It’s Wednesday! You know what that means! It means Friday Fictioneers where we try to fool you into thinking it’s the wrong day! Our fellow FriFic buddy, Ted Strutz is recuperating enough to start snapping pictures again, so our lovely leader Rochelle has shown her support to his recovery by using his photo this week as prompt. Do play along by clicking on the frog below and adding your 100-word story, with beginning, middle and end.
Nicki leaned over the rail, arms spread out as if trying to capture the wind, the mountains, delighting in the salty spray misting her face. Her eyes sparkled, “Isn’t this absolutely beautiful?”
Tony stared straight ahead, wishing for death or at least terra firma. “Would you step away from the railing, please?” he gritted through his teeth. “Makes me nervous.”
“Oh, pooh! Stop worrying! Oh. My. Are the bands not working? I so hoped they would. We’re almost there. Do you know how much I love you for doing this?”
“When I can breathe without heaving, you can show me.”
aw, bless!
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I really feel for him…
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Oh no, heave ho! Fun 100 word story.
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Poor guy… Glad you thought so!
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Dear Dale,
Perhaps they need to find something they both enjoy. 😉 Heave ho NO! Oh and thanks for the ear worm. 😉 Love the dialogue.
Shalom and lotsa terra-firma hugs,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
He really tried. He wanted to do something for her. And hey, you gave yourself the earworm! Glad you enjoyed 😉
Shalom and lotsa waveless love,
Dale
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Either you have sea legs or else you remain on terra firm. I’m sure he’ll have another go, just for Nicki.
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This is true. Some of us have them from the get. Others? Not so much. I like to think he will (well, he has no choice but to return, anyway 😉 )
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The things men do for love. Nice one, Dale
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Yes indeed! Thanks, John.
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😁
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🙂
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I hope he exerts a tremendous recompense
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I imagine once his stomach settles he will… and something tells me she will willingly “pay”!
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Lol I have been there and done that!
💜💜
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Oh no! You suffer from motion sickness? 🧡🧡
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You have rekindled a memory of my crossing the North Sea. I was the only one who turned up for supper. 🙂
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A fellow fearless sailor! We had one cruise where my sister and her family, my husband and my kids were all feeling sick and I was tempted to leave them all to their woes and go for supper.. I should have 😉
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Life has its ups and downs!
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And ups and downs and sides to sides… 😉
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Poor Tony!
I get motion sickness easily, but actually the few times I’ve been on a boat, it’s OK if I’m on the deck and the wind is blowing.
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Yes, poor Tony! I am luckily spared that. On my dad’s sailboat, if the waters were particularly rough, I didn’t want to be inside, I could feel the danger but you’re right outside on deck, all is good.
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Well, I can get sick on a swing, 😀 but I was fine when we went on a whale watching ride (but felt a little sick on the way back when we sat inside).
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Oy… that’s no fun. I used to be able to do spinney things – not anymore! The bigger the boat, the less it rocks 😉 We are huge fans of cruising. Inside is no fun when it’s rocking and rolling.
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🤢
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😂
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The things we do for love! Kudos to him.
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That’s what I say. He wins many points for putting himself out there. 🙂
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Poor guy! Only had seasickness once and that was enough!
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I’m pretty lucky. I’ve been on some rocky cruise ships, and even my father’s sail boat. I’m not too sensitive. Only happened once where I felt the beginnings of queasiness and just went up and outside till it passed.
Yeah. Poor guy. He was brave to do that for her.
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The last line made me chuckle. Poor Tony. At least she shouldn’t have any more doubts that he loves her.
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Glad it did 😉 Poor Tony. If she doubts, she doesn’t deserve him!
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I agree.
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🙂
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he sounds like a keeper. 🙂
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I could not agree more! 🙂
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Love the story. Don’t understand the seasickness. Lol. In my 28 years in the Navy, I got a little queasy only once and it didn’t last long. It was my first cruise. We used to say when the seas got rough, we were going to eat good. Many were not showing up to chow hall.
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Thanks, Jan. I don’t understand it either! Only once did we have a really rough time and my sisters family (all 5) and my guys (the 3 of them) were all done for and I was abandoned for supper! There was another cruise where the waiters were going around with green apples trying to assuage the suffers…
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Interesting one about men…
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I don’t think it’s just men who make an effort for love 🙂
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Its same as women..
