icy decorations dot my window
creating a lacy pattern
ephemeral
delighting for its brevity
with one kiss of the sun
nothing left but a memory
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Words are art on paper, and for me they are the seeds of my soul.
Can’t melt away soon enough, I think.
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Well… being in Quebec, we are in the thick of it, as it were, so I might as well try and find some beauty…
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Very pretty words and picture.π
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Thank you, lovely Willow π§‘
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Beautiful icy photo. Fantastic poem. The sun’s kiss is death to so many things.
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Thank you, Tim. So glad you like! And yes, that sun’s kiss can be deadly.
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Here’s you a sunkissku just you:
Dawn woke with a chill
White ice covered frozen souls
Sun’s kiss fucks up frost
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Yours has so much more punch!
Day-um, you’re good!
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Ha!
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So beautifully poignant Dale. β€οΈ
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Thank you, lovely lady. It means much coming from you π
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Youβre writing is beautiful, cooking is spectacular, photography amazing. Thereβs nothing you canβt do! β€οΈ
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Aww shucks. What a lovely thing to say! Now… how to turn these three loves into something that pays the bills? Man, I would be ecstatic! π
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Do you have a cook book out there? Thereβs the Food Network looking for chefs with charismaβ¦ youβve got it lovely! β€οΈ
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I have a friend who has been pushing me to do one… and if you want to laugh, I have five videos out there π It was kind of a dream of mine, once upon a time… https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZshH190DRPA&t=39s
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Eeeee! Love that. FN here you come!
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Haha!
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Iβm serious! A cook book and TV. I often use your IG dishes as inspirationβ
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I love that you do. I shall keep on keeping on!
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By all means. You are seriously gifted!
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You are so generous. π
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Go for it , youβd be perfect. Love the video. π
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You truly are too sweet. I did five in total with my late husband. I dunno. I’m thinking I’ll try to set up something one day π
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I must find the others. Youβre a charming chef!
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They are all there π
Just look for my name in YouTube. πππ
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I definitely will. Canβt wait. π
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So true! Well-penned, Dale! π βοΈ
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Thank you, Eliza π π§‘
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Beautiful
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Thank you, Louise!
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Lovely poem.
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Thank you, Gigi!
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I loved those Jack Frost visits so beautifulΒ
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Thank you, Cheryl. Jack Frost leaves such pretty pictures.
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Beautiful lace work, both poetically and photographically βοΈ
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Thank you, lovely Kiki!
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Jack Frost left you a beautiful and temporary piece of art, enjoy it while you can
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That he did. I love how these pieces show up out of nowhere. So glad you enjoyed.
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What a lovely image and I love your poem. Great to see you, Dale.
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Hey Jilly! Lovely to see you here. And thank you. So glad you like π
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Good photo.
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Thanks
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Ephemeral beauty–beautifully said and photographed.
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Thank you, Merril. I never thought the photo would come out and when I saw it did….
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I understand. π
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Oh, Dale this is gorgeous and a wonderful poem to go with, too! So beautiful and elegant!!!!!!
Brrr…. snow’s finally here too! π xoxoxoxo
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Thank you, Marina. Love that you love this. Oh! At least yours won’t overstay its welcome! xoxoxo
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Well… it seems like a persistent little bugger! It snows and snows… and then snows again but it won’t stay on the ground! If it does, it’s just for a few hours and then, disappears! Funny snow! π xoxoxoxo
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I’m picturing this was taken on that brutal cold day a couple of days ago. That was cold that I’ve never experienced. But, beauty can always be found and ephemeral is a good word here.
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Actually, this was taken two days ago – right after those two brutal days (but still quite cold). I do love that word. It came to me after I published a version of this one elsewhere.
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Pretty photo and poem π
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Thank you, Laila. Much appreciated π
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What Jack Frost giveth the sun taketh away! What a beautiful lace window to have captured with your camera.
