Quadrille Monday for dVerse and I’m actually posting on the same day? Will wonders never cease. It must be because we had to use the word Tinsel…
Silent Night plays while
tears stream down her face
like tinsel cascading from the branches
of a Christmas tree
Where the silver strands hang on
hers roll off her chin
disappearing into her shirt
over her heart
It is but her yearly ritual
Remembering
So heartbreaking and emotional. ❤ ❤
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Thank you, Lucy. This time of year brings it all out. 💞
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Oh wow. Wow. This is just exquisite, in that painful longing way…
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Oh thank you so much!
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This one is touching. The weepy silver strands, a powerful image.
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Thank you. So very glad you found it touching.
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Very poignant, Dale. I would love to go back in the time machine for the holidays, when my grandparents were alive and all of the relatives were there at their house. I remember my great grandma gave each of us 50c pieces one year and I felt rich lol.
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Thank you, Lisa. Boy oh boy, would I ever love to as well.
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I can so identify with this. As we get older, such moments creep up on us and the “silver strands” do roll. Beautifully expressed, Dale.
Pax,
Dora
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Thank you, Dora. Yes, indeed. This time of year and as we get older… You are so kind.
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You have a sad ritual indeed. The time of celebration is also a time for sorrow.
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Well… Let’s just say I don’t necessarily cry, but I definitely have some moments.
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i’m sure you do.
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Mostly good. 😊
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😒😒😒
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You never disappoint with your writings, dear. This one’s mood is sombre 😥 yet it’s awesomely scripted, words carefully chosen. 👏👏🥂for good poetry.
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Thank you, Lamittan. Such a lovely thing to say. Glad you appreciated.
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You’re much welcome, Dale.
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Beautifully done and full of emotion!
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Thank you, Dwight. So glad you think so.
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You are welcome!
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🙂
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Stunning imagery, those tinsel tears. I’m sure so many can relate. I know I can. Thanks for joining in, Dale.
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Thank you so much, Mish. I’m sure many can and sorry that you are one of them. Thanks for hosting. I just realised I forgot to mention you were!
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Love every word of this! Poignant and moving.
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Thank you, Carol. 😊
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Wow, Dale… that’s a heartrending simile… I hope you’re okay.
❤
David
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Thank you, David. It’s that time of year. 7th now. I’m fine. I share this one for my mother as it is her first Christmas without her love.
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This is beautiful Dale you always pull the deep emotions out of the bag. Perfectly done with love 💜
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Thank you, sweet Willow. Sometimes it just comes out 🧡💞
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Beautiful 💜
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As are you. 💞
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Thank you 💜
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Wonderful, Dale, heartfelt and true as always. The remembering never ends.
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Thank you, Jilly. No, it doesn’t, nor should it.
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Moving… how your words pull chords straight from the heart.
Huge hugs your way.
🤗😘🤗😘🤗
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Thank you, Marina. You are so sweet. Hugs to you. 🤗😘🤗😘
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🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🌷🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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🤗🌷🤗
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Mouwah! 🤗
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🤗🤗
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😘🤗😘
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Holidays do bring those memories. Those tinsel tears are vivid, Dale.
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That they do. Especially when so many things happened around the holidays. Thank you, my friend.
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You’re very welcome. 💙
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Dear Dale,
Beautifully penned. Poignant. Deep emotions in few words.
Shalom and comforting hugs, my friend,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Thank you, my friend. I tend to get a tad mushier at this time of the year.
Shim and Lotsa friend-held love,
Dale
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Peace to the lady.
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Thank you to the gentleman.
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Sad, but very well done.
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Thank you, Dan.
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Oh gawd yes, Dale.
It is amazing what memories do to us during the holiday season.. So many suffer through.
Your poem captures and presents a sad human condition and a yearning. Well done.
I have the book, “Poems That Make a Grown Man Cry.” Few of them do that to me. Yours did. Nice to see this side of you. 🙂
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I’ll take that as a yes 🙂
The holidays are a hard time for many. Despite all the stuff I went through, I think I fare rather well.
So glad you think so.
Awww. Well, this side can come out now and again 😉
One day, if you like, you can read about my December in 2014.
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Of course I want to read about it.
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You are lovely. https://adelectablelife.com/2014/12/29/a-little-heart-to-heart/
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🙂
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with you
wisps of then and now
show no tell
cannot break the spell
of sundry unities
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Lovely.
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ty. so dale. work if you must. take time off. and when you resume doing what you do when you do what you do. put on zenyata mendatta and sing dee do do do dee do do dah! doh. oh happy day.
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Laughing. All my days are mostly happy, so 🙂
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good thing you havent met son tom lady.
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son tom lady?
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lady being yourself aka Dale. son tom my own fine sourpuss.
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Okay then…
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i went home for a moment and he said i m trying to find out where that noise is coming from. and i m like who cares sonny jim?
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LOL
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the poor chap has way too much time on his hands. i must listen and try not to upset or irritate him too much!
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Irritate him?
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yes he still cannot associate a reason for the low subtle noise so he screamed and wished for death. such a drama king.
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shook up zenyata and create de do dale! all hail dale. yoish!
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he wants to talk. i want to get mindlessly drunk
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but you could portray lily tomlin driving that magic school bus.
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Haha! If you only knew… My father used to ask me to imitate her doing Ernestine!