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🙂
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The things we do for love! A true romance of the sea and the heart, Dale. ❤️
pax,
dora
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So glad you agree with me, Dora 🙂
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A sign of true devotion! Made me chuckle 🙂
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Glad it did and yes, definitely a sign!
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Oh, poor guy… I hope he gets hid reward!!! 🤣😉
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…his!
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LOL
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Oh, I think it will be a good one! 😊😉
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🤣😉😘
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Hahahaha! That’s me, with the bands that don’t work. 😀
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Ah shoot! That blows! Glad I made you laugh, though.
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I couldn’t find where to respond to your post using Adrienne Rich’s words but I love her poetry, too.
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Gosh. I can’t remember where, either! I take my quotes off Goodreads, usually. I don’t always pay attention to who said what (how bad is that?) more to the quote itself. I shall look up Ms Rich’s poetry. I am only recently starting to enjoy poetry so I take all the suggestions I get 🙂
Have a fabulous Thursday, Ina.
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As a motion-sickness person, I can relate … but I didn’t see that coming!
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Not you, too! But you like cruising… 😉
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Yep …. Cruises usually involve meds
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So sorry. Do the bracelets not work for you? They worked like a charm for my nephew – he gets motion sickness of all sorts.
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The things we do for love, well, some of us!
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For the right gal… 😉
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Ooh, fun to come! Once his stomach has settled down 🙂
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Oh yeah! You’ve got that right! 😉
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I hope they are just on the way somewhere, and not trying to do a round the world cruise! Sounds like he’ll enjoy his reward later though. 😉
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Oh no. She would never be so mean as to suggest such a thing. They are merely crossing over to an island 🙂 I have no doubt he will 😉
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Sweet story and they sound like a lovely couple. Good times ahead.
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I think so too 🙂 Thank you, Gabi.
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Seasickness is no fun! It is hard to enjoy the beauty when that is al you feel. Been there…
Good story!
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I am lucky to not know that. However, I have been with people who suffered terribly. Ruins everything!
Thank you!
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Lol! What a great way to describe a seasick lover, Dale!
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Hahaha! Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
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Hey AGM Dale! I was here this morning, but couldn’t comment, not here not anywhere.
Okay, I’m from the prairies. I get seasick just looking at a glass of water.
Lol, it seems most of my boat excursions were ill fated. My fave was the guy who was trying to impress me, in his boat. In the middle of English Bay, the boat started sinking. We did make it back to shore, sitting up to my waist in water.
The Federal Maple – not enough room in any comments box on earth.
A sweet ending.. and I get both sides! ⚡️💥
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Hey beautiful Sorceress!
Don’t ya just love the shenanigans of WordPress?
Well… Prairie Sorceress… I can understand your, shall we say difficulties? with water 😉
Good grief. Way to make an impression, guy! LOL!
So glad you enjoyed! 🧚♀️🎇
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xoxoxo
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😘😘
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Another great job. For the record, the Friday Fictioneers need not try to confuse me on the day of the week…clearly I can do that on my own without any help. 😇
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Thank you, my friend. And hey, I feel your pain 😉 LOL
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I didn’t participate this week, but was thinking along the lines of ‘humans love the ocean’ and I love to be near it, see it, walk along the shore – but I don’t need to be in nor on it. So I get this!
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Haha! Understood! I, for one, don’t mind to be on it, though I love to see it, smell it, be near it, walk along it as well 😉
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Good one.
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Thanks 🙂
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Oh.. that’s true love.. brilliant
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Thank you,Vartika. I like to think so 🙂
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Ah to be so loved, surely it’s worth it…..welllll maybe!
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Isn’t that a beautiful thing? Not so much for him but I am sure he will be more than properly rewarded..
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Well, I think everything’s been said. So I’ll just say “like it”. But then you know I’ve a tendency to the understatement 🙂
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I hear ya. Only so many things you can say to certain posts. As long as you enjoyed, I’m good 🙂
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I did. Always do. Love your style of writing
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I am so glad. It’s nice to hear 🙂
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: )
btw I’m listening to Audible while going through the comments
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And, do tell, what book are you listening to?