Ginger
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Indeed! And makes what he giveth all the more special. Thank you, Ginger.
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Did you put a hand print in the ice first before the sun took it away?
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No, I didn’t think to!
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Such beauty. So fleeting. I wonder what imprints we leave behindβ¦
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It is a fleeting beauty. And I do wonder that as well…
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I love the title and content of this poem, Dale. The photo is an interesting element serving as a great prompt. Well done.
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Thank you, John. I wasn’t sure about the title and now I’m almost tempted to keep it as a sort of series of various imprints…
I appreciate that you see this!
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Sounds like it would be a good series.
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I’ll see what I can do…
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Beautiful moment βοΈ
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Thank you, Val π
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This is so lovely! β€οΈ
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Thank you so much, Bridgette! π
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It’s good to see beauty in all things but especially from the inside on a chilly day. π
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I could not agree more. Though I have gone out two days in a row for 2+ hours each time. The sun makes such a difference. Today felt colder than yesterday though technically it is warmer. Today there is no sun.
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Hereβs hoping the sun returns soon.
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So… I go into the grocery store, clear skies; come out maybe fifteen minutes later? Car completely covered in snow, visibility is reduced… It’s far from over…
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Sheesh. Sorry bout that.
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It’s February 7. One can expect no less!
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A lovely poem, Dale!
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Thank you, Jan π
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Lovely, Dale.
I bought the photo at face value until I read the poem and realized it was the window frost. And the poem, excellent on its own, pairs beautifully with the art of the pic.
Nicely done. π
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Thank you, Bill.
I took it, thinking, it just won’t show and when I put it into official black and white (not that there was any real colour) I thought, hmmm… So I am much chuffed you think they pair well.
Merci mon ami π
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De rien. They do. π
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Dear Dale,
Lovely photo and a lovely verse to go with it. Write on. π
Shalom and lotsa poetic hugs,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Thank you for you kind words. They are much appreciated π
Shalom and lotsa non-ephemeral love,
Dale
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Well done, Dale! While I have fond memories of winters in northern NY, we did delight in the brevity of icy windows. These lines gave me a chill (no pun intended):
“with one kiss of the sun
nothing left but a memory”
Fantastic way to describe how quickly icy decorations disappear!
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Thank you, Marie.
I kinda like the patterns left by Jack Frost. It seems like they are few and far between, despite the cold.
Love that you enjoyed my efforts! Thank you!
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I really enjoyed your poem. I’m always pleased to meet new poets.
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Thank you, Roberta. I am rather new at this genre so I appreciate it.
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Oooh. How lovely, Dale. I like the beauty as well as the sense of magic. A fitting tribute to nature and the transcience of winter. β€
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Why thank you, Diana! What a lovely thing to say. I am truly chuffed! π
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I’m a gal who knows what she likes. Lol. I loved this.
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I love a gal who says what she likes π
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Here and gone but always blessed the same as if a million years had spent their time on that window. Which is the wonderful translation you have gifted us with this lesson in perspective, to which I say Brava!
Brava!
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B,
I think that is part of their beauty. That they don’t last. And I thank you for the brava! It warms the cockles of me ‘eart!
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Yes, it’s in the moment and that is what makes it so special.
To the brava!
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Agreed.
To the brava with a MWAH!
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BraMUAH!
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MWAH!
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MUAH!
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Beautiful words and photo. Winter beauty can be ephemeral.
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Thank you, Ally. I think that is part of its charm π
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I think I’ve said this somewhere before, but it’s the transience of something that lends it such beauty and moves us to awe
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I could not agree more. Those things that come and go make them more precious.
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YES!
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This is so beautiful, Dale. π
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Awww, thank you, Robin π
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Beautiful shot, Thunder.
Frost, a small but redeeming feature of winter, when one is inside! xoxo
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Thank you, Sorceress.
I was rather pleased it showed through! It is especially lovely from the inside xoxo
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xoxo
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xoxo
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