It’s Wednesday! Yessiree! That means it’s time to Friday Fictioneer. I must thank Ted Strutz (so glad to see you’re getting better every day!) for the use of his picture and to Rochelle, who, even while dipping her toes in the ocean, still keeps this show running. If you’d like to play along, just click on the jumble of frogs below to add your link to your 100-word story.
Organizing
Bills Taxes Kids Housework Stress Job Love Health Frustration Disappointment Elation Excitement Sleeplessness Hunger Pain Empathy Boredom–
“ENOUGH! All of you, OUT. NOW!”
She took a deep breath. And another.
Oh, that felt good. She could feel her body, mind and soul come back together in a cohesive and natural state of being.
“Whatcha doing? And what’s that jumbled mess?”
“That mess is a serious purge of all that was taking over my body.”
“Uhhh…”
“Now I can look at each piece individually and see what needs to be done. What stays, what goes. Prioritize and organize.
“You’re weird.”
“Maybe.”
That’s quite a filing system!
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Right?
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It is amazing how taking a decisive step to clear out and organise has a cleansing effect in your mind. Declutter and destress so to speak.
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It is! We have to declutter the mental as well as the physical. 🙂
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Dear Dale,
Sigh. I’m so disorganized myself. This is the perfect piece for the photo. I love the MC’s attitude. Now back to dipping my toes and the rest of me in the ocean. 😉
Shalom and lotsa salt-watered hugs,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
So glad you thought so. There are days where I would just like to dump my brain completely and start afresh… Well. not EVERYthing but yanno…
Shalom and lotsa happy-for-you love,
Dale
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I hear you and Mick in this. 💜💜
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I like that! 🧡🧡
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💜🙂
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Organize, smorganize. Who needs it. Lol. Well, I do for one, both physically and mentally. I used to be really good at it but age seems to have slowed me down a bit. Good story, a;though, the organization of that motor is beyond me. Lol
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I hear ya, Jan! We all need a little, I should think. There are times in my life where the brain seems to be in overdrive.
Yeah, is that what that mess of metal is?
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I love where your mind went with this one! I think I can live with my cluttered brain, but I really need someone to un-clutter my house, and a secretary to file my papers (I mean while I’m dreaming. . .) 😀
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Thank you, Merril. The cluttered brain can get confusing on occasion with one thought trying to overpower the others 😉
I DEFINITELY need someone to come unclutter my house and file my papers. I much rather prefer to dream!
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You’re welcome! 😀
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🙂
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My mind looks–and feels–like that mess, too, some days.Great take on the prompt. After all what can one do with something that looks like the intestines of a robot after melt-down?
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So glad it struck a chord with you, Christine. And right? I looked at that and said no way am I going the melt-down-robot way!
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Weird is wonderful!
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I like to think so 😉
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Sometimes you just have to clean them carburetors, and extirpate those manifold mountains of malcontent. Nothing weird that I can see.
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Yer absolootely right. Glad to see you see nothing weird…
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I ought to do that, and judging by the picture I’ll probably lose a bit of weight at the same time!
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That was my thinking, as well. 🙂
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I enjoyed this, for I had thought of starting with words. You did it so well that I am glad that I changed tack. For the record my words where… Freedom or oppression, coercion, ebullient… ‘Force’ I was hoping to use the word ‘ebullient’ in its archaic form. Your post will encourage me to try again to write about my character Storm and the organisation that she works for known as FORCE.
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Thank you, Michael. I’m so glad I’ve inspired you to try again. 🙂
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So the lady is dealing with all the issues in the first paragraph while the husband messes about with a knackered old engine. Sounds about right! Well done, Dale.
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Hahaha! Wellllll…. let’s just say it was originally supposed to be a metaphoric pile of junk but that works too 🙂
Thank you, Mason.
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You know, I always read a story different to intended. I need to get the pile of junk in my head rewired I think!
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No, no… what you read works, as well! That’s what’s great about writing – inerpretation is open!
