.
Truthfully, you didn’t have to go changing. And I think everything is kind of in that “applicable” range right now. What year is this by the way?
Hope there’s room for two. 😉
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Yeah. I wasn’t gonna but then, well, you saw. I did. At least I hope you went to see the different take 😉
I know I didn’t, but you know how I told you it wasn’t all that? It had been bugging me. So I did.
Year? Month? Day?
There is only room for two. 😘
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I did in fact. So do I need to ‘rewrite’ my comment to you now? 😉
Once you say that, it’s all over. And I know right? I stopped keeping track of those things somewhere along the line.
Yum! 😙
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Buahaha! Nope. No one who read it before knows it’s now different. 😛
I think so. How important are they anyway.
It would be. 😚
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As long as you did it and you’re happy with it, all is good.
Right?
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I am happy(er) with it.
Right!
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Coo-ness!
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Uh huh.
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Nothing quite like finding a cool “She Shed.” 🏠
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That’s what I’m thinking. 😉
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I think many people now adays would envy anyone that had a little place to hide alone. I know some people are isolated alone but others are with family 24/7 now and don’t know what to do with each other.
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That’s for sure. It’s amazing how small some homes must be feeling right about now. Me? Not so much. Boys hang out in their rooms, leaving me alone in my living room or kitchen – they come out to eat and then disappear…
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My daughter just moved out so now it is just David and I. The house is a bit too big, but I wouldn’t want to seem ungrateful for what I have.
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I so get you. I can’t help wondering what this whole situation would have been like with Mick, my late husband. WE probably would have driven each other nuts at times but something tells me we would have found the silver linings.
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Yes, I lost my husband 6/17/18 and my son 7/16/19 so my house is so very empty.
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Christine… I am so sorry. I have no words for you as I know no words make anything better.
I lost my husband December 21, 2014, my first son, Jan. 17, 1997…
I am lucky that I have two more sons driving me crazy…
Sending you lots and lots of love.
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Beautifully well written. I think we can all use an escape to the woods and be by ourselves and our thoughts and enjoy nature itself.
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Thank you, Charlie. I’m glad you came to this after I changed it! I was not satisfied with it, at all.
And yes, I think all us writers and artists would love to have a space like this.
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You are welcome Dale.
I really love what you wrote and you brought a sense of peace within our minds. 🙂 Bless you my friend.
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Thank you again. I hope I keep doing so.
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🙂 Bless your wonderful heart. You are a super talented writer. 🙂
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Awww shucks. Thank you. You are so very generous. 🙂
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🙂
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You’ve found an oasis! Good for you 😊
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Thank you!
Don’t I wish!
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😂
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Woods are alluring..!
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Love it!
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Glad you do!
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Thunder, you have fabulous takes on themes!
This is perfect.
Now, I would have been talking about linting up Johnny’s fur. 😉
Stay well!
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Thank you, Sorceress!
So glad you think so.
Hahaha! Hey… What ever works, I say!
You too!
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I love this one and a shed in the woods would definitely be a great room of one’s own!
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I think there are more than a few of us would enjoy this little getaway…
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