dVerse spoke to me today! Kim from Writing in Norfolk is hosting and today’s theme is: Haibun Monday: Being But Human – what is it she is asking? This: to write about a time when you last watched stars, a storm, the sea, an animal, or something else in nature that left you with a sense of wonder or awe. Aim to write no more than three tight paragraphs, followed by a traditional haiku that includes reference to a season. Hmmm. Here goes:
As I walk along in an autumn woods with no sounds save the crunch of dried leaves beneath my feet, the wind rustling the leaves above me and maybe the occasional trill of a bird I find my heart slowing, my breath deepening, my muscles relaxing and my mind freeing itself from whatever worries I might have. As this happens, I become more aware of my surroundings: I marvel at the velvety, almost neon green moss growing on fallen trees. I delight in the different kinds of fungi growing here and there: white, bright yellow, striped greys, polka-dotted red. I watch and smile at the antics of squirrels and chipmunks darting here and there, looking for nuts they will hide away for the winter. The sky is a shade of blue not seen the rest of the year, which makes the yellows and reds and oranges pop all the more. I am blessed to live through this season every year.
Colours brilliant
Fall into crispy ground
Joy is found in death
Yes, the blue of the sky is so different. Beautiful, my friend!
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It is so different from summer or winter, isn’t it? Thank you, my friend!
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Every is at its most crisp in autumn.
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Indeed!
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Beautiful golden leaves.
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Thank you, Tim! I suppose I could have found a picture with all the colours, plus the sky but I loved how the sun shone in this one
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That one is great. The photos don’t need to be all 1000 words.
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So nice of you to say!
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You capture the spirit of autumn to perfection, a reminder that we live through this death year after year; that death isn’t something we should fear.
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Thank you so much, my friend! We do. And it brings us even more beauty!
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🙂
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Gorgeous
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Thank you!
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Pleasure
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Maybe it isn’t death, just a pause in the cycle while nature gets her breath back 🙂
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You are right 🙂
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Lovely, there is indeed beauty in decay and witnessing nature’s progress through the year. Well done.
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Thank you very much, Francis. There is beauty!
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I am blessed to be able to read this, to feel it and enjoy it, with you.
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Thank you, Sweet Kiki!
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Great scene-setting in the opening lines, with appeal to the senses that has me walking with you in my mind, Dale, a relaxing thought and feeling. I love the way you describe moss and fungi – there are so much of them about this year. I agree about the sky being ‘a shade of blue not seen the rest of the year, which makes the yellows and reds and oranges pop all the more’. I agree with Jane, Nature isn’t dead, she’s just resting.
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What a fabulous comment, Kim. Thank you! She’s resting, rejuvenating, preparing…
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Dear Dale,
I could see it, feel it, smell it. Love it.
Shalom and lotsa brisk autumnal hugs,
Rchelle
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Dear Rochelle,
I love that you could all three!
Shalom and lotsa lively love,
Dale
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Perfect, Dale. I’m right there with you! ❤️
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Thank you, Merril! So glad you came along! 🍁🍂💞
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😀
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😊
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The best season…Beautiful pic 🙂
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It is! My favourite. And thank you!
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This is so beautiful, Dale. ❤
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Thank you, Robin! 🍁🍂💞
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I felt this joy walking through the woods in Autumn this year: I hadn’t seen it since I left the UK for Spain 4 years ago, and what a joy it was! It’s all but over now, but your words brought that Autumn glory back to life for me.
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What a great thing to say, Ingrid. Makes me feel a nice and warm that I brought it back to you.
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Beautiful. I enjoyed crunching through those leaves with you.
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Thank you, Peter. So glad you did!
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Beautiful, Dale! The imagery is magnificent!
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Thank you so much, Jan. I am pleased you enjoyed!
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I love your imagery of walking through the forest. Fall is my fav season and I love the outdoors. Beautiful job Dale, as usual.
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Thank you so much, Jan. Very pleased you enjoyed!
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Overflowing with beauty Dale 🌸
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Thank you dear Rene! 🍁🍂💞
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🍂💐🍁🌷💞
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Oh, Dale this post is glorious… gloriously crunchy, colorful and delicious!!!!!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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Thank you, Sweet Marina! Beyond pleased you like! 🍂🍁💞
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Beyond pleased with everything in your post!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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xoxoxoxo
😘😘😘
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🤗🤗🤗🤗… many of those!
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Sa-weet!!
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♥️😘
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…like you!
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Awww. 😘💗
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😘😘
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A beautiful Haiburn Dale, captures this season so well.💜🌹
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Thank you, Willow, my dear! 🍁🍂😉
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A pleasure my dear
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🧡🧡
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I wish, oh how I wish …. more folks round the world would take time to have the deep experience you so wonderfully describe in this haibun. Cheers.