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one ringa dinga. yeah i thought as much
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Hahaha! Yes!
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Somber but so beautiful.
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Thank you. 😊
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You are welcome. 😊
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🙂
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Wow. Beautiful, Dale. An annual ritual worth doing. Hugs
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Thank you, my dear John! I think it’s a good way to cleanse 🙂 Hugs to you!
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True enough. 😊
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🙂
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Very touching Dale.
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Thank you, Jan
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Poignant… it can be a tough time of year for many, esp. missing loved ones.
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That it can. And thank you, Eliza.
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Definitely a holiday deeply felt by most, on one end of the Joy/Sorrow Spectrum or the other – except for some (like me) for whom it’s just another day.
Beautiful capture, though. Salute!
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That it is. I admit to having just a moment before moving forward with my day.
Thank you!
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beautifully written, powerful thoughts and well described
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Thank you. You are so kind.
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Very lovely, and true, Dale. It’s not Christmas without remembrance.
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Thank you, Lou. Christmas does bring out all sorts of memories. 🙂
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Rue for remembrance. This is a lovely poem. Thank you for your words.
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Thank you, Cindy. You are lovely to say so.
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Oh, Dale. Tinsel like tears…falling…to our hearts. ❤
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You know all about them. 💞
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This is just so lovely Dale. Always a difficult time for you but so many happy memories. Hugs to you.🤗
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Thank you, Peter. It is mostly good with an occasional blip 🙂 Hugs received and returned! 🤗
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Canadian hugs, I find, are lovely and all enveloping! Thank you.
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That is a brilliant, and powerful quadrille…the tinsel line…stunning…and the truth behind the poem…
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Aww gee. Thank you, Ain. You are most generous! I appreciate it very much.
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That brought a tear to my eye. It truly is a time for me to remember…
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You are a lovely and tender-hearted woman, Pam. May we all take some time to remember.
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So heartfelt, I hope you are coping despite the season…
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Thank you, Björn. I am really quite well. It has been 7 years already (what?) but it is also a new thing for my mother, who lost her partner and will be spending her first Christmas without him.
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Thinking of you as you recall. Hugs, sweet Dale.
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Thank you, lovely Monika. Hugs accepted and returned!
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Wow, Dale! That is short, but powerful! A beautiful use of the prompt!
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44-words does not a long poem make! And thank you, Jan. Glad you thought so 🙂
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Dale
There will always be a seat at the table reserved for Mick, left there for him by all his friends and family who tell his stories now. It’s never going to be any other way since he was the kind of guy who never really leaves a room.
I have to admit, when I saw “Tinsel”, I was under the impression it was going to be about the real stuff and not the symbolism of it (Superbly done, by the way). To which I was going to say, “Fuck tinsel”, since I refuse to be around the stuff any longer. It’s one of those not so pettish peeves I have, and nope.
Here’s to Mick.
Marco
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Marco,
There will and I love that you know and appreciate this.
No way in hell I was writing about that stuff. And I thank you for appreciating my use of it. Ugh. To think we used to have to put it on strand by strand…
Here’s to Mick (and Yvon and my Dad and anyone else who is missed at this time of year)
Dale
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Are you kidding? Some of your most soulful pieces involve that magnificent bastard. And I use that term because I find it to be the most effective way to keep his beautiful soul right here, with everyone. It’s out of love, completely.
That stuff sucks! I had a time of it when the kids were little and my daughter had discovered the ‘joy’s of tinsel art. Ugh. I had to set up a detention center for laundry before it was allowed to proceed to the washing machine.
Mick, Yvon, Dad . . . here’s to all of ’em. A mightier groupe you ain’t gonna find.
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And excellent choice of words. He woulda loved it. And yes. It is out of love.
It does! Oh boy… I believe you. And with cats in the house? Fuggedaboutit. Ugh. You remind me. Time to put up the Christmas tree on Sunday (always the day after Mick’s birthday 😉 )
Here’s to all of ’em!
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I’m sure, and yes it is.
How nice that you do it that way. 😉
All of ’em!
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🙂
Hey, it’s an improvement… we used to put it up Christmas Eve!
Yes!
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I think that was a big deal once upon a time, to wait until Christmas Eve.
Jes!
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I can’t say I would mind bringing back that tradition but hey… a few more days of Christmas cheer ain’t a bad thing!
Si!
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That’s the way to look at it.
😘
Ce!
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Tomorrow.
😘😘
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😉
😘😘
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Always an emotional time when we remember those loved ones we’ve lost.
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That’s for sure. It will be tough for my mother as she lost her spouse in March so this Saturday will be the first of his birthdays without him (also Mick’s birthday) and Christmas also. So.. I’m having her over so we can celebrate our men 🙂
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Wonderfully lovely and human.
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Thank you so much, Ina xo
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Love your choice of words. Love everything about it. Moves me. 🙂
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Thank you, Crispina. I have my moments. Always great when I move you! 🙂
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And you do. Sometimes. 🙂
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😉
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Oh wow.
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I’ll take that as a positive? 🙂
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Yes
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Ah Dale, ⚡️💥 you mush head!
I light a candle.
You toss tinsel.
We are the mush heads!
xoxoxo
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Ah yes, Resa. I am a mush head! 😉 🧚🏻♀️✨
Candle and tinsel and all things that glow
xoxoxo
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