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That’s very true. Thanks, Dale.
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Great use of the prompt, Dale. 😁 I love that pile. I think I need to get rid of mine too.
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Glad you like, John 🙂
I’m thinking unloading at least some of it can’t be a bad idea…
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I think it is a great idea.
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Then bring on the dump truck!
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Hahaha.
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😁
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Sometimes it has to be done that way. Clean up the garage, drawer etc
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Indeed. Thoughts in your head…
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I like your lively slice of life here, Dale.
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So glad you did, Lisa 🙂
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Wise MC, I wish I found the decluttering so straightforward
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So do I…
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You really capture that moment when you empty your mind of the junk and come back to reality, to actually being a person, and not a creditor, tax payer, parent etc. Super writing!
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Thank you so much, Penny. It seems we are bombarded right, left and centre with stuff to be taken care of.
What a great comment!
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YOU are weird…. to me it looks like some kid has taken his bike apart and sits now in front of this jumbled mess!
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I don’t deny it for a second!
Of course it looks like some kinds of junk pile!
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I always knew you were different. I never realised quite how different!
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Different, eh? I like to think there is nothing wrong with that 😉
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Nothing whatsoever. Vive la difference!
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Oui! Oui!
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Great post and the picture looks like someone’s insides.
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Thank you. It does, doesn’t it?
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What a fortuitous image to go with your (always) delightful prose. Well done, dear Dale!
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The image came first. I didn’t think I was even going to play until the idea of purging the brain came to me… I can’t explain it sometimes! Glad you liked!
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Q
That looks like the kind of mess I would call Waste Management about. The problem becomes, when it’s not something you can clean up just by calling someone to come pick it up. Which makes it the sticky part of the label, when we arrive at that age that taps us on the shoulder and says “Eh, fuck you,” before asking what’s for dinner so your body can play war.
Of course it’s usually not anywhere near that serious. Like you said, it’s a matter of organizing and prioritizing. Keep? Kick to the curb. Rinse and repeat, after which you stretch and breathe and try and do better.
Thank you for the inspiration. As per. . . 😉
B
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B
Yanno… for some, what is banging around in their noggis is pretty much a Waste Management problem! Indeed. some things just can’t be cleaned up by others. Yeah. That age.
When you stop and sort, it does make things a helluva lot clearer. And yes, stretch, breathe, do better.
Thanking me for the inspiration? I thank you for your usual fabulous analysis and commentary 😉
Q
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And if we’re really lucky . they run for Congress! Oh God . . that is just too close to home to be humorous. Damn this day and age!
I believe in it. The mind can come up with some mean ass toxins, and if you let it go untended, the body feeds on this and . . . no.
Well, yeah! It CAN be a two-way street yanno?
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Egads! Damn it to hell and back!
Ohmygosh yes. And definitely, no.
Of course! That’s what’s terrific about this whole bidness.
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Damn it! Damn it all to HELL!!! And thank you for putting Charlton Heston in me noggin at too early an hour.
I thought so.
It is terrific alright.
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There are worse…😉
Of course you did.
😉
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MUAH!
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MWAH!
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MUAH!
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A jumbled mess we all are it seems, Covid has screwed up such a lot these days, and any systems which worked in the past seem to have failed recently. Mrs T has bits of paper ready to file all over the spare room floor, but I guess you have to start somewhere! Top 5 Dale, very impressive!
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Some more than others. Covid has truly played a number in so many ways.
Mrs. T is more organised that I am!!
I know, right? I went to work late just to post 😉
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I wonder how far your good intentions are going to take you 🙂
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Well… I think it’s a matter of obligation at some point. Only so much can stay in there and bang around.
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Ha! True.
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That sounds like an excellent way to get organised and stay sane!