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Long Shadows, Jodi Taylor. I like her. English, and English settings, and detective whodunits but never gristly.
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Interesting. Shall have to decide on my next one (I can’t believe I am going to listen to another!) It’s just great for those days, like today where the sky is grey, the colour is at a minimum, not much to see and the walk becomes boring.
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I found it good when I was gardening. Sometimes listen in bed. But then I fall asleep so fast!
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I like it while walking for steps. Not for photography 😉 I don’t see myself listening at any other times.
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🙂
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Poor Tony – clearly the bands are useless. I feel his pain and hope Nicki doesn’t put him through it again.
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Poor Tony indeed. They have no choice but to return but methinks Nicki is not such a bitch as to put him through that again!
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‘Oh pooh’……your too nice.
I once had an older woman toss me and my Manhattan against the wall, as she raced to the restroom in rough seas. Wasn’t pretty………oh pooh!
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I know, I know. What can I say?
How awful! Did you lose the whole Manhattan? What a horrid thing to go through. How dare she, anyway… LOL!
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I didn’t know your blog was rated PG. And you, a Quebec-er and all.
No, I saved the drink minus a few precious droplets, though my dignity was momentarily put on hold. Obviously, it, the big push, I have told the story often. The horrors of a cruise.
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PG, eh? I didn’t know it either 😉
Thank goodness you had good reflexes, then. I can well imaging you do tell this story often 😀
Yes, we did have one particular cruise that was more than choppy. My sister and her family, my husband and my kids all wimped out. I was ready to go up to eat and they all wanted to just lie in bed and die.
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I have never really experience sea sickness. I have, however witnessed it up close and personal. To wit I said. “you lay down and rest, am heading to the martini bar”. He ducks, and rushes out the cabin door.
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Same for me. It ain’t pretty up close and personal. You did well to duck and rush, though I am sure you paid for your sins eventually 😉
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Sins?
“Sin is too stupid to see beyond itself.”, saith Tennyson.
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I’m with Tennyson, then!
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Oy, the poor dude! It may well be me (if I don’t take an anti-motion sickness pill beforehand….). A friend of mine still remembers when her parents had the marvelous idea of holding her birthday party on a chartered boat. She and most of her friends spent the whole time leaning over the decks and feeding the fish… It was not her best birthday party, but certainly the most memorable. … 😉
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Oy indeed. He will merit special treatment after 😉
And oy! Not such a great idea not knowing that all the friends would be so unable to handle the waters…
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Yeah, she was 13 or 14 or some such, and she (and her friends …) still remember that birthday party over all others … 😉 So, perhaps in that sense it was a ‘success’ … 😉
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I bet they do! Memories are great to look back on 😉
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From a distance and terra firma, I’m sure it all looks a LOT better … 😉
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I’ve zero doubt!
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😀
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The things we do for love, huh?
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Yep. I can’t believe I had such a lame title! LOL.
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Poor fella, he forgot to have a full English breakfast before stepping on deck. gt story, Dale.
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Indeed. She did try to warn him… But it was sweet of him to put himself through it for her…
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proper love is worth the discomfort I reckon. I know if I were to ever find love I’d be willing to do it to be with her.
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I like to think so. That’s a wonderful thing, Mason.
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Beautifully written, Dale, despite the nauseous subject matter! Good for Tony going on the voyage despite knowing his tendency to sickness; and even finding the self-control to give a humorous reply.
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Thank you, Penny. I think Tony is a keeper, don’t you? If he can find the humour in his misery, they have many years of laughter ahead of them!
(Mick was like that 😉 )
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I agree. Those who can find laughter in adversity are worth their weight in gold! I’m glad you had that experience with Mick.
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Oh yes! And I did. I was very lucky. 🙂
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Now, to be fair to poor Tony, it ain’t exactly clean pool (pun intended) to make him suffer on what is supposed to be his vacation too! I mean, if the guy was willing to go, that’s on him, but she coulda thrown him a life preserver by changing up the plans so’s his stomach and the rest of him wouldn’t be separated for a week. LOL.