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Would not people be so much more relaxed? Thank you for such a wonderful comment!
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Again I’ll say it. My favorite writings of yours are not the fictional–but the very real. You have a voice and a way with words when expressing your true self, my friend. Thanks for sharing it!
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Why thank you, Christine. Honestly, most of my writing is based on real (even the supposed fiction) and I appreciate your appreciation!
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Gosh, you absolutely nailed it! Excellent prose and a fantastic image to accompany it. Well done (as always).
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Aww shucks, Monika! Thank you so much!
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I love how much nature impacts you when you let it… it takes a little while and then you start to notice… to have such splendor close is a privilege.
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It really does when we take the time. And I’m so lucky to have this at my doorstep, so to speak
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I love your idea that joy is found in death. So true of autumn. Super job, Dale.
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So glad you do and like, John. Autumn really is an important step.
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Q
How beautiful is this to find in late November, when the fall is ready to give way to the winter and all that beauty passes into memory. But with its passing, it leaves the memory of its magical qualities behind.
I love the finish of this piece most of all.
B
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B,
Thank you. When asked what in nature moved me, I couldn’t help but go to the colours, textures and scents that tickles the senses in autumn.
So glad you loved.
Q
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The colors and textures and scents . . all a part of the fall season and really, outside of springtime, there is no other time of year that really comes close on those counts.
Loved loved.
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They are – and they are particular to that season, aren’t they? Spring has its colours and textures and scents all it’s own that bring a whole ‘nother emotion (to me).
Love that you loved loved.
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It’s true! And it’s probably my favorite time of year for food. Which is a good thing when I’m staying active, LOL.
❤️
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Yes! Funny how comfort food becomes that thing you crave. I actually get sick of “summer” fare by September. I made Shepherd’s Pie the other day (I refuse to make it in summer) – ‘course, come April, I’ll be done with it but for now? Made two kids and a mom happy!
❤️
MWAH!
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It’s the one time of year when people say “Soup’s On!” and I go . . Okay.
Excepting for the beer . . that carries over. 😉
Lasagna is one of those for me. I rarely ever make it in the summer. I’ll make lasagna roll ups. I just feel like lasagna is such a rich selection . . and when you add wine . . well.
M❤️AH!
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Buahahaha! So… the only time of the year I’d actually offer to make you one, then!
That’s a given.
Lasagna is definitely cold weather food for me. It is a rich and usually hearty selection that oh yes, one must accompany with wine.
Awww!
💖 MWAH! 😘
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French onion soup . . with a nice chunk of bread. Sold!
Well, you can make soup more appealing than any restaurant, so there is that. 😉
Uh huh.
Lasagna and wine. It used to be I would turn on the Godfather as I prepped and made the lasagna and drank the wine.
MUAH!! 😘
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I make a mean French onion soup… Mmmm!
I would definitely do my best – I do love when those I cook for enjoy it so.
Is there any other way to prep food? Asking for a friend… I that that was the how-to.
MWAH! 😘
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I’ve heard tell . . .
And you do it so incredibly, what’s not to love?
I do believe in making certain that the chef is kept hydrated at all times. And I find that certain elixirs work very well for this purpose.
MUAH!! 😘
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Loved this, Dale, well done!
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Thank you, Eliza! Makes me happy you did!
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Autumn a reset of nature, off with the old ready for renewal. I loved how you summed up this month Dale, it has encouraged me to go for a walk in my nearby woody park at lunch. 🍁
Best wishes Charlotte
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It really is, isn’t it? Thank you so much, Charlotte. Do, if you can!
Best wishes to you!
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Autumn is so beautiful! And I think this photo looks so romantic!
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I chose it for that reason so I’m doubly glad you think so. Thank you.
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Gorgeous photo to match a vivid poem. Felt like I was there with you.
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Thank you so much! That is music to my ears!
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Beautiful, Dale. Your haiku is a wonderful reminder of the cycle of death and life.
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Thank you, Ina. So glad you enjoyed!
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Beautifully penned, Thunder. It’s not just the lovely descriptions, it’s the heart and soul you encompass herein!
Autumn is my fave time of year. It used to be spring, but autumn has wooed me over.
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Thank you, dear Sorceress. I am beyond pleased this touched. It is also mine. Spring has it’s something (once the stench of rot is passed, that is!!)
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Lol!!!!
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I love the way you build up to the poem with your descriptions – and you’ve captured so much of what autumn is about in those few lines of the poem!
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High praise indeed!! Thank you, Andrea. I’m tickled!
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I like your profound reflections on the beauty of autumn. The last line of your haiku is really thought provoking.
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Thank you, Suzanne. How happy I am that you enjoyed.
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I like your profound reflections on the beauty of autumn. The last line of your haiku is really thought provoking.
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