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I like to think so! Now… if only I could put it into practice…
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PERFECT! That is perfect, Dale and one hell of a brilliant advice too!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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Thank you, my friend! Methinks we should do regular dumpings! xoxoxoxo
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Even daily!!!! It’s unbelievable how much dump builds up!!!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Tell me about it. You realise it when you go to bed and your brain just won’t. shut. up.
xoxo
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Yep! Thankfully my eraser is on autopilot!!! 🤣😘😘
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Haha, I love how the mind and soul debate over this. Great story, Dale. We all need this kind of clean-up from time to time.
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Thank you, Gabi. So glad you liked my take 🙂
I think we do (or go nuts otherwise).
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I know how you feel – been there, done that, bought the teeshirt.
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I bet. And maybe more than one version? 😉
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I love your approach on this one. Not sure I would have gone there (although I probably do need to go there and do some inner decluttering!). 🙂
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Glad you do. I didn’t want to go the robot or broken engine way and I can’t explain WHY it went where it did… the muse is a funny thing! And as for the decluttering – big time, I need to! 😉
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I know she felt much lighter! I could feel it too.
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Yes! So glad you could feel it too.
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Purge, prioritize, reorganize…seems to be a recurring theme these days. You did a great job with the prompt – thinking outside the box!
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Yeah, it is, isn’t it? Thank you, Jan. I always try to go outside of the box 😉 Always when I succeed!
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There is a company that advertises they “magically” remove all the junk around your house by having the person point at the mess and “poof” it’s gone. When I do my next mental purge, I think I’ll have them come. Otherwise, I’ll just reabsorb all of it!
Enjoyed your take on the prompt.
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I’m worried they’d perform a lobotomy!!
Glad you enjoyed. 😊
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Oh, dear, I hadn’t thought of that! I better just clean my mind out on “big pickup” garbage day. lol
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Haha!
That’s a good idea 😉
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This was fabulous! Do you do house-calls?
Seriously, though, this was delicious. And … well … relatable … 😉
Am finally back to being online after two weeks of pretty much nonstop attending to other things and other people’s needs followed by house-guests (my lovely sisters) and more things that needed attending to … It was busy. It was lovely. It was at times stressful (not the sisters, the other things), and at times just a lot.
Am regrouping, and finally participating in some writing/reading/commenting again. Yay to that!
Could’a used a bit of that purge, ya know. … 😉 Perhaps this weekend is an excellent time to do some of that!
Hugs!
Na’ama
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Where have you been, young lady?
Oh. Wait. Read further, dumb Dale. Then never mind my first comment. I am so happy you had a lovely time with your sisters!!
Yay! I imagine a bit of a purge would be good 🙂
Glad you enjoyed this silliness!
Hugs to you!
Dale xoxo
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I did! 🙂 hugzees!
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Hugzees back!
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You can’t argue with the response at the end! “Maybe” can be a great put down. Lovely piece of writing, Dale.
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So glad you agree 😉
And thank you, Jilly.
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I sympathize with your character. Sometimes wish I could take the pieces out and fix them one at a time. Great story!
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Thank you, Will. Yes, indeed. We just have to deal with one at a time 🙂 Glad you enjoyed.
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What a mess!
So great you kicked everyone out. That’s just what was needed to get organized.
Thunderization for the nation!
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Oh man, lemme tell you…
Out! Everyone out!
Since I’m not a Sorceress, I have to use my own powers, eh?
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LOL! Thunder Power!
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Haha! Love it!
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You know it!
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I like the way you link the parts of the story, very imaginative. The clutter put in a heap, then breathe easy. Good story.
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Thank you, Francine. So glad you liked 🙂
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Yep. It always amazes me how much of a mess cleaning, real cleaning, makes.
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Deep cleaning, at that…
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I’m much better at clearing the physical clutter than the mental! Great take on the prompt, Dale. Clearing my mind now! Ommmm…! 😉
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You and me both, Jenne!
Ommmmmmm! 🙂
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Gosh, sounds like she needs a break from everyone else! Reorganising does have a bit of a meditative feel to it. Like reorganising bookshelves!
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