I was talking to someone about cruises not too long ago. The whole acupressure wrist band thing sounds like something you would buy off one of those infomercials, where they include a second wrist band at no extra charge(!), you just pay the shipping and handling(!) And what’s the deal with the stabilizers on ships? Is that an urban legend too?
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Now waitaminute…We don’t know if he was the one who suggested it – trying to show his gal that he was willing to take a chance for her! But don’t you fret. It is their vacation and she will ensure that he will forget all about it… till the return trip, anyway.
Actually, just so you know. They do work. My nephew uses them all the time. He’s got a bad case, no matter the motion. The stabilizers on the big ships do make a difference. Hell, you don’t even KNOW you’re on a ship (well, the big-ass ones, anyway). Just sayin’… as a cruise afficionado, who’s been on her share… But then, even when we were on a smaller one and the seas were rockin’ and rollin’ I was exempt.
Q
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Well if he suggested it, then the bruto asked for his kissy kissy with the porcelain throne. And I bet you he thought of Jack from the Titanic once or twice, and how lucky that guy was.
I’ll take your word for it, or his word for it. Since you don’t need em. There are cruise ship people and there are no way Josie people, that much I do know. I never fancied myself a land lubber until a boat showed up, LOL.
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Haha! Maybe he was hoping it wouldn’t happen. I’m rooting for his big heart.
Please do. And yeah, I know. I guess I come from a family of cruise ship peeps. Though, even they have had their moments, just sayin’. LOL… Don’t worry, you’re safe…
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I’m rooting for him too.
It’s a thing. Funny how I can go swimming the roughest waters and no problem, but as soon as I launch my ass into a vessel of ANY size whatsoever? Problem! It sucks.
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I should hope you are 🙂
And not the same to be IN vs ON, that is for shizzle. See… me? I’d rather be ON than IN when it’s rough, having almost drowned once… But yeah, it sucks for you.
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The undertow, that’s always the biggest fear.
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Scares the shit out of me. It’s what pulled me out. You’ll not see me go deeper than my waist unless the water is friendly.
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Me too, more than once. I never learn!
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I did. I don’t ever want to live through that again. (though I am beyond grateful that I did the first time!)
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Ugh!
The ocean is just so seductive.
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Shudder.
It is. I do still love it. I just respect the hell out of it now.
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Yes, always respect.
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One must. She will remind you if you don’t.
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Harshly.
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R-E-S-P-E-C-T
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Sing it sistah!
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Oh, I am belting it… aren’t you lucky you are so far away?
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That bad?
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Not really… I’m just being modest…
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Another wonderful story, Dale. But, please, step away from the rail. 🙂
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He he he! Thank you, Bill. And, I’ll be careful 😉
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Oh dear, I love being on the water but I do still get sea sick – you’ve captured how you just can’t think of anything else when you’re in that position 🙂
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It is a miserable experience for those who suffer seasickness, I don’t doubt. I am very lucky not to!
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Seasickness is the worst! Thankfully, I don’t often get seasick. Poor Tony.
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Same here, my friend. I got slightly wonky once but it wasn’t worth mentioning.
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I’ve been struggling with vertigo today, which is somewhat like seasickness. It’s ugly. Tony has my sympathies.
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Oh that is no fun at all. I know a few people who suffered with it for months and could do nothing. Thank you for Tony 🙂
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Fortunately, my primary doc sent me to see a vestibular physical therapist a couple of years ago, and she taught me some exercises that really do help. Takes a couple of days, though. Still a bit wobbly when I woke up this morning 🙂
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Thank goodness! I’m so glad there are exercises that help. You just go slow and steady!
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It has to do with crystals swimming around in the inner ear. Amazing what the medical people have discovered!
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Indeed!
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Poor chap – he won’t do that again!
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I think his heart was big… And she definitely won’t demand it of him!
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Oh dear. Seasickness is not to be trifled with! Poor thing. Nothing worse I think, unless you’re a teacher with a group of school kids on a ferry… 👀
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No, it is no fun. And ugh! I don’t even want to picture that scene!!
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Despite that being my ex’s name, I have to side with Tony – but only the imaginary one in the story. There are lots of other travel related hobbies, like trains and long walks on the beach. =D
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Ah well… 😉
And yes, there are many others. Of course, those involving moving vehicles are limited as they also can cause grief